
I Have a Sword Fairy Lady
我有一个剑仙娘子
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There Are Hundreds of Herbs, a Gentleman Likes to Be Brave, I Want Them All
There are gangsters and gentlemen who are like quarrels and discussions, like grinding. The peach blossoms shine brightly, and my heart loves them. The white horse is bright and bright, the southern mountain is quiet, and the disease is called love. This book collects the online articles that the author has read recently, whether good or bad. What matters is not the rating, but the feeling after reading. The book list also has single female protagonists, as well as multiple female protagonists.
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… The purpose of creating a book list is to hope that you can recommend a few novels to me so that everyone can share the novels together. If you are interested in this way, please recommend some books. Good people will have a safe life! (Don't be a slap in the face with a brainless pretense! Don't be an urban stallion!) At the same time, I hope it can provide some help to my favorite authors or books... Book shortage, book shortage, it's hard to endure! ! ! ! …………………………………………… Pikachu st
Pigs Planting Grass (Please Pay Attention to Collect)
The subject matter is novel and the writing is good. Zhuzhu himself only dares to add after reading it. 😘😘 I hope you all like it
[Personal Treasures] Niche Book List
Basically, they are all books that a single author is pursuing. There are quite a lot of categories involved, and the taste is quite mixed. I also hope to leave a good impression. If you are interested, please like it. If you have any suggestions, you can comment and discuss (∩՞ټ՞∩) Meow~~ [The third dimension is Yang, stop updating]
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This book only collects stories about multiple heroines and harems. Occasionally, there will be a few very good romance novels about single heroines mixed in. Try to make it possible for readers in this field to solve the book shortage in one stop. —— ♞This book will be rated based on the overall, heroine, romance, writing, plot, characters, and logic. ♞Some of the eunuch books are really good-looking, so I will comment below the recommendations, so please be careful when entering them. ♞I would
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Recommend some books that you have been reading recently
An Ordinary Book List
As the title says, I am just sorting out the books I have read, hoping to find someone with similar tastes to me to exchange experiences. PS1, the book list is updated from time to time. PS2, please collect it. You don't have to care about PS3 and PS2. PS4 and PS3 are fake.
Bright Bookshelf
Books that stand out on my bookshelf
Favorite Book List
As a bookworm of 10 years, I can't go wrong with my recommendation!
Fairy Tales, Fantasy, Relaxed, Casual and Funny
They are just some very relaxing and funny books. Because I read novels just to relax, so there are basically no depressing articles. Most of them are invincible, pseudo-invincible and the like, which look more relaxed and enjoyable! Also, there are basically no fan fiction or time travel novels in this book list, because I always think it will look awkward (・᷄ὢ・᷅)
Chance Encounter - Book List!
Wow, I met you by chance. This is the list of books you have been searching for. Everyone has experienced the pain of finding books. The most beautiful thing is to come across a book you like. This feeling is amazing just thinking about it, I hope you can come across your book in my book list. Come on! It's down there, waiting for your little red heart.
Moyu Liyuan Pavilion
Time gives us experience, reading gives us knowledge
Donor, Please Give Me a Copy of the Book List! I Have Been Hungry for Several Days //
A list of books that can be given to the book-hungry people as food and fodder for the book-hungry people. After years of vicious eye appraisal, Shu Huang Liang Cao has already selected some books in his mind that are suitable for the general public who are in a book shortage.
Back up My Novel
Backup
Personally, the Books I Can Read at the Moment
Cool, cool, no books to read, please recommend.
A Novel That Can at Least Have a 100-Word Review
Just think of it as a writing practice and write down the various novels that you have read recently.
It's Difficult to Name
La la la, only the books I have read will be added. I have a high tolerance for novels. Generally speaking, the advantages and features are mentioned, but it is only based on personal experience.
Recommended by Bookworms of Ten Years, a Good Book Worth Reading
Seeking attention and collection Seeking attention and collection Seeking attention and collection I will collect some classic old books that are worth reading. For new books, I will read them first before adding them. If you want to recommend yourself, please leave a message in the comment area. Please ensure that the updates are stable. After reading them, they will be added according to the situation. PS: I have already tried the poison on myself, so you can rest assured that at least the po
Reading Littered with Books in the Cabinet
Littered books
Looks More Relaxed, Right?
