Steampunk Factory in Monster World

I feel like the beginning is pretty good. As long as it doesn't collapse, it's a good book. Come on.

Is the author a woman or a child? Do you think you are dead and your house has been abandoned for 2 years, and then the place is still in such a mess? When you go back to your own home, you can still take out the money from the drawer, and the clothes at home are still stored well?

Very protagonist's temperament🤫

Travel back, return to the earth without demons, poison

I have a question: How many bullets does he have? Why is there no explanation?

It is said that in Western backgrounds, Du, Lin, Mei, and Luo are popular surnames, and there are ten and nine surnames, such as Duke, Linqi, Meilin, and Luoken. Wouldn't it be nice to have a Connor from the West?

Ah ah ah, I lost money on my investment.

It feels like it will take a long time, but this is too little.

In fact, the first 57 chapters can be divided into a prologue, and the main plot comes after chapter 58. The previous ones are the personal background or story background of the protagonist, so that the theme is more obvious, and the sudden change of the main plot after chapter 58 will not make people uncomfortable. Well written, keep up the good work.

Can you please stop stealing things in front of others? To be honest, I can tell you this kind of person once and for all, it feels very low. Moreover, it is possible for such a person to have a good relationship with someone for a while, but it is basically impossible to have a good relationship for a long time.

Passing by and taking a look

This. . . All the way through the level is relying on the pistol. . .

Do you still need to use a gun to pass the level? Gun soul?

This heroine is simply incomprehensible. Isn't it great that the reader doesn't feel anything at all? If you can't write about your feelings, it's better not to write at all

I feel like the things in the introduction don't match up with what's in the book, especially since I was attracted by the introduction.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river.

After Witch became popular, many people followed suit.

Cheng Xiao😍