Game of Thrones: Starting with a Lord's Troop-Raising System

The author is great. To be honest, most of the readers are cloud readers. We don't care about the plot. What we like is the magical world. Regarding the plot of the original work, I really don't like reading it and I can't understand it. The name alone makes me confused. I hope the author can greatly reduce the plot of the original work and just write it in one or two strokes.

There are problems with the settings, and there are many similar bugs. For example, why don't you go to a place like a vault, sneak in and recharge all the money? At that time, you can let others search you to prove that you did not steal the money. For another example, if the male protagonist has a mount, why does he still need to attack head-on? Why don't you get on your mount and go to the enemy's weak point (such as the granary, the base camp, the weak point of the defense line, etc.) And summon thousands of people. Whoever can beat this will collapse. This is the development route that players will consider. But why don't you dare to write like this? If you write like this, the daily routine of 20,000 words and then 80,000 words will be over, and the book will be finished before the paid chapters are reached. Because the more money you have, the more soldiers you can summon. Then he ran to the vicinity of the Iron Bank and instantly summoned a million troops to attack the Iron Bank. After getting the money, he summoned them again. After writing like this, it collapsed in the later stages, and it collapsed faster and faster. Then the only way out is to add restrictions. The restrictions imposed by the author include the inability to use the system under the attention of the old god (the crow, the lord of the forest), and the summoned troops must have corresponding food to feed them, so they are forced to farm. This is all nonsense, and I will definitely not be able to write about it in the future. There are so many ways to deal with it that I can think of, and I can't fill the hole completely. Then the author suddenly started to add new restrictions (for example, the dragon that was fortunately summoned ran away, or new enemies appeared), which became an endless loop. I suggest the author to read the hegemony and farming articles written by great masters. In fact, there are many corresponding routines. For example, it is common that the system soldiers summoned by the male protagonist have people online. Isn't this routine used in many games? With the development of the territory (such as population growth, economic development), the upper line can be increased, which forces you to farm to develop the territory. For another example, money in real life cannot be used to directly summon soldiers, and system currency must be used. However, the source of system currency is limited, and there is a limit on the amount that can be directly exchanged with real money. You can also obtain a certain amount of system currency by completing tasks, and the progress of territory development can unlock corresponding military units. There are many classic routines like this, which can lead to the finale smoothly. The author just didn't bother to check. He also played the emotional card, published a leaflet about his poor grades, and persisted in writing it. I suggest the author give up this book and start a new book, or write an ending, an apology or something, and start a new book. In short, this book is finished. The author's writing style is actually very smooth, but there are many problems in setting and logic. Open a new book, and then write a good outline before writing, do more research, and look up information.

The author, please suggest me to write less original storyboards? I just want to see what the protagonist does. I believe many readers think so. Also, the most important point is that the book is very good and I like it very much. I hope the author can stick to it and I will definitely order it when it is on the shelves. If you write well, I can reward you with about 10,000 starting points. I will build a memorial arch here.

If the heroine is a dragon mother, I will run away. She was fucked by her brother in various ways when she was a child. Later, he was fucked by Ma Wang again. I can accept non-virgin masters. But I can't accept breeding pigs. And I've actually seen it.

Regarding the choice of hostess. This book is generally in line with my taste, and I won't pick any other issues. As for praise, as a reader, if I don't mention the problem, it's the greatest affirmation 😁. First of all, this is a Game of Thrones fan fiction, and fan fiction is basically about changing something, otherwise how can you make up for some of the regrets of the original work or TV show. The author said that if the young butler is resurrected and cannot grow into a heroine, then he will pass. There are three heroine candidates in my mind: First, Daenerys. There is no doubt that she is too popular, but based on the protagonist's appearance time, she has already been with a man. The second is Sansa Stark, who was raised by a noble and is very silly and naive, but she does have potential when she grows up, and her experience is something that a large number of viewers want to change. The third is Lyanna. Although she is young as the ruler of Bear Island, she acted domineeringly on TV, and her ending is also regrettable. Rather than helping Erya, who is already in trouble, I think it would be better to take more care of Little Bear Girl. Although I like Erya a little more after watching TV, I really have no feelings for Erya after reading the previous chapters. I can't imagine what it would be like to force her into the position of mistress. . . There seems to be a lot to talk about. I really can't help but want to say a few words when I see a fan I like. Author, please write ✊

I think first-level soldiers are enough. In ancient times, soldiers who were not afraid of death could definitely fight in large numbers. If the opponent died 30% of the time, they would collapse. The author didn't think that the enemy was not afraid of death, right?

I'm not saying that, author, you made the cheats too perverted, but you didn't seem to notice it yourself. You thought that the protagonist was not strong enough. When the conquerors conquered a few dragons and conquered the entire continent, they still directly became kings. The points the protagonist gets after taking that city can even produce 20,000 heavy cavalry! ! ! Do you know what 20,000 heavy cavalry means? You can easily sweep across the entire northern border, and you are also qualified to have a decisive battle with the southern lords' coalition forces. Author, if you plan to make the protagonist abide by the rules of this world, then reduce the number of cheats to one-tenth. Then the protagonist must still abide by the rules of this world. Now the protagonist is strong enough to sweep the entire continent. Don't look too high on this low-magic medieval society.

I hope there is a limit on the number of explosive soldiers, otherwise they will be invincible in the early stage. After all, you only need money to explode. The level limits how many soldiers you can have, such as 500 at level 1, 1,000 at level 2, and so on. Otherwise, it can be bulldozed in the early stage without brainstorming. After all, when the power has developed to a certain stage, money is not an issue. If you have money, you can blow up 1 million, 5 million, or even 10 million. So it is recommended to have a quantity limit. Otherwise, how will you write it later? Is it like other novels about bombing soldiers, finding various reasons to keep money and use it, and not to blow up soldiers if you have money? I also find various reasons. It is also recommended that not all of them be system soldiers. Loyalty can be guaranteed by having more than 1/5 of an army, half is fine. In this way, even if there are not many system soldiers, even if there are only a few thousand system soldiers, you can guarantee an army of tens of thousands or even 100,000, and loyalty is guaranteed. Of course, your own guard must be better than all system soldiers.

Don't fight to destroy the Iron Throne and build an empire directly. The kingdom is out of date. Centralization of power makes the golden dragon chair more popular. The Iron Throne is too low and too old-fashioned. After all, you are a soldier. You don't have to compromise with the nobles. Please be the first emperor and wipe out the world. The king is too low-level

The author simply doesn't know what violent soldiers are, and does not reflect the essence of violent soldiers at all. He always follows the rules when doing things. Doesn't he know that rules are the means to restrain the promotion of lower-level people, and violent soldiers plunder and plunder are the way to dominate.