No
Where the Heart Is
It doesn't matter about the heroine, but she doesn't like stock trading, so she can't love her I like imaginative things, various props, creatures, etc. Like online game novels Like to be more relaxed ps: It's amazing, "kind🐴" is actually a blocked word
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I started reading dozens of chapters of this book last year and stopped reading it. Then I suddenly saw it a few days ago and read it all in one go. I have a lot of thoughts. Since the author said there will be a follow-up, I still want to say a few words as a reader 1. Let's talk about the advantages first: the daily plot is very good. I am older and have passed the age of shouting about fighting and killing all day long, so I like to read something sweet; the portrayal of the three female protagonists is very careful. The main character is distinctive and the characters are rich; the author has a literary flavor, the writing is delicate, and the description of the scenery and the psychological activities of the characters are very vivid 2. Let's talk about some shortcomings: the world view is very grand, but it is not used at all. The plot of more than 2 million words in the book is only in Wangquezhou, and there are even two main locations, one is Duyou City and the other is Dali; the plot is slow to advance and the plot is flat. I think it can be said that there are only three climax plots in the whole book, Zhongnan Qingbian, meeting Qingjun at the foot of Youshan, and Dali Fengchan's ambush of Zhao Rong. The book was too rushed, and many foreshadowings were not recycled, including the man behind the ambush, the sword bag dropped in Weiwei Mountain, Gui's story and identity, Ji Ganyi's suspected blackening, Yu Huaijin and her maid's suspected monster identity, the air woman in Dali's ruins, and the woman who disappeared for hundreds of chapters but suddenly appeared again. Ning Ying, etc.; The portrayal of the protagonist himself is not very successful. To be honest, as a reader, I really don't think the protagonist Zhao Rong has much charm. It may be because the plot is too bland and there is not much writing to highlight the protagonist's personal charm 3. This book actually still has a lot of writing space. To be honest, it feels like a pity that the author chose to finish it. But since it is said that there will be a follow-up, let's look forward to it.
The best thing about this book is the lifelike portrayal of the characters, not to mention the plot. The progress is slow, and the main plot, which was written for more than two years, is equivalent to standing still. The setting from the beginning to the end is not revealed. It is difficult to imagine that this is a novel plot of more than two million words. There is a lot of preparation in the early stage and I don't know how to write it later. The author is very experienced in writing characters, but has little confidence in writing the plot. This can be seen from the author's easy and freehand description of the characters in the early stage, to the frequent glitches in the progress of the plot in the later stage, which forced the update to be terminated. As for what the author said about continuing to pick up this book two years later, I suggest you just read it. It is not certain whether the author can regain the creative emotions of this book after two years. Even if it is updated by then, it may not last long. It is a pity for such a good world view and character setting.
This is my first time writing a book review... I have read more than 100 chapters, and to be honest, I feel really uncomfortable reading it. From the author's interaction in the book review, I can roughly tell a few points 1. This book can be said to be a 'daydream' in which the author brings himself into the protagonist. 2. This book is different from the soft rice flow on the label. To be precise, it is a harem romance 3. The author actually wants to have a lot of "ideas" and "elements" It was written into this book But I personally feel that he did not write it well 4 From a personal point of view, I think the rhythm of this book in terms of "events" and the warming up of the characters' emotions is very messy 5 The author tried very hard to write clearly about why the female protagonists like the male protagonist. He wanted to let the readers know that the female protagonists are not brainless and do not like the male protagonist, so they wrote it very carefully. But it is this "detail" that makes me find more and more bugs Sometimes the more code I write, the more bugs there are 6 No matter the label or the book title, after I read more than 100 chapters, I have a feeling of uc editorial department. It makes me feel that this author is not a clickbait? 7 There are more than 100 chapters. I haven't read the daily life of the sword fairy, but I have written quite a lot about the daily life of the fox demon. Even the corpses of good brothers are hung on the wall. Do you still forget to flirt? To be honest, when I read this book, I always had an idea: the daily life of the male protagonist Qingjun, or dog food. But I was very tortured after reading more than 100 chapters. 8 On the way to return the jade, the male protagonist took in a harem. Then I couldn't figure out why he said that the harem would be harmonious. The author wanted to write everything in a reasonable way. But everything is so unreasonable 9 As a male, I feel strange. In a world where you can cultivate immortality, in a world where women can cultivate immortality, a female monk who is stronger than her husband would let her husband have a harem? In a multi-element world, men do not dominate everything As I said in point 5, it starts with the male protagonist opening a harem It is not completely reasonable for the female protagonist to like the male protagonist 10 I suspect that the author has not been in love because unless suppressed by force, there is no such thing as allowing one's significant other to open a harem (regardless of male or female) 11 The role of Su Xiaoxiao I don't know whether the author did it intentionally or not, but the impression created is that she is possessive of the male protagonist. In this case, would you allow her to allow the male protagonist to have a harem? And no quarrel? Are you kidding?
I hope the author can slowly and beautifully complete this work. As someone who is in the same grade as the author, I admire the author's writing skills very much. Furthermore, I am not very good at using Qidian. Com to read books. This is also the first time I have come to Qidian. (Of course, I will not be a permanent resident in the future. I usually read books. It's all just for fun, and I don't think about rewards or anything), it's just to reward the author, and I will reward the author from time to time in the future (after all, students only have some money to spare), and finally, I hope the author can slowly and beautifully complete this work, come on! Awesome!
After reading this book, I feel that the homework is definitely a senior scumbag!
Suggestions on how to create a male protagonist in a harem novel without being a scumbag
The essence of being a scumbag is an emotional debt. The male protagonist born in the harem owes the female protagonist a point, so he must make up for it from other places to achieve emotional balance. And if this kind of compensation comes too late, the male protagonist will be in a state of debt for a long time. If he still looks for another member of the opposite sex during this period, he will naturally be a scumbag. The best way to deal with it is to make this kind of compensation in advance, let the female protagonist owe the male protagonist first, and at the same time the male protagonist should stand still, so that there is no such thing in the world. Why Jicha's book doesn't look like crap. Because the condition for the male protagonist to accept the female protagonist is either to save his life or to fulfill the female protagonist's long-cherished wish. First, let the heroine owe the hero, naturally fall in love with the "married" hero, and accept the harem. Especially for the first love/eldest wife, it is more important that the heroine owes the hero and not the hero owes the heroine, otherwise there is no position to open this harem. If you force it to open, it will look scummy.
Thanks to the author for taking me into a novel and interesting world and introducing me to Brother Sanbian, Lin Wenruo, Xiaoxiao, Qingjun and Xiaoqianer. This kind of detailed writing also gives me a different reading experience. I stay up all night reading this story these days, and I can interact with the characters in my dreams at night. It's really interesting. The author's reply in the announcement also felt very real to me. You are a great author. I hope you can keep writing. I'm afraid the next time we meet will be a long time later. I prefer to read a story in one go, at least to the end of a stage... Except In addition to my thanks, I also want to apologize. I failed to adhere to the old Zhao family's free prostitution tradition. In order to comment, I decided to recharge at Qidian for the first time. And I also decided that if I can finish the third volume by the end of the year, I will definitely subscribe to the entire third volume. I will update it, Xiaorong, I will always be happy with my words!
It's a pity that this novel is not released on female channels! ! !
You remind me of a novel I followed before (I'm still waiting for the demon to be possessed, he didn't have this name originally, and I don't know how many people still remember its original name. I hope both books have a happy ending)
I retract my previous remarks, Xiaorong is a real man
This is a novel I subscribed to at Qidian that made me disappointed! The story is very good, but it sucks! My current mood is like buying an unfinished building!
