Side Gate of Jianzong

I couldn't stand it when I saw a radish being used as a printing mechanism. It was just a running account, but I still made such a thing and produced hundreds of sheets a minute. Originally, the setting of talisman making is that the maker gathers his energy and spirit to write down his understanding of a certain rule on the carrier of spiritual ink talisman paper with similar spiritual energy. You are outrageous and you have hundreds of them in a minute. It has nothing to do with the maker. Not to mention other settings, in your story, there is obviously a country, so there must be a seal seal. It has also been said that there is a magic calamity in five hundred years. In other words, how come the history of monasticism has never been tried for thousands of years? Do you think it's okay? Can you carve a carrot and just raise your fingerprint? If ordinary people can print talismans at will just like using a spiritual ink seal, then the imperial court is not allowed to print hundreds of millions of them at will? If there is no advantage in force value, will there be a heterogeneous threat like immortal cultivators? At least you stopped being a tool? What you wrote may seem interesting, but upon closer inspection it simply doesn't hold up. Tu Yile is also worried about it.

*The content of this article has been converted from traditional to simplified. Please forgive me if there are typos or unclear words The secret of the sword sect's success is that the important characters who support the sword sect are not the main sword cultivators. At the beginning, it is a fresh start, a story of relaxed cultivation of immortality by finding a new path instead of taking the right path. The protagonist can be filled with several adjectives at the beginning. He is kind but principled, genius but not lost. Advancing and retreating, being strong and struggling to survive, I think the story is best concentrated in the first 30%. The subsequent 30 to 60% of the story gradually becomes more and more tasteless, and the image of the protagonist is also inconsistent, and begins to fill in some unpleasant traditional novice plots. After 60%, the story takes a sharp turn, completely returning to the traditional route of eliminated geniuses slapping each other in the face, and the reading experience is not good. The most exciting and flavorful plot in the front may be the story of Lone Table's life towards death, "A lone boat, carrying everyone out of trouble" This sentence matches the current scene and makes people excited. In addition, the protagonist does meritorious deeds without doing his job. Practice medicine and taste herbs, this kind of ordinary It rarely appears in novels, and it is generally meaningless. Ordinary actions make people feel full of fairy flavor. I think a true fairy should be so free and able to do whatever he wants, regardless of whether it is worth it, appropriate or whether there is a better way. This makes me happy. It is a great good that conforms to the principles in my heart. However, subsequent stories have become less and less fairytale. Instead, what is added is to support the mortal country, the protagonist is omnipotent and performs the deeds of the gods with the body of the golden elixir, the sect elders who slap in the face for disobedience, the Taoist friends who return from exile in shock, and the immortal officials who slap in the face are not like gods. These are really difficult for people to describe in detail, in short, they are not very comfortable experiences. The most disappointing thing is the change in the protagonist's attitude and principles. From treating mortals to treating gods, he always behaves the same willfully. To being dissatisfied with the collar, making things difficult for the Moon Sword, slapping the elders in the face and running away, and causing conflicts after going to the world. All these make people more and more disappointed. That's about it. The follow-up is boring. That's about it for the main text. What I want to see is the young immortal who is full of immortality in the early stage, not the great omnipotent protagonist who becomes a god later. The following part is full of personal biases and dissatisfaction. If you are just looking for the experience of the text, it is enough to read the above. Don't let my bias affect your views. The following paragraphs mainly want to talk about the supporting actress Han Yan, who has no destiny as the heroine. This is my favorite character in the whole book, and therefore I have a lot of dissatisfaction with it. Han Yan is a character with an arrogant and impulsive personality. In her early years, she was replaced by her brother and survived. She is dependent on Gu Zuizhi and the protagonist. She has excellent swordsmanship talent and ignorantly likes the protagonist. She is struggling between swordsmanship and the protagonist. Because he is arrogant, he sometimes appears to be unruly and willful, but he can make correct decisions on matters of principle. He regards the protagonist as the most important person and shares everything with him. He feels inferior because of his incompetence and hopes to protect the protagonist. These are probably the images that Han Yan gave me in the early days, a female swordsman with a savage appearance but a soft and firm heart. When I was young, I didn't understand the meaning of dual cultivation, so I established a zhenqi cycle with the protagonist. I was a childhood sweetheart with the protagonist, and regarded each other as my medicine. It happened that their attributes were complementary, and thus established a cycle of five elements. When the sect asked them to become Taoist couples, they found that they had done what Taoist couples can do. In their inner confusion, they could not confirm what their intentions were. After the mid-term period, Han Yan suffered from the death of various companions, and her heart was full of suffering. She could not let go of her feelings for the sect and the guilt of being too weak In the end, she chose to be the protector of Jianya for ten thousand years. After ascending for ten thousand years, she went to guard the demigod world and continued her lonely life. I would like to say that the protagonist's attitude towards Han Yan is not as good as that of her pet, or even worse than that of a shopping guide girl in the middle period. The protagonist has Su Hui in his previous life. Would he not understand what dual cultivation means? When a girl is suffering internally, the protagonist chooses to let nature take its course instead of taking responsibility. When the girl cannot let go of her guilt, the protagonist chooses that she will get through it on her own. I don't need to say anything more. I just think that the protagonist is no different from a cold-blooded stranger. On the surface, he says he cares about his relatives. Is this his attitude towards his relatives when they are hurt? The protagonist who emphasizes nature in everything is really treating Han Yan, who is full of pretentiousness, 'If I don't move, I will wait for her to jump on me. If she doesn't come, it will be her loss' If you don't want to treat her well for the rest of your life, then why do you do those confusing actions to provoke others? When people's hearts are filled with ripples and hesitation, they remain motionless like a cold-blooded stranger, full of hypocrisy and say let nature take its course. Is this the truth in the world that childhood sweethearts can never beat the Skyfall system? It seems like she dislikes Han Yan for being ordinary and not high enough to be worthy of the Almighty God protagonist. Of course, it may be that I don't have love for Han Yan. If I have love for the character, I think the first thing is to stand up for her, and then tell others how good she is. I think no matter what, it is impossible to re-write a template character that meets the needs, and then abandon the character that originally injected soul into it.

Assume that Pearl World, which has experienced a great collapse, is a company that barely survived the financial crisis. God is the CEO of the company. At this time, Pearl World is in dire straits. After Su Li entered the company, he was assigned to a department (Jian Zong) that was not suitable for him. He gradually made the department bigger and stronger (Rise of Side Men), and even rescued the daughter of the company's former major shareholder (Chun Dong), bringing the Pearl World back into the sight of the major shareholder (Jian Ya Sect). When Su Li did this, he always did it first and then took it. If it was his biological son, then even if he didn't take it first and do it later (Beiguang), he would have to take it while doing it. Even Su Li was tricked before he started practicing (Xia Shen evil thoughts, Chi Lao), but it was a blessing in disguise that he cheated (Awakening the Earth's Memory). The work that Su Li did was not something that his sons could do. No matter how close a son is, he will still cheat on his father sometimes. As for Su Li, when he is not cheating on his father, he is like that other people's child, but we all know that other people's children do not exist in reality. In my opinion, the description of Su Li's passage through the tribulation is more like "Dad, thank you for your hard work. My son will give you a pat on your back and rub your shoulders. Is it okay?" Therefore, I think Su Li is God's new father 🤫🤫

I think this book should be at least in the top three if I recommend it! The plot is not sloppy, it has a pure and unconventional nature, and it feels like you want to cross the river bank and take a boat, which is very suitable to my taste.

A rare good book. Since Tencent acquired Qidian and revised it, many of the recommended books cannot be read.

Overall, this book is a good book, but in terms of emotions, people may have different opinions. Don't be misled by book reviews. If you hate someone, can you make that person disappear in front of you? A female cultivator who sacrificed her love for the sect must become the protagonist's concubine to be considered perfect? Some book reviews are really childish.

Cultivation not only cultivates the Tao, but also cultivates the heart most importantly. The protagonist has achieved this

After reading the latest chapter, I have a feeling that in setting up monsters, is it necessary to add a general query database for sects? Suppose that in order to improve the survivability of the sect group, Su Li himself has the encyclopedia Chi Lao by his side, but other disciples do not have it. I think this should be supplemented. Knowledge itself is the embodiment of experience of things, because before it was all maps and plant books, this time it should be the demon record, right? For example, the Classic of Mountains and Seas is like this? Mark the demon's image, behavior, hazards, and weaknesses for disciples to look up. Only in this way can we deal with the demon better and more efficiently, right? From the current point of view, Chi Lao is a sponge, and he will always have something to offer when things get tight. However, I think that in the future, the strength of Jianzong should also be improved by improving the knowledge reserve of the sect. Specifically, it is mentioned that the record information of demons can be automatically searched for through image recognition and keyword query. Generally speaking, a sect will have relevant knowledge records, but they are all in the form of classics. It is very troublesome to find relevant information. I think Su Li will also need to optimize this area in the future to improve the efficiency in this area. What? You said that Jian Zong just fired his sword energy when he went out? What if you can't fight hard? Or run? There is no guarantee that a three-person team will not have an accident, so how can we ask for help? Suppose you encounter a demon with the attributes of psychic interference + space blockade + gravity space + spell absorption + physical immunity, and when the sect comes over, what should the ordinary low-level disciples do? Didn't it mean that there are fewer people in the Sword Sect now? And now that there are fewer people, the sect should also recruit students after the establishment of the religion, right? A boring thought, maybe the current disciples are anonymous ABCs, but I feel that there are not many people in the first place, and we should do a good job in knowledge. Although the previous generation just did it if they refused, I feel that in the future, we should also improve the disciples' relevant knowledge reserves. Since we want to be reckless, we can't be reckless. Let's talk about these first

