Stealing Fortune to Cultivate Immortality

The plot writing is okay, but the difference between Luo Feng and the protagonist is overemphasized. Luo Feng is a loser and the protagonist is self-disciplined. But the problem is that the protagonist is only half a pound. The protagonist was not at the bottom of society for 30 years in his previous life. It is not easy to compare Luo Feng and the protagonist. After all, the world is different. If you think about it differently, both the protagonist and the earthling can be compared. Who is more useless? The protagonist is not like Luo Feng. The most fundamental problem is poverty. Poverty limits most of his small ideas, but Luo Feng can realize these if he has money.

What a bullshit. He beat his own family members, and even killed one of his own men, locking up a woman. This is the first time I saw the author write this. If he becomes ruthless, he will kill everyone in his family.

I have read the last 16 chapters, and I have some comments that I hope will be helpful to the author. I want to thank Shuangwen for the online novel. What the hell are you writing about? 1. The protagonist's character and behavior are always negative emotions, distracted, and self-righteous. 2. The protagonist is a mentally retarded child who was slapped on the left cheek and stretched out the right cheek! 3. There are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist, and most of them contain negative emotions and thoughts. It is recommended that the author change the outline to center on the golden finger of the pig's trotter, fight monsters in a positive and upward direction and upgrade, gain luck points to upgrade, and show off to the enemy and slap them in the face. Don't always write about the pig's trotter being slapped in the face like an idiot.

Well, after reading Chapter 28, I found the pig's feet very unpleasant. I thought the author created an unlikable protagonist. But then I found out that when the protagonist was fighting Rakshasa, you, the author, are so fucking weird. Which one's own family is pretending not to hit the Xia family or others. When writing about the main protagonist's own family, I can only say that the author is weird and strongly persuades him to quit.

I don't like the main character's character. It's cool for you to write like this.

To be honest, if the protagonist is enjoying his life, why is he so cruel to his family members? Normal people would not do this.

It feels like the protagonist is a bit possessed, and is self-righteous and cautious.

From ten chapters to now, it is a very special book. It is a pity that it collapsed. In my opinion, the problem is that the map has not been expanded. It is still in Huayang Mansion as of now, and there are only a few characters. It was originally written that when the protagonist is almost invincible locally, talented and powerful enemies from outside should be introduced to provoke and attack the protagonist. After the conflict is expanded, new maps and new characters will naturally be opened. This way, the plot will not be boring. For example, in the latest chapter, a certain house next door could have been used to unite a certain family to attack the Lin family for some treasure, and then the protagonist could start pretending to slap the face again (that's pretty much what it means). It won't be written down as a running account...

Cultivation of immortals used to be about asceticism and hatred. In fact, the most important thing for cultivating immortals is to enjoy the blessings of immortality that ordinary people dare not think of. The logic that such enjoyment will ruin the path to immortality is not worth refuting... Not to mention the forgetfulness and cheats of mortals. Even if there are not, you are an immortal if you can step into the path of immortality. You have to get all kinds of good things.

Will the author continue to update? Been chasing