I came across this from Junzi. Although Junzi's writing in the later period of County Magistrate was a bit off, the rest of the plot was pretty good in all aspects. The only thing I was sure about was the slow update... I really had nothing to read, so I read the author's first work again. As a first work, although the plot progress is a bit slow, it is still a good book. The content is quite good in all aspects, but compared to Gentleman, there are too many descriptions of irrelevant characters or scenes. I used it to listen to the book. The extra plots that were not pitfalls were a bit torturous, so I half-listened to and half-read, and finished reading it in three days. In terms of characters, the heroine, the little maid, the little fox demon, and the female gentleman. The descriptions of roommates and bad friends are all very good, and the characters are very lively. They are not like many books nowadays that have the same symptoms in the later stages, where the characters' personalities are assimilated. But I hope that the character of the protagonist and the character of Sword Spirit can be more independent, because the characters of these two in the whole book feel a bit vague to me. As for the plot, it would be better if it was similar to the gentleman. Because some of the plot jumps really feel a bit big, and some look like they discovered problems later and rushed to fix them. Finally, there is the issue of content. The author defines a soft-rice article, even if it is soft-rice but hard to read, it is quite good. But after reading it, I still feel a little regretful that the soft rice is not fragrant and rich enough. I have written a lot of comments and it is almost a short essay. I hope the author will write a second part. After all, after digging so many holes, if we don't fill them in, wouldn't we feel sorry for the hard work of the first part? I won't vote for the monthly vote, keep it for the gentleman, and look forward to the next part of Sword Girl. 🙂🙂
(The following is my personal opinion. If there is something bad, please don't criticize it, just criticize it in your mind. Please) When I wrote this, I had only read more than 150 chapters. Although it was not many, I felt it in my heart and wanted to write something. Or maybe I wanted to remind the brothers who fell into the trap. Before reading this book, I was reading the author's "No, Gentleman Can Be Guarded" because that book is better. . It seems to me that it is very slow. Of course, it may be that the author wants to present the best to us. I like the author's writing style and plot very much, so I read this book "I Have a Sword Fairy Lady". I dare not make any comments on the writing, but I really like it. To be honest, the first 140 plots of the novel kind of discouraged me. Some of the plots were a bit uncomfortable, but thinking that he is the author of "No, Gentlemen Can Be Guarded", I decided to continue reading. I don't believe that is the case. Of course, there are also comments in it. Although the comments are correct, I still think that newcomers should not read the first 140 comments. After reaching 145, I was still not disappointed. There is a feeling of "a new village has a bright future". I can only say that he is worthy of being the author. Damn, in short, I like it very much. I am very grateful to the author for writing such a work. In the end, can you make "No, Gentlemen Also Beware" faster? I am going to die 😆😆😆
Thoughts from a brief reading of Sword Girl
Congratulations on discovering the treasure (laughing), at least I have thought so for a long time, and I am even happy with it. Ever since the days when Jian Niang was not famous, I always felt that the update of "Duan Xiaorong" was too slow and the shipments were too few. I put it on the bookshelf and thought about raising it, but the result was that I never had time to pick it up again. I have been feeling these past few days and want to relive some of the feelings in my memory. I still remember the admiration I couldn't put it down when I was following the update. I was touched by the chapters of Brother Dog, and I was happy when Brother Rong grew up. I was also touched by the sweet interactions between Brother Rong and Xiaoxiao. I even once complained about Qing Jun, and later laughed when my uncle chased his wife. This author is very good and understands what I want to see (haha). In short, I am moved in many ways; It's a pity that Dan Xiaorong actually described the childhood sweetheart relationship between Qingjun and Rong Geer like this. It's not obtrusive, but he probably thinks it's not worth it. He is deeply saddened by Dan Xiaorong's scumbag behavior. Xiaoxiao doesn't have much feeling. Maybe it's not the white moonlight and cinnabar mole in my heart. Maybe Dan Xiaorong also wants to describe the relationship with Qingjun well. It was so innocent and beautiful, but I couldn't control the writing well. I just felt that it was a pity that Brother Rong was written by Dan Xiaorong and died in my heart. He was not worth it. It would be great if I could only see Brother Rong and Qingjun express their feelings to each other sincerely. Such Brother Rong is worthy of everything in the world of Sword Girl, and he is also worthy of Qingjun and Xiaoxiao. ,,,,,,,,,, My tastes are quite picky, and my interests are mixed. I can read a little bit of all kinds of subjects, but not many can read the whole book. I have read several God-making masterpieces such as fantasy, fantasy, urban history, romance, science fiction, horror, wasteland, and apocalyptic games. I have also witnessed and participated in the creation of gods. I really like the Grand Steward's masterpiece. I once followed the Grand Steward to a certain place, but I only read the part of "Better Than Snow and Sword". I probably want to retain the beauty, and I am not the least bit complacent this time. Today's brief review is really not a vomiting and unpleasant one, and it's hard to calm down. I also wish Sword Lady another great success and all the best to you all. See you again by fate.
