Xuanmen Is Not Authentic

Interesting ! Just not enough! This kind of practice is very down-to-earth, and the various pretentiousness of the male protagonist seems to me to be the "protagonist". Human beings are quite contradictory creatures. Some people like a work and some don't. Personal preferences and acceptance levels are different, so don't judge good or bad based on some people's comments. See and discover for yourself? Come on, author ~🙏

At the beginning, I thought it was quite interesting. The story of a genius boy's exploration of spiritual practice was well told. However, when a nephew suddenly appeared, I felt something was wrong. The path I originally thought was about cultivating immortals and enjoying freedom felt like it was going to be a path of temple competition. I quickly turned to the back and saw that the result was even more exaggerated than I imagined. How could even interstellar wars appear... To be honest, this step is too big. If you want to write about advanced cultivation civilization, don't focus on the traditional fairy tale. The whole thing starts with a low-level martial arts world where a genius boy practices qi and becomes an immortal. The ending is a cultivation civilization that unifies the universe. You can write it in the introduction.

What, the heroine's name is Ran Jiao! ! ! ! ! ! 🙂🙂🙂

All signs indicate that the protagonist of this book, Wang Qi, and the protagonist of the author's previous book, Su Li, have a father-son relationship. But looking at it now, it feels like Su Li was raised by the son of Lao Wang next door, without any of his father's steel attributes.

In fact, I feel a bit strange when I see the comments being so scathing. Could it be that the people who like to watch it haven't come over to give it a thumbs up? Let me give you a compliment first. Compared with the previous one, this book is not too good-looking. Regardless of the rhythm, characters, and perspective, it is more comfortable. And the most important thing is that this book is very interesting to read~ If you rate the previous one as a good food, this one can currently reach an excellent level. Next, the plot of cultivating immortals and benefiting the people, and exploring the void is interesting enough. As for the shortcomings, it is that it is too peaceful and lacks a bit of excitement. The protagonist is as steady as a second-generation fairy (laughs), and all the crises along the way are flat. The protagonist rarely encounters anything that makes him frustrated, nor does he have any spectacular antagonistic scenes. At this point, I have to name and criticize Chou Mei. I feel that Chou Mei is not very good at handling this kind of plot. I hope I will be lucky enough to continue to work hard in the future.

The most important reason why this book or the author's fairy tales are comfortable to read is the pyrotechnic sense of life in it. To be honest, I basically don't like the immortality novels at all. Classical immortality cultivation novels and even fantasy upgrade novels are completely unthinkable. Because whenever you try to think, you will find its nothingness. The Supreme Being forgets his feelings and cultivates himself into the way of heaven. He cultivates himself into a robot. From a person to a running program, stupid and nihilistic, he transforms himself into the way of heaven. What next? When one thought arises, all things arise. Then what? After cultivating, I became a modifier-like existence, and then there was nothing more. Every time you play a game and turn on modifiers to enjoy it, after a while it becomes boring and you abandon the game. The same principle applies to upgrade articles. Power is to make your thoughts and ideas smooth and satisfying, but in the end, the upgrade article is, oh, it's fully upgraded, you are invincible, and the whole book is complete. Same thing. In fact, we have entered this realm of nothingness at the end of the last book. I hope this book can be improved and not fall into the vicious circle of nothingness

It feels like the writing is becoming more and more civilized. Wherever I go, I can see the pros and cons of the exercises at a glance. Can I improve and optimize the exercises? Do you really think that the seniors and true immortals of these sects are just living for a living? The problems they have been unable to solve during their long years of practice are solved as soon as they meet the protagonist?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I don't want to read anymore. What readers want to see is how to become stronger, not to see you being pretentious. Being a soldier still has all kinds of problems. Sometimes you can't sleep, sometimes you can't eat well, sometimes you can't drink water. Please take a look at the appearance of modern soldiers in the ice, snow, and scorching summer, and compare it to you who traveled through time. Pretentious to write female videos

Well written! I love the author's novels where the male and female protagonists support each other and achieve each other's success. The writing about dog food is very good, and the daily writing is very touching. The setting is reasonable and the training chapters are well written. It has a fairy flavor and is very suitable. Cultivation as an immortal is more than just killing monsters and grabbing treasures. Cultivation as an immortal is about being a human being and becoming an immortal step by step! Ignore those mindless trolls, maintain your style, and cultivate the pure flow of immortal literature.

This book is great, written very warmly, and also has a human atmosphere. There are many uncertainties in life, and your own preferences and feelings are guiding your life. The Buddhist Heart Sutra is even more interesting. It has its own understanding of life and freedom. From joining a sect, it is full of human atmosphere! This is a healing book with my own understanding of freedom. It has a very correct viewpoint and a correct feeling of life. Good luck to the author!

Why do today's Xianxia always like to have a relationship with the government? The protagonist is either a policeman or a soldier. Those who seek immortality come from the ordinary world and leave in search of immortality. It is not said that they will be transcendent and refined at the beginning of seeking Taoism, but they should not fall into the earthly world. Once you enter the system, over time, you will achieve fame and fortune through your pursuit of Taoism, and you will also become a person who is wise in the world through your cultivation of immortality.

The writing is smooth and the emotional lines are delicate. I hope the author can clarify the power system a little bit. I was a little confused when I read it, but overall it is a good book.

It started again. This couple has been married for decades, why are they still like two eggs? Is this how you dote on your wife? The heroine makes people inexplicably irritated as soon as she appears, which is really an amazing skill.

He keeps flirting with that woman. The author of flirting should go to the romance section and show off his talent in Nanpin.

Worry, I came from Jian Zong. Let me complain. The plot of your book is not a bit slow, but too slow. Moreover, the three golden chapters at the beginning of the novel are too written to make people want to read. The plot is not fast, but it cannot be too slow. Jian Zong, you can at least start with Jian Zong. Jian Zong has written this book. Taoism has not appeared yet, and it has been using the Buddhist Heart Sutra. It's not that it can't be done, but I always feel uncomfortable. Taoism also has books on the mind, and the "Eternal Purity Sutra" is very good. There is also "Saving People Sutra" for saving people. Why must I write about Buddhism? I personally hate Buddhism. If it weren't for the Sword Sect, I might have given up on the Heart Sutra. So, can you please not over exaggerate the Buddhist Heart Sutra? Some Buddhist and Taoist scriptures are included, and can the plot be a little faster?

I have written more than 100 chapters about the protagonist's journey from the age of 16 to 17, and the protagonist may not be 20 until the end. The protagonist can learn any spell and achieve perfection in a short time. People have many difficulties, but the protagonist can succeed casually. These are a bit poisonous, but the writing and story are good and worth reading!

The story is well written, and the male and female protagonists are quite sweet. However, the emperor who seeks immortality and the secret guard who gradually turns to evil ways (searching the world, and confronting the Netherworld for this purpose) are really unpopular. I don't know how the protagonist will choose among several forