The Hunter's Code

There are too many female characters. The women around them are all well-intentioned and all are loli ladies. The men are all malicious, either lustful or sinister. This kind of writing may have been popular a few years ago, but no one likes it anymore. I hope the author can create more outstanding male supporting characters.

The plot before becoming a professional is very interesting and worth recommending. But after becoming a professional, why did he suddenly fall into routines? Especially the first stage of the trial, just bragging... Forcibly creating some conflicts to show off and slap the protagonist in the face. Personally, I don't quite understand why I didn't continue my previous writing style and suddenly went into a routine. Unfortunately, I didn't see it on the shelves, so I gave it up.

The previous processing was too poor. The protagonist traveled through time and did not inherit the memory. This is actually something that can enhance the suspense and horror atmosphere. However, your plot design makes the protagonist without memory very rigid in the way of obtaining information. Whether it is the diary or the subsequent conversations with the supporting characters, it is obvious that you behave as if you have amnesia. But I just can't see the feeling of losing your memory, which makes some people think that it is a poisonous point that the protagonist does not inherit the memory. In fact, without memory, it is better to write an RPG exploration feeling. The kind of inheriting the memory or simply being reborn has the feeling of watching the guide first and then following the plot, which is very boring, but the premise is that the early stage is handled well. Having no memory could have been an advantage, but the previous part was written as a disadvantage, and there was a lot of nonsense. Some known clues clearly made the readers aware of what was going on in one second. The protagonist also had to go through a lot of repetitive mental activities and then slowly "deduced" it. The plot processing was really stiff.

I'm very surprised why hunters don't have tracking skills. Isn't this necessary? It's only available to trainee hunters.

The writing is good and the plot is good, but it was so frustrating to watch. The protagonist will always face someone who is one level stronger than him and impossible to defeat...

This book is the kind of book that becomes more and more amazing the more I read it. It has the potential to become a god, if I had read it a few years earlier.

I didn't have any money, so I skipped reading it. To be honest, I think the plot and characters are of sufficient quality, at least for online novels. I think purely in terms of plot outline, this book is not inferior to Mystery, Ember, and Red Patrol. Of course, there is a reason why they are the first. First, I think the author's writing style in this book is lacking. Maybe it's because he has never written a long novel before, so a lot of foreshadowing is buried emmmm. If readers don't think it's foreshadowing and abandon the book, then what's the point of burying it, so the foreshadowing can't be buried too deep or too shallow. For example, Destiny, without reading the comments, I wouldn't have known that the protagonist might not be destiny but misfortune. Secondly, the author is not attentive to non-plot descriptions. This is a poisonous point for readers who have not yet seen the excitement of the plot. They think the logic of the book is unreasonable. In fact, it is just that the author did not spend enough energy to write. For the author, the author may have thought of hundreds of chapters, but readers can only see a few pictures. Therefore, the author also needs to write the small plot completely, such as how to deal with the beginning and end of the person who brought the protagonist back and the young master who was killed Third, it is the rhythm. The author writes the climax very well, but the foreshadowing before the climax is very emmm. He also writes the big climax very well, but there may only be one or two in one volume. It also needs more interesting descriptions of daily life, otherwise it will not be friendly to follow-up reading. Fourth, the protagonist's personality is too passive. The protagonist is not a genius but an ordinary person, so the previous description is very natural. After all, online articles are fast food, and establishing a character is the simplest and most direct way to retain people who are looking for books. Overall, it is very good. I plan to order it all when my salary comes down. I suggest that after the third volume, you can ask Chi Jian to recommend the book. This book deserves better results. At least it deserves a boutique

The plot is quite attractive, I hope there will be more updates

How poisonous! They said they wanted to liquidate the nobles, but the Yuan family didn't do it, and the Song family let it go just because of a woman. How could they be raising the banner of justice?

It's such a pity. This book is pretty good, but too many people can't accept the plot of being killed by Gu Xintong in the early stage. In fact, it is particularly burning in the later stage, which is very good 🥺. And the author puts this book under the fantasy category, so it is difficult to gain exposure. If it had been placed under fantasy or science fiction, the score would have been better. If I hadn't been in a huge book shortage, I would never have clicked into the fantasy category and discovered this novel.