Magical Detective Agency

I don't know if the author is still planning to write, but I still want to make some suggestions. I have read Chapter 25 of this book so far. It is obvious that the author has paid great attention to the world view and character setting. However, due to insufficient writing and ink, the article looks like an outline rather than a novel. I have been studying it for a while, but my knowledge is limited and I cannot summarize it, so I use the most intuitive form to express my feelings, hoping not to offend the author. This is Chapter 25: Maple Leaf City. A rewrite of the clip: There was a "plop" in my ears. Tangning turned around and saw Victoria retracting the hand that threw Lant, closing her eyes and remaining silent. Tang Ning frowned and wondered: "Do people in the magic world believe this?" "Participation is important." Victoria opened her eyes and winked at him. This reminded Tangning. Tang Ning took out a rand, drew pictures on it with her fingers, and threw it into the wishing well. He walked around behind the wishing pool, glanced at the crowd around him, sat down again, and touched the edge of the pool with his hand. Victoria came up curiously: "What are you doing?" She asked. "Now, we have to find a higher point to take a look." Tangning did not answer her words, but gave her a mysterious smile. "Hey, what are you doing?" Ignoring the girl's doubts, Tangning took a step forward, took her hand and turned around to leave. After a while, the two of them arrived five hundred meters away from the wishing pool. A magnificent Gothic building appeared in front of them. "Old government building? What are you doing here?" The girl recognized this place. Tang Ning still didn't answer. He pulled the girl up to the high steps and looked towards the wishing fountain. "What are you looking at?" Victoria also followed the example of the young people and looked hard towards the wishing fountain. "Hush, the show is about to begin." Tang Ning replied with a mysterious smile. Victoria looked forward in confusion. After a moment, she covered her mouth and let out a scream. "Someone jumped directly into the wishing well! Look, he imitated you and touched behind the wishing well." Tang Ning frowned and touched the knight's sword at her waist. He didn't answer and went straight down the stairs. "Let's go." "Eh?" "I've seen what I need to see. What other attractions are there next?" To put it simply, the novel written by the author has a story, but the details of the characters' movements, scenes, expressions, and interactions are insufficient. Appropriate consideration should be given to adding interest to the story. When I read it, I felt that this book had potential. The worldview and characters were very novel and interesting, and the two themes were well integrated. The character of the male protagonist is very interesting and can be very charming if written well. The earliest Paladins and Victoria have many points that can be explored and add color to the plot. It is really a pity that it is unfinished. After a few more years of practice, the author should be able to write very good articles.

There are really too few. I think it is best to start the book with more than 30 chapters, so that everyone can have a basic understanding.

Hehe~ Let me guess: ① At the beginning, the protagonist's initial living room is "No. 366", Which means that the place where the author has lived for a long time has an obvious house number, which feels like nonsense... ② Indicate the author when choosing a business for the first time. There is an Internet connection and low life experience ③The update time since the book was opened to the present can be seen: the author has plenty of time ④The single update from the end of August to the beginning of September and the double update from the end of July to the beginning of August. The time coincides with the start of school ⑤Detective Pikachu is released in mainland China on May 10, 2019 To sum up, I speculate that the author enrolled in 2019 and should be a freshman. The house number is 6, classroom On the second floor, I like to read detective and suspense novels, have watched the Harry Potter film and television series, and played Honor of Kings (it's not unfounded, look at the title of the five consecutive kills)... Okay, I can't make it up anymore, hehe~ Let me guess: First, the beginning

This genre is very niche, and the effort required is far beyond what an upgrading monster-killing article can match, so I don't really expect the author to write more than 600,000 words. It's not bad to be able to solve three or four cases, and the general world view has been established. It will be much easier to set up next time. Adjust your mentality. If you write the next book, I suggest you change it to a more mainstream plot. Reasoning can be used as a kind of adjustment during the journey. After all, the author still has to be right.

Unexpectedly, Brother Know-It-All died so early, and the possibility of fake death was ruled out. Could it be that the crime was committed by a gang? The murderer should not be the same person. If the murderer was multiple people, it would make sense, or the old professor was lying.

Author, I have given you two recommendation votes. Can you give me more? (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

My brother upstairs, I took the liberty of coming to see you. Don't mind, haha😄! (Note: Ranked among the top 10 new books in the fantasy category) The article has been collected, let's work together!

This book is good, although I have only read a few chapters, but it has not been updated in the past few days? Am I dying?

I've watched Supernatural Detective, Magical Detective for the first time, fattening up for slaughter

I have a feel for this chapter, but the design of Brother Know-It-All is a bit exaggerated. I simply suspect that they are connected with the big shot who can make the church compromise. Everyone was called here by the big shot in the name of entrusting an investigation. It is possible that they want to kill one of them. The others are bait or a cover-up, used to cover up the motives and disguise their deaths as infighting. There must be an insider here who is provoking trouble. I am now suspicious of Brother Know-All.

This novel has the potential to be made into a film and television series.

There are dozens of books in my book list, but none of them are systematic. I have hated this kind of setting since the publication of the system literature. It's a pity that the author's writing style is good, but I will not give up the principle. The system is a piece of shit to me. In good books, adding a system is like shit. I hope the system style will become outdated soon!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

It's a nice book, why is it a eunuch?

I'm a eunuch, I almost invested, but luckily I was able to stabilize myself.

After reading the reviews, I became interested in this book

The cover is The Bizarre Adventure of Van Helsing 😄

This Ironwood Town is a bit exciting. It reminds me of Arkham Asylum. It's not a Batman comic, but a Lovecraft novel. The real horror is not that the murderer is hiding around you, but that you are surrounded by murderers.

Can there be no pig teammates around the protagonist? At least that is what this woman is doing now, or in terms of IQ. The concept of the magical world should be mysterious and scary. Please don't use this woman to completely subvert our concept.