Konoha Soryu

The protagonist is going to research the advanced moves of the Six Styles. They are like the Six King Spears, which do a lot of damage.

The author is great, does he have a female protagonist?

It's very interesting. This is the first book I've read using Qidian. Com that I've paid to watch from the time I signed the contract until now. Author, this way you can insist on finishing this book.

It's pretty good. It doesn't look too toxic. The only thing that feels a little bit toxic is that I have some ambiguities with several young ladies. As someone who likes to watch movies without or with only one female protagonist, this is really uncomfortable to watch.

Naruto Hinata, please lock me up, thank you

The protagonist should go join a cult with Hidan 🤫

What about the author? There is a small bug Chapter 26. It takes ten minutes to resolve the battle by beating ten ordinary people. It was changed to ten seconds. Otherwise, obsessive-compulsive disorder looks awkward

You won't die anyway, so why can't you force the last few doors to open? In the original work, Xiao Li was not forced to open the door, but his body couldn't bear it. Judging from the protagonist you wrote, he was beaten into a dog, and it was still an inexplicable four-door.

It's better not to use the Death Door for the time being. Apart from the Death Door, is there anything else that can improve the protagonist's strength? It's practical and not exaggerated. It's best to make the Seven Doors persist until the squad is resurrected without forcing it. It's best to wait until Otsutsuki is defeated before using the Death Door. I feel that the protagonist is still worse at opening the Seven Doors now than the two in the later stage. What do you think, author?

It is suggested that the author can go back to the previous chapters when he has time, and slightly modify the points that many people complained about, and revise some of the settings that are not very consistent with the original work. It's just a good idea, don't worry about rework.

Five chapters a day is too awesome, please support me. I've seen a lot of things saying that the timeline is wrong, but it doesn't have a big impact on me anyway. After all, I haven't read the original work, and TV only saw the defection of the second pillar 🤓

The military parade is too weird. Besides, isn't the Chunin Exam a military parade in disguise? It's simply unnecessary🤔

Thank you friends for your support in the comment area. The last book with more than 300,000 words only had three robot comments. Now I have only posted so many comments. I want to cry. Thank you. They are all refined. I will not reply to them one by one. Mumada 🌹🌹🌹 Also, I am a novice, so I cannot guarantee that there are no omissions or mistakes, but what I can do is write with my heart... I have written more than 300,000 words for an unsigned Seventy Collection. If I sign this book, I will never give it up! That's it, thank you all again!

Again, Pig's Knuckle was not dead in its previous life. Traveling through time does not mean that you have to die before you can travel through time. If you have read too many books, you will probably see the world change drastically when you wake up... Just like in time travel novels, you have to say that time travel is unreasonable. This is the basic setting, and there is nothing controversial about it.

People who watch some scenes are so embarrassed that they get cancer.

Come on, it seems to be okay overall so far. There are many comments about this and that. Internet novels, especially fan fiction, inevitably have some uncomfortable aspects, but do they really need to be changed? It feels good to change this point. Will subsequent changes cause new problems? I flipped through the last book, and I can see that the author is obviously making progress. Clear common sense errors can be corrected, and plot cheats can be discussed, but whether to correct them or not needs to be judged based on the outline. Internet novels are enjoyable texts. If they are enjoyable enough for readers to read reasonably, they will not be read by anyone. No matter how high the novel is, it is more advanced. Let's do it step by step.

The writing is okay, but now I can't even watch it if the main character is of Uchiha blood.

I think this book is okay. I've been reading it for three years and it's actually quite good. It's just that you guys are too tricky and make a big fuss out of every little problem.

The book is not bad, and the poisonous points are not bad. The more serious problem is the battle plot. The author doesn't know whether it's just the writing style, or whether it is intentional. Every time there is a battle, there must be a lot of description of the environment.

The opening of the Eight Gate Dunjia also requires chakra, right? Metkai and Xiao Li both have chakra, so why is the protagonist a chakra insulator? Doesn't that mean he can't even tread water? They just have less chakra or low chakra control and cannot use ninjutsu.

What a disgusting fan value setting. I just watched it and I can't even say a word. I still have votes.

I just read Chapter 175. The protagonist is so reckless and kills one by one. Isn't the author really afraid that the story will collapse later?

I would like to say sorry to my brothers, and thank you for your corrections from Daiji. Although I will check every time before posting, there will still be typos. Sometimes I will correct them when I see a friend's chapter, but I did not look back at the previous chapters, and I missed many typos. Acknowledge the blame first, bow and apologize. I will read all the chapters again in the near future and find out the typos and correct them. Because the previous VIP chapter was locked, I could only find the typos and correct them together. Say sorry to my brothers again, this is my fault

I appreciate you, the author, listening to readers' opinions.

