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The overall completeness is very good, and the conflict description in the article is close to the state of a published book. As long as it is well written, there is no guarantee that this book will be a god, but it should not be difficult to stabilize it.

I think this needs to be explained and promoted at the top of the page, otherwise I really can't understand it. If I hadn't happened to see it, I wouldn't have known what the author wanted to do. Besides this, I still have another question, why do other people have n lives, but the protagonist only has one?

There is a strong sense of conflict and the characters are well established It's very fascinating to watch Looking forward to the follow-up development But the update is very urgent, so I have to cultivate it first Full order, the author must not cut it Stay steady

There are a total of seven people in the group. Now is it necessary to explore the relationships between the seven people before it is possible to rescue Najung? After all seven people have figured it out, the evildoers will be killed and the cooperative ones will stay. What should we say next? Or is it that we can't figure it out in a short time and can we rescue Na Jung in the finale? (Please don't do this... The long main line of saving a person from the beginning to the finale is unbearable... When I watched "Duan Nao", the original heroine became a background board. She was only rescued near the finale. After she came out, she had no role. The character's personality and ability development were almost zero. There is no sense of existence for the protagonist's partner, so I couldn't understand why the male protagonist fell in love with her at first sight, risked his life and went through so many hardships to save her, without any emotional integration, and finally ended up not being together for her sake... The game experience is obviously good, and the emotional intelligence of the game participants is online, but the love line has a serious plastic texture)

The mystery of the opening story should be slowly revealed in the next update, so we are starting to fill in the details of the upcoming storyline. If you have ideas, you can sign up! Format: name + origin + character + ability. If Ah Fei thinks it is suitable, he will add it to the book, or it may be modified appropriately to suit the storyline. As a book that has been pushed for three days and the total collection has not exceeded 300, Ah Fei still wanted to build a supplementary building on a whim, although it might be an empty building by then, hahaha! The main reason is to add some popularity to the book circle. After all, in the new book period, chapter reviews, comments and recommendation votes are the biggest motivations for the authors! After all, it is a small fan who has read it once, and it is also on the Liangmen channel, so it is not without psychological preparation for collecting Liang. It is not like the first book, where I read the daily data more than ten times a day. But Ah Fei still reads every comment you make as seriously as the first time. Every time he sees a blue sign popping up at the top of his phone (indicating that someone has commented), he is still surprised (provided you don't scold me hahaha). So, you can also feed Zhang Shuo more, so that Ah Fei will be more motivated!

Do you like someone who borrows money from you every day? Or do you like someone who scolds you every day? I still like someone who messes with your things. In the end, he committed suicide and asked the protagonist to find a way to resurrect him (probably). The configuration of the heroine in Chapter 2 is really unpleasant. Quietly is not a curse. I feel that several of the heroine's advantages are overshadowed by the shortcomings mentioned above.

I bet you can 🔥 As long as you dare to write, I dare to chase you! I hope (please~) not to be a eunuch! ! !

It's almost New Year's Eve. Thank you to the author for the 20th New Year's update. Although he hasn't updated it yet, maybe he forgot about it, but thank you in advance. It's impossible for him not to add updates. As long as he reminds me repeatedly, he will always add updates.

Put some fishing pictures, they are rather sloppy, and they will run away if they lose the picture The male protagonist The female protagonist touched short hair and super short hair

I want to knock against this couple! ! ! I like it so much! Ahhhhh Zhuang Xie, such a cold person, subconsciously thought of this, he was really shocked! ! Like! ! !

If I can maintain my standard, I will be able to become at least a level four writer after reading this book.

The plot is compact and the descriptions are very graphic. Fear comes from the unknown, and sometimes the unexpected can be scary. It's amazing! The various abilities written in the article remind me of Jiang Cao's comic "Chasing Time", but they are not the same. If we talk about suspense, "Neighbors", also written by Jiang Cao, is also very good. (I seem to have gone astray) Generally speaking, it looks good. PS: It looks like they are playing a game, but in fact they have been being played by the game.

I tipped you 15 yuan, please add an update. Students, don't make a lot of money. I tip a small game that makes money in exams, the kind that makes money by watching advertisements.

If you don't update it, I'll smash the windows of your house.

The plot arrangement is not suitable for online novels. The author might as well submit it to a magazine or a physical book.

Robbery, save the manuscript and hand it over! ! ! Otherwise, this ticket will be lost.

Over time, I felt like I was going to collapse. One move changed not only myself, but everything around me.

I'm sorry, not because it doesn't look good, but because it's really a bit of a headache based on my IQ. Depend on

It's so well written, it makes me feel chilly in the office!

This book is very nice. But I guess the author had a hard time giving birth. After all, reading the timeline of this book requires using your brain, and writing a book is even more difficult. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs