My Love System Is a Bit Strange

"Talk about my thoughts after reading it now" The novel should have given me a lot of advice at this point. Although the author has good writing skills and has his own ideas. But there are still some problems. One of the biggest problems with this novel is that it is too real. The protagonist's various forced actions, whether he is helping the drama department or admitting his mistakes to Qing Shui, cannot be said to be the protagonist's own thoughts, but the requirements of the (authoritative) teacher. After all, many things are like this in reality. The image of teachers created by the author is not good. Let's put it this way, the ethics of this kind of teacher are unqualified. People who use their own selfish desires to make others work hard for themselves (previous dreams). It looks a bit like An Yilun to me. In reality, there may be such teachers. It is inevitable that the drama department will join the drama department in the next plot, which is completely obvious. The author's plot has been seen through by readers, and it does not give readers a sense of guessing the next development of the plot. In other words, the suspense segments need to be set up to make people guess what will happen next, so as to increase readers' interest. This novel was pretty good before these plots that forced the protagonist appeared, and when I saw the protagonist joining the reading club, I also guessed how it might be handled next. And after the character of the teacher appeared and continued to promote the development of the protagonist, I felt that the novel had unsightly elements. As far as I'm concerned, it's very likely that I'll be thrown into the street. But this can only be said to be my personal opinion. The author also said that he will deal with the plot after joining the drama club well. Let's see how the author changes his fate in this situation~

Article 100! (X)? It's so embarrassing that the post is not included in this chapter. Ahem... The author has nearly 3 million words and is still level 2. He writes seriously when looking at the replies. Unlike some code-writing robots in some studios, he has never even seen a reply. Let's talk about it in sections: 1. This book feels very similar to the book "Become a Wasted House and Get a System" by Xianyu Landing. Although the eunuch has been there for two years... The protagonists are all fat houseboys who have turned into handsome guys with a system. However, the first thing that bothered me about this book was the "punishment: confiscation of the soul", oh yoyo, it scared me to death (yygq), but luckily it was changed later; 2. The teacher is okay , flat character, "at any cost", "everything for the glory of the drama club ttk", these two characteristics, the purpose is to promote the development of the plot, and they are gone; 3. To the parents and sister, the protagonist: "I have no affection", oh ~ I am not the protagonist, not an orphan. I don't know what this kind of person thinks of the family after rebirth. Has anyone had this experience? Come on, put the microphone in your mouth. Sister, the tsundere type sister is not to my taste, I like passive (bushi); 4. There are only two or three strategy goals in the main line, so there are not many characterizations of other characters, no problem, I can't remember so many names anyway; 5. Finally, the protagonist, to be honest, after the three-star acting skills were revealed, I really didn't expect this skill to be so... Powerful, and then Shimizu Jing I was shocked. Well, the genius girl was defeated by the wall. It was normal. Then the protagonist said, "No need." I'm numb (beep——) The author wrote it carefully, so I also commented carefully... It took me half an hour to type it, so don't delete it for me (well-behaved and honest. Jpg)

Very well written, support 🙂

Halfway through the movie, the plot was too blunt. I was constantly being pushed by a teacher, asking for help and bowing if you didn't agree. The protagonist is not a pet, so he has to have his own ideas and plans. He takes the initiative to create opportunities and so on. He is always led by others and cannot even refuse.

Let me personally point out the poisonous points First: Problems with the portrayal of Jun Xiaobori, the drama club's consultant teacher My original intention was to create an image of a female teacher who would do whatever it takes to achieve her goals. But I may have used too much force, causing this character to be disliked by many people. This is a lack of ability on my part. I accept all criticism here, except of course, insults. Second: The protagonist is too passive The protagonist is not passive. The first time he was passive was because of the order of his immediate boss, the consultant teacher of his club Every action after that is for his own benefit. What you think is aggrieved is just intentional Creating this illusion, in order to paralyze the school, causing the school to make wrong judgments and profit from it Third: The protagonist's attitude towards his parents and sister This is clearly explained in Chapter 79. I think no matter who it is, facing a family relationship that they have never had, they are often small-minded. Careful The protagonist is no exception. Because it is the first time he has family affection, he does not know that there is a problem with his attitude towards his parents and sister. It can be regarded as a small foreshadowing. After all, the sister is a very important role Fourth: System Punishment This is my setting So after Chapter 47, the system is almost made transparent by me... And the punishment mechanism will be completely abandoned after the end of the main plot Finally, thank you to those book friends who have read this. If you have any reasonable plot discussion or confusion, you can leave a message and I will answer it But please don't insult me.