Theme: Oriental fairy, soft rice flow, daily flow, portable flow, relaxed Protagonist's experience and personality: Zhao Rong, the son-in-law of the Zhao family, was possessed by the soul on the earth on his wedding day, and took his grandfather with him. Because of the conflict with Qingjun (Note: Zhao Lingfei) about the jade plaque, they broke up unhappy after the wedding. The male protagonist later chose to go out for training, and met the fox demon Su Xiaoxiao and the knight Liu Sanbian on the way. Because of the excitement brought about by Liu San's transformation and death, the male protagonist officially embarked on the path of cultivation. In the process, Su Xiaoxiao was gradually attracted to the male protagonist, and finally the two successfully fell in love. First, let's talk about the advantages. 1. The writing style of this book is not white. As an old white man, I can definitely read it. 2. The emotions are very delicate. In today's era when harem literature is in decline, it is rare to have a large paragraph of inner description. The dog food is also very sweet. The scenes are well rendered. This must be praised. 3. The scheduling ability of small plots is actually okay. I think it is quite good in the first copy. Although many netizens cannot accept the fact that Lin Wenruo has a harem, I don't think it is immoral (let me state in advance that I am being cautious). 4. The names of the characters in the book are all well chosen. Tag: Good-for-nothing, trashy man, emotional Plot: B- Writing: A+ Emotion: S- Characterization: B+ Novelty: B- Pressure Sentiment: B+ Overall Rating: B+ Comment: This book is a book with outstanding advantages and disadvantages. Because it takes too much for granted, it can only get a B+ rating Disadvantages: 1. It is the same as having a system or not, and it can be hidden for a long time. 2. The plot scheduling is seriously unbalanced, and the plot of Taiqing Mansion is almost stagnant. This problem is not trivial, because the author has been staying in the academy for nearly 70 chapters, having a relationship with Qingjun, but the protagonist's strength has not increased at all. The long-term description of warm daily flow makes people feel boring (it is indeed not as good as Xia Hua Niang), and it is not easy to grasp the degree of sweet but not greasy. There is basically no major character conflict in this process, and there is almost no real progress. It may be more appropriate to condense it into 20-30 chapters. 3. My friend Lin Wenruo has a harem. Although there is no detailed description, I am afraid that some friends will not accept it, so I will list it first. 4. The protagonist's sense of belief is not strong, and his character changes too much before and after. The protagonist had the temperament to hug someone's thighs from the beginning, but as he gained more experience in the world later on, I felt his edge. When they arrived at Taiqing Mansion, they went back again. Although the author has clearly said that it is a soft rice flow, which is no problem, I personally do not appreciate this kind of reverse change. This is why I cannot summarize too many protagonist labels. There are many inconsistencies. 5. Literary youth style, I think it's okay. 6. Su Xiaoxiao's plot arrangement is inappropriate. My favorite heroine is probably this little fox. She is cute and brings to life a quirky fox girl who dares to love and hate (better than the fox girl in Da Zhou Xianli or even Ye Ling in Wenwen Renchen). But the protagonist actually deceived Xiaoxiao to wait for her, and then went to fall in love with Qingjun, and he still doesn't dare to confess to Qingjun. Emmmmm, I think this plot makes me extremely uncomfortable. As much as I like Xiaoxiao, I hate the protagonist. And there are so many chapters in Little Fox Shen Yin, I really want to see her plot.
When I first read Chapter 100, I was so shocked that I thought the Three Idiots were reincarnated. After reading Chapter 300, I was tortured to death by the protracted plot. At chapter 500, it gradually gets better and feels full of immersion. New authors still need to be tolerant. The writing is very good, but the rhythm is awkward. I wanted to give up the book at one point. I hope the author will grow up Dan Xiaorong, I hope you can become a god one day.
Rongge, do you dare to leave your address tonight? If you dare to leave it tonight, tomorrow you will become famous in the Internet literary circle, and make many candidates for ace pigeons and eunuchs tremble in shock, and they will not dare to do anything else.
