Demon Codex

It was quite fun to write, at least it wasn't tiring to watch, but there is a problem. Each part you wrote is too independent. The previous focus was on Hughes, but suddenly it became the main description of Thalia. It feels like the protagonist has been changed. The black magic incident in the middle is too long. It looks like an independent story, a fragment of history rather than a branch line. It seems that the main line is not closely connected. I thought the main plot at the beginning was that Hughes completed the second half of the Demonic Scripture through his travels in the world. But now it feels more like a travelogue, writing wherever he goes, and the rhythm is not obvious.

It feels like there are so few people and it's so deserted. Is the author's main position the starting point, or is it on other novel apps? Anyway, in my opinion, this is a good work. Although it is still relatively deserted, please don't give up on this novel easily because of this, and don't give up on your interests and hobbies. (Don't forget your original intention, and you will always succeed) This is the school motto of my college days, and it has benefited me a lot so far. Although the occasion may not be very suitable, I still feel that I want to give this sentence to you, come on! I wish your writing skills will get better and better, and your novels will become more and more popular. (Congratulations from a reader)

It's a very interesting book. I've only read thirty or forty chapters, and I can't count the number of times I've used allusions to satirize and criticize Western characters.

It is a well-written fantasy, but please forgive me for pointing out a few personal opinions. First, the protagonist setting is not good, and it is not immersive or interesting enough. Second, the protagonist suddenly changes, which is a taboo in writing. Third, the writing style is not deep enough for immature characters. Many old writers have this problem. It doesn't matter. The key is that the plot is not attractive enough. . . I don't know what to do about this. Anyway, I see that the author wrote very seriously in the previous parts, and he wrote so much. It's really not easy.

Aren't the devils from the abyss? The devil is from hell, right?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งGet fatter

How to say it? Come on! Sao Nian, I am optimistic about you (´⊙ω⊙`)✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

It's well written. I put in the effort and really wanted to write fantasy well.

What is the name of the second book?

So where can I read the second book and what is it called?