Let me just say that the first fifty chapters are generally tasteless and it would be a pity to discard them. The first is the setting. The system's punishment and the male protagonist's malicious speculation about Yui's previous good intentions are disgusting. The female protagonist sees a person in need of help and helps. No matter what the reason is, you should at least be grateful. In the end, you want to eat a peach to express your love, but you are rejected and commit suicide. You feel that others are not good enough to you, but they still agree to your confession... What the hell? ? ? What's the obsession of the predecessor, which must be completed, why are you just playing with the light novel and cultivating immortals? The second is the characterization, whether it is the teacher or the members of the drama club, they are all disgusting. If the tone and positioning of the novel are like this, I have nothing to say, whoever likes it can read it. The third thing is the power of writing and plot shaping. What if we just rely on a system and a teacher that makes readers sick? Can't write anything else?

I have a hunch that this will be a one-woman story, with Shimizu-chan winning in the end. I feel like she will finally get into the protagonist's heart, because only Shimizu cannot be seen through by Kanbaru. Curiosity is the beginning of falling into the love trap.

In Chapter 46, the protagonist is forced to reconcile. I don't understand what the protagonist did wrong? Because of the indifferent attitude? Originally, it was just asking for help from the kind-hearted host, and it was enough to show normalcy. But just because of this, Qing Shuijing wants to slap the protagonist in the face in front of hundreds of people. This shows that he does not take people seriously and does not even have the most basic respect. Is the main character this person's nanny? It's not disgusting enough to be so spoiled. There is also this teacher who forces people to do things. He helps you out of love but not out of duty, just because your dream is like this. ? ? ? ? ?

A good Japanese love story is not complete, it has to be the whole domestic overseas students... If the Japanese female high school students come from the beautiful yearning for animation, then the domestic overseas students are too realistic... Tang Keke is not a very interesting thing...

Ah this

Why do some authors always arrange some dark history for the original owner when writing soul-traveling movies, which does not make any sense and can only show the original owner's stupidity, and the protagonist who was taken away from his body cannot show an outstanding character, and his character is still ordinary. Doesn't this look cool?

I think it's okay, there are still some poisonous points, but the rating shouldn't be as low as it should be. Although the ending with a single heroine is a bit unsettling, it is better than a mindless harem novel.

This novel can actually make me, a sister reader, hate my sister.

Emmmmm To be honest, the system suddenly disappeared and I didn't use it yet. I felt a bit stupid. There are plug-ins and I don't use them. Is it mature? Adults who have reached the age only have interests in their eyes. If they can live a better life, they must strive for it, right? Why did the plug-in suddenly disappear? Even the monthly tasks are gone? You've made me confused

It feels like the protagonist has been forced to do some things since he got the system. It feels like he is unwilling to do it owo

Crowdfunding for a slap-in-the-face chapter (Shen Mou versus Wu Mou)

Brothers, trust me, those who are good-looking, those who think they are not good-looking feel like they are slanderous and pick on me. As for the poisonous points, I personally feel there are basically none. I cannot rule out that some brothers are too young mentally and do not understand society.

Is this actually a single heroine? ? ? Don't subscribe impulsively in the future. Even if it's just a chapter, you still have to read the book reviews first…

I read through the guide again and clicked on the post and found out that I had read it before 😥 The author was able to write 1.2 Million words despite this achievement, it was really pure love. This book has too many failed settings, the system of forced punishment, the system influenced by the original owner, the male protagonist who has feelings for his family in just a few lines, and the soul penetration that I personally cannot accept.

It's very good to read, but some plots in the early stages have dissuaded many people. It gets better after about a hundred chapters. It's a good-looking but not famous book. It's a pity.

I just read the last chapter. It has a single female protagonist. I was looking forward to a harem... Disappointment.

This book will not end with a single heroine. . .

I don't know what others think, but I like it very much and am waiting for the new book.

Why does the male protagonist like Qing Shui? There are too few scenes together.

After finishing the poison resistance earlier, it feels really good to reach chapter 76. I suggest you stick with it if you can't stand it anymore.

I always thought the writing was a bit strange. When I address others, they always refer to girls, teenagers, etc. Did the author write romance novels before? Could it be that he is a pervert? . . .

In fact, when I saw the task of getting Yui to confess before the end of the third year of high school, I felt a bit broken. The system's sense of presence was low, but the completion of this main task was too slow and too difficult. If the setting was that the drama club that Yui joined at the beginning could still be solved with the help of acting, and then the system would guide the plot in the next step. This system would be considered as non-existent later on. It feels like the author himself hates the look of this system. In addition, the background of the protagonist before time travel was that of a model. This was probably just to make the protagonist lose weight reasonably. The system only gave the protagonist the ability to act. Other writing and other things were basically useless. It felt like it could be directly set to the protagonist who was an actor in his previous life and then traveled back through time. It looked a little confused and felt like he took off his pants and farted.

I looked at dozens of pictures and thought it was a harem, but when I saw the single female protagonist at the end and the system, I wanted to complain.

When did it start to get better? I jumped to see it, but I couldn't stand it.

No, I came here from QQ just to scold you, you are so short! ! ! ! !