Write some random stuff, mainly for Xiaorong to read (dog head)
First of all, state your position, Mr. Zhu yyds! I read it elsewhere and caught up today. I made up my mind (yi) to make (shi) decision (chong) and (dong) to order everything. Well, it's my first time to spend money on a book, but it's still a deserted book, but it doesn't matter, I like to read what Xiaorong writes, and I'm happy after reading it, that's all. I learned that this book was recommended by Mr. Qingfeng's public account. Qingfeng said that this book has obvious advantages and disadvantages, and it is a matter of opinion. I found the advantages to be very satisfying and the disadvantages can be ignored. There are many experts from all walks of life in the comment area, and there are also many suggestions. I just listen to the story and will not interfere with teaching the author to write a book. Although I had some thoughts, I thought about it and let it go. This is Xiaorong's world, not mine. I'm a spectator. Actually, today I want to talk about "seeing the mind and clarifying its nature". I use "Knowing one's mind and seeing one's nature" more often. I think this deviation doesn't matter, so I ignore it. I strongly agree with the views in the book. This "nature" is probably the nature of Buddhism. It is the "human nature" in the words of Cheng-Zhu Neo-Confucianism, which is greed, anger, ignorance, and obsession with desire. "Heart" can be summarized as "original heart", as my mother taught me: to figure out what you really want. Only by understanding one's original mind and mastering one's nature can one know that there are emotions in the world, and that one is a human being; only by controlling one's nature can one maintain true knowledge and not fall into the state of a beast. Xiaorong wrote this chapter well, I am very touched by it, and I would like to thank you for it. Then, I hope Xiaorong's "heart" is to write a book that satisfies himself and others. It doesn't really matter what its "nature" is. You can do whatever you want, but don't go against your true intentions. (I'm not afraid that Jian Niang will be a eunuch and I'll feel uncomfortable without books, hum) (I didn't teach the author to write a book but teach him to be a human being. As expected of me. Jpg) Judging from the less than 400 chapters and Judging from Xiaorong's message in the book, he probably wanted to write something of his own. It is obvious that the book is full of his understanding of some classics. Well, the Tao Te Ching is used a lot. Regardless of whether the views are different from mine, I am willing to read the things in the book. This is different from the classic "shuangwen", and it is also what I like. It's not as boring as the annotations of classics. Well, Xiaorong has a heart. (From these words, we can get a glimpse of Xiaorong's inner lake. Can we be considered to have been friends for a long time?). There are also some places in the book, well, it may be my illusion, it may be my own nastiness, thinking "Oh, I have to show off!" "Ha, the protagonist takes off!" Or the machismo is overwhelming, or even When I see a beautiful woman and want to accept it, it is either Gui's ridicule or Zhao Rong's self-deprecation that points to my dirty thoughts and my humble desire for self-satisfaction. It really hits the mark and points directly to my true nature. Immediately, I would blush, and then I would laugh at myself and continue looking down. In my opinion, Xiaorong wrote something that I haven't seen in other books, and maybe something that others dare not write. I admire it very much. Even if this is my imagination, I am grateful. There are many other things I want to say, most of which are some understandings related to the Tao Te Ching. After thinking about it, forget it. I can't understand it myself or write it, so I won't waste Xiaorong's time. Then give me some encouragement at the end, Xiaorong, keep at it. I wish you couldn't have been born three years earlier, so that I could hold a completed Sword Girl all night long (laughing). Keep writing, write what you want to write, write what you really want us to see.
After reading through the book reviews, I found that many people complained about the plot and the number of female protagonists. I will venture to express my opinion more, and by the way, I would like to remind the new friends not to run away when they see too many female protagonists. First of all, although this book has multiple female protagonists, the basic plot is similar to that of a single female protagonist. Only one heroine appears in each plot, and she is not a stallion. She is harvested for the sake of harvest. The author is still very good at writing emotional dramas. Multiple female protagonists is actually a common writing technique. On the one hand, there are readers who like to read it. Have you ever seen that from Japanese comics to online articles and even serious literature, there are countless stories about the emotional entanglements of female protagonists. Nothing else, because too many people love watching it. On the other hand, it is because besides the protagonist, it is difficult to make another character have enough character tension without stealing the scene, and without boring the readers (especially the same-sex, who accidentally becomes a double protagonist, which is basically very poisonous in Internet literature). So the simplest way to deal with it is to divide the heroine's plot into multiple parts, keeping it fresh while adding more plots. Therefore, you will see that books with a single female protagonist rarely focus on the emotional line (sparing the plot and maintaining the tension of the characters), or they are completed quickly (most of them do not exceed 1 million words, which is relatively short among online articles). So new friends, don't run away when you see multiple female protagonists. This is a rare dog food novel in fantasy.
No need to change the title of the book, just use this one
It's rare to find a book that I'm interested in pursuing. Don't let gkd keep it on the bookshelf. Haha, I'm a little worried that the author's supporting characters are too delicate. Later, I'm afraid that you won't be able to handle it and the lack of pen and ink will cause distortion. So far, Gouzi Ge has been a little impressed. I wonder what other scenes will feature him in the future? It is also good to detail and enrich the character's personality from the description of some scenes from the side of the supporting characters, but it feels like there is nothing missing. There is an interspersed plot advancement (supplement) in the middle of the first volume, which is quite good. You can try to advance multiple lines to speed up the plot advancement. To be honest, except for the student party, which has plenty of time, I can stay with you. I am afraid of forgetting you when I get busy after work. And you are really a new writer? That's great. You know what we want to see? The emotional part is very detailed, but you are too procrastinating. Please be more relaxed. This book is really good. ,
This book's writing is really delicate. I like this kind of work. The plot may be a bit slow. It may be the author's first try. But it's really good. I hope the next one can give us a better plot appreciation. The last time I read the novel, I felt a little disappointed at the end. I'll call you Moye. I'm looking forward to your next one. The heroine is almost there. Qingjun, Xiaoxiao, Qianer, Yourong, Su Xiu. If I read more, I might lose the soul of this book. Let's wait and see!
I have been looking for fantasy novels and fantasy romance novels, and I found two at once. I came across this book in the past few days, and I really like it. The first few dozen chapters of the first volume have a huge amount of information, a huge world view, and rigorous logic. The narrative along the way south (I have forgotten whether it was north or south) is very clear, lively and interesting. The image of Lin Sanbian, a rough guy, is deeply rooted in my heart. His care for little brother Zhao Rong along the way and the story are touching. I won't talk about it anymore. It's good to read.
Reading is an interesting thing, and so is reading novels. Although the words are less than a thousand words, they are full of philosophy and carry all the author's thoughts and wisdom. Reading is endlessly memorable and full of emotions. There are long breaths to cover up the tearful screams, and there are also the true feelings that linger in my heart Every line and every paragraph touches me deeply Just a beam of light in the darkness leads me out of the darkness and rekindles the hope of life. I seem to have begun to lose control of my hands. I want to show off my skills, use pen and ink, and wield the sword as wildly as I want. However, since my hands are often not coordinated with my brain, I have to give up. Although I can't write, but This does not affect my admiration for you, the author, in any way. To put it in a cliché, it is like that surging river, endless, and like the Yellow River flooding out of control. Lang Yan is unique and unique in the world. Hmm... There is so much water, it should be enough, experience +3. Farewell!
Not many people write about the harem, and the writing style is pretty good. It is the star of hope for the harem. . . But maybe the structure can be adjusted a little more to make it feel like prose. . . After all, the audience for online articles has their own characteristics, and writing too slowly is not necessarily a good thing. . . The level of the first book is quite impressive, come on
After seeing each other again, we meet again. I have the same dream with you several times. I only have a few silver photos left tonight, as if I was afraid that the meeting would be a dream.
Come on, update it, all prostitutes are here to see the genuine version.
If you come back, please kick me buddy
Why is there so much love between men and women written in the back?
The author's writing is great, but the main plot is too slow, but everything else is pretty good. I have always had an idea, that is, if Zhao Rong did not go back to give Yu at the beginning, but kept going south, how would such a route develop, just like different choices and different branches in the game, leading to different endings. Author, you also keep talking about what would have happened if Zhao Rong went south at that time or later. Such an if line must be very good. Zhao Rong went all the way south, was enthusiastic about his scholarly business, and was righteous in the world. He met Xiaoxiao, had a journey of mountains and rivers with Brother Sanbian, and was accompanied by the Purple Sword Lingxin Lake. The mountains are high and the roads are far away, and we will have a lifelong love with Xiao Xiao, maybe on the fields or in the houses. After that, I searched for the roots of Confucianism and Taoism, uttered the four sentences of Hengqu, and set my ambition to be a great Taoist. I continued to experience a lot. There might be a little fox carrying a bookcase following behind me, and I might still meet Brother Wen Ruo. Meet, gain, lose, grow, let go, and move forward freely. Using the Confucian, Taoist and scientific knowledge of the past life, in the age when hundreds of schools of thought are contending, it is like the sun rising in the sky, liberating the mind, shining on the contemporary era, and becoming the most holy. Finally, many years later, when I think about what would have happened if I returned to the north, a figure with red makeup flashed in my mind, just like Zhang Sanfeng recalled Guo Xiang, but it was already a long time ago. In this way, the if line is a refreshing article, Confucianism and Taoism, and a spirit of life. Coupled with the author's delicate writing style, it just makes up for the whiteness and speed of the refreshing article. The main text is about soft rice, Confucianism and Taoism, harem flow, delicate emotions, intriguing, and deep love. Both lines are very interesting. I wonder if the author has thought about it before, and I think there can be a side story (●'◡'●)
I feel like this is okay😁