Earth Escape Ninja from the Land of Thunder

A superficial opinion, it is best not to have obvious bugs. I saw that Uchiha's corpse had his eyes stolen, this kind of thing about taking credit, stealing credit, and grabbing credit on the battlefield. This bug is too big. If a political system or a government takes credit at will, it is too corrupt and is not far from destruction. The theme of the entire Naruto series is still a hot-blooded manga, so it's best not to have this kind of bug appear.

If you write about the protagonist of the Kingdom of Thunder, don't write more articles about Konoha. Although Naruto is based on Konoha, if you write about the protagonist of the Kingdom of Thunder, focus on the Kingdom of Thunder as the protagonist. Don't make a fuss about Konoha!

Without cheating on the protagonist, I really can't stand it. It has no highlights and is mediocre. I don't know how to cut into it. Let's not talk about it. He immediately becomes stronger every second. At least there must be a direction to become stronger, right? The stewed pig's trotters are so written, it feels a bit like a passer-by.

The protagonist can pick up the Devil Commander and say to Ben, come and compete with me.

The most annoying thought when writing about Naruto became that of a child

Has anyone ever thought about using Earth Escape as Wood Escape? Earth Escape - Thousands of Hands

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง(◎｀ω´) people (´ω｀*)

The writing of these three magatama is too weak. In a one-on-one situation, someone with the Sharingan can still get his or her back. I'm afraid he's not a fake Uchiha. Then Sasuke opened three magatama and hacked to death a hundred wandering ninjas, maybe his corpses would have been cold.

You wrote this book with your mouth, right? . . It looked okay at first. Everything I read later is full of typos. He didn't even type a name. The speech is not divided into paragraphs. I groove.

There are too many Orochimaru characters, and the plot is a bit stiff

What do you mean, author? The writing was good in the beginning, but it turned out like this later. I paid to read the book, and you want to read this to me? With a negative attitude, you can't deal with things like this when you are busy. It would be better if you stopped updating!