The book was very well written in the early stage. The subject matter and logic are very clear and reasonable. If you keep it up, it will not be difficult to become a god. Unfortunately, I don't know whether the author was influenced by several critics (perhaps also the trolls) or some other situation where he started all kinds of saucy operations before it was even released on the shelves, resulting in a mess of emotional drama. In fact, the step-by-step development is actually The addition of one more heroine will have little impact on the whole book. If you are really dissatisfied, you can downplay it later or even add another heroine who is not a stud. Not to mention that the author's self-spoilers are too sexy to understand. If I want to use the words in the book to describe this work, it is that the foundation is unstable and it is difficult to become an immortal or a god.

I just like this kind of bland novel

As a bookworm of ten years, your writing skills are not sharp😃, but there are many bad comments. I hope you don't worry about them and write well😄

It's been a long time since I've seen such an outstanding novel. I've been short of books for a long time, and I read a lot of novels that were hard to swallow. Finally found a delicious book. It's a very enjoyable book, not boring, about practicing and upgrading. The back is a little better than the front.

Well written, hope to keep it up

I quite like this work, I hope the author will stick to it

I don't know why there are so many trolls. I read that this book only has 22 chapters. So far it's pretty good. Even if the trolls are talking about Han Yan, I personally think the author's writing is good and not as bad as the trolls say. So you have to read the book yourself to find out. In fact, I don't know if I can finish the book. Some of the writing is good at the beginning but falls apart at the end. I hope the author can work hard!

Secretly pop up and see who can spot it

The biggest highlight is the description of the character a cultivator should have. Nowadays, most novels either lead to cultivating an immortal or becoming a demon, or they have a funny character that has nothing to do with cultivating.

I originally wanted to say a lot, but after thinking about it I decided not to. To sum up, it is well written and I look forward to the subsequent plot development.

It is said that some people in Qidian don't want to read a book with a female protagonist. Maybe I'm a bit special. I originally read this book because of the female protagonist. Because in the beginning, there were too many fantasy fairy tales where the male protagonist single-handedly destroyed the world and destroyed the world. I was really tired of reading them. Originally, I saw the author saying in a single chapter that the male protagonist is set to play support, and the female protagonist Han Yan is set as damage dealer. My eyes lit up, and I became interested in reading. I thought that I could see a new and unique male protagonist with strong support, a male and female protagonist who is the first assistant in the national server and the first top single in the national server to fight all the way. This seems to be the development of the novel in the early stage. As a result, I watched the male and female protagonists suddenly break up in certain chapters without any warning, and the male protagonist's character setting also suddenly transformed, turning into a cookie-cutter invincible warrior male protagonist. There were a lot of such male protagonists at the beginning. In the chapters where the male and female protagonists parted ways, I was completely confused at the time. I didn't understand why the author's writing ideas suddenly changed. It wasn't until I clicked on the comment area and saw the comment "I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine, I don't want a heroine" that I kind of understood the reason. A good book with innovative ideas has become a bad routine under the command of some readers. Some people can't write a book themselves, so don't instruct the author how to write a book. If you feel the book doesn't suit your taste, just abandon it and find something you like to read instead of forcing the author to modify it according to your taste. If you like braised chicken and rice, you can't ask all the shops in the street to change it to braised chicken and rice, right?