Anyway, I don't like three generations of father and son. The son brings the pig deer butterfly, and the daughter-in-law brings the sun dog oil. Anyway, I want the Hokage to be passed down from generation to generation like the emperor Konohamaru doesn't hate it because the voice actor is Pikachu Chowba Mitsuhiko, but I don't like it either If he is strong and capable, then I don't think so. They don't avoid relatives when they are worthy But look at their abilities To put it bluntly, one is reduced to a unit of measurement. The other is that besides good looks, what else is there? 😏 The looks are really good and the fragrance is really good

There were a lot of questions from some friends in the comment area. I deleted some of them that were too harsh, but I kept most of them. What many friends said made sense! The author also said that it is absolutely impossible to say that there are no omissions, and I dare not say that it is completely reasonable, but what can be guaranteed is that we will actively absorb everyone's opinions and make corrections. The following are the solutions and replies to several friends' questions, so I won't waste a single chapter: First, a friend in the book review area said that the protagonist's past life experience is inconsistent with his current life performance. Why would he be afraid of danger after experiencing suicide? I thought about it carefully and found that it is indeed correct. I didn't even notice such an obvious problem. I really shouldn't have. I'd like to apologize. It has been changed now. Second, this chapter talks about a small issue about Anbu mentioned by a friend. I don't know which tabloid the author saw said that Anbu were all Jonin and were posted without confirmation, but the official has never said this. I checked the information at night and saw the speculation about Itachi joining the Anbu timeline. Itachi was indeed an Anbu who joined the Anbu during the chunin period. I was wrong! I changed the original text to chunin as the lower limit of ANBU. I think that as a unit directly under the Hokage, there should be no genin... Third, a friend questioned the recent plot, because he thought it was unreasonable for Shiranui Daigo not to choose to kill these robbers. I will paste his reply here, and also a reply to all my friends: Sorry, I don't quite agree with your statement. First of all, Naruto is indeed not an anime, but a shounen manga! I personally think that people with normal views would not think that people who rob must die... Of course, in the author's opinion, these people's behavior is completely wrong, and even if they are killed, they are not worthy of pity. In the world of Naruto, there are definitely people who will kill them directly, but it depends on each person's personality. In my opinion, there is a lot of darkness in the world of Naruto, but the theme of Naruto is still blood, friendship, etc.! I won't write too many dark places in detail in this article, I hope the overall tone is lighter. In Konoha, I believe that except for rebellious ninjas, more than 90% of the Konoha jounin named in the original book will not directly kill people! In addition, the reason I added is not only that I am worried that the body will be difficult to dispose of, but also that it may cause panic among ordinary people in the caravan. This is very important. I was brought into the caravan from the perspective of an ordinary person. To use what Hinata Hikaru said in the original work, the only people who know their identities are bandits and people from the caravan, so it is impossible to kill them together... This is my reason, I hope you will be satisfied. ps: At the end, thank you all again for your comments, and thank you to the friends who can see this. Some book friends say that the author is very humble. The author is indeed very humble. After all, the book he writes hopes to achieve results. If it is to be read by readers, it cannot be just for self-pleasure. I think that the current unsigned new book with 60,000 words has already received more than 700 yuan and invested more than 200 yuan. This data is not bad. I think I am quite lucky! Also, I repeat once again, the author is just a mortal, and it is impossible for a mortal to make mistakes. I hope everyone can understand me. What I can do is to modify it while recognizing the opinions of book friends, and give reasons if I don't approve. That's it.

Since there is a dragon character in the protagonist's title, there should be moves related to dragons. You can try Goku's Dragon Fist in Dragon Ball, improve it, and adapt it to the Naruto world as a signature move. After opening the sixth gate of the Eight Gates of Dunjia, the chakra green dragon is shot out, passing through the enemy's body, and then entangling the enemy. Finally, the rich chakra explodes, which is quite good 😁! The Chakra Blue Dragon of the seventh gate, the Chakra Red Dragon of the eighth gate! According to the growth rate of the protagonist, generally the sixth gate can be opened to cope with the Third Ninja War. It is estimated that the seventh gate will only need to be opened for the Nine-Tails Rebellion and Pain's Invasion! Or it would be good to improve Konoha Genin Chen Baojun and Teacher Chen's unique move Konoha Dragon God!

Chapter 199: Killing Danzo directly felt too deliberate! Just like Shi Lezhi suddenly

If your other settings are more poisonous, I'll tolerate it. It's really annoying if you forcefully suppress the main character's combat power. The seven gates and the sage mode say that you may not be able to beat the Eight-Tails. The seven gates already have the strength of heaven and add a sage mode. How can you change it? Even Kirabi may not be able to beat the heaven. At most, you have learned the sage mode and you are still a loser.

It's quite toxic in the early stage, but it's fine if you don't think too much about it. In the middle stage, it's okay to write, but gradually it loses some of its combat power.