To rectify the name of the heroine I really didn't expect that I finally saw a heroine (Han Yan) with a normal personality and simple thoughts saying one or two that the heroine has no self-awareness, the heroine is a waste, the heroine is blah blah blah, co-author. In today's novels, the heroine must be thoughtful, strong, cold personality, obedient to the male protagonist's words, and have (use) value to be the heroine? Do all people have to be like monks and dogs to be friends? (In my eyes, a monk is almost the same as a dog. It's not that the male protagonist's attitude towards the monk is the same as that of a pet, but that this person is just a tool that is only suitable for being a dog. He has no characteristics and no highlights. What surprises me is that many people like this character. After all, most people may bring in the protagonist, so they like this kind of dog-like slave. In my opinion, I only feel sad for the monk, but I have never been in it. It was commented in there (because I feel it is unnecessary to slander a character like this), but the female protagonist is completely different. She is a very common girl who hates evil and has a strong personality. She does not have the life experience of the male protagonist like a greasy uncle who is several decades old. She is a bit like a newborn calf who is not afraid of tigers. She is too real and too similar to the young person in life. She has an aura that is not afraid of anything, and is stubborn and good-looking. She is just an ordinary girl and has nothing to share with others, because whatever she can share, the male protagonist can get better, and the only thing she can share is the ten pills she got from the master. And in the part where she shared the pills, some people said that the heroine was useless and was holding her back, blah blah blah, yes, the heroine is not the Great Luo Jinxian or the Eternal Emperor, she can only share what she thinks is the best of herself. I really like this girl who is probably the heroine (I have only read more than a hundred chapters). At present, except for some self-righteous comments, there are no poisonous points that make me feel very poisonous.

Already invested, hope not to be a eunuch.

Happy New Year! I have been reading online novels for more than ten years. To be honest, the quality of this book does not match the ranking. It should be higher. I hope the author can work hard and don't give up. You are a treasure author worth exploring.

This book has three correct views and reasonable logic. The more you read it, the more interesting it becomes. The author works hard and doesn't collapse!

Han Yan was left out of the game for no apparent reason. As God grew up and knew more, there was a distance. It could be that Han Yan was the protagonist's first friend, and she was also the object of dual cultivation. In the end, she ended up worse than a dog who caused trouble everywhere. Farewell.

I can't help it anymore. Why do I have to be a nanny for that Han Yan? It was obviously the male protagonist who saved her, but why does she feel like the male protagonist owes her something like a giant baby? Does the male protagonist have to surround her just because she is a woman?

This article gives people a sense of fragmentation when reading it from front to back. The first part is very amazing, with a fairy spirit floating calmly and generously, and a feeling of compassion and compassion for the world, which can touch people's hearts. However, there are many routines before and after Baizhang, and it feels like an industrial assembly line slap in the face. The emotional lines are also handled rather bluntly. Although I personally think Han Yan is not unlikable, the interaction between men and women is awkward. It's really a pity. Looking back, I decided to withdraw it if it didn't work. Come on, author!

After reading Chapter 45, it's generally okay, but the character of the protagonist doesn't quite suit my taste. It's a bit too much, especially for Han Yan. I don't necessarily want to see a protagonist who is decisive and ruthless, but you can't be too good-natured. In interpersonal communication, you should pay attention to oneness. Only by caring for each other and supporting each other can we maintain a friendship. However, I only saw the protagonist licking the woman like a dog and helping her for free. The woman didn't know how to be considerate of the protagonist, give back to the protagonist, and accept the protagonist's help with peace of mind. What is the relationship between the protagonist and her? Isn't it just a relationship between a senior and a junior? But the protagonist Mei Hui has trained Fu Xian to give her half of it, just like now the freshman earns 1,000 a month and wants to give the sophomore 500, but the senior doesn't show any reaction at all. The two of them are not lovers, just friends. I really feel that such people are rare in reality, and they are too naive to be replaced.

The author's book review section must have been completely hacked. So many people are trolling this Han Yan. It is true that the character portrayal is not good. It makes people feel a little impulsive and superior. It is not as gentle as water/smart and almost demonic female image, but it is not that it is criticized so much. Has the author blocked the way of others?

I ordered it all at one price. I just read more than 20 chapters and used carrots to seal the talisman. I am speechless. If it really works, this bug is too big. If you do this, I only need to copy some high-level talismans. Even if it is only one-third of the original version and one-fifth of the power, I will copy hundreds and thousands of high-level talismans. Basically, the gods will block and kill the "gods". If I encounter enemies several levels higher than myself, who will be my opponent! It affects the sense of immersion. Only represents personal feelings

To be honest, the writing was so good that I came back to re-order it. I was a little unhappy when I read the beginning and the girl was too familiar, so I pirated it to see how it was (for fear of wasting money). I didn't expect that the writing would get better and better. I hope the author's writing will be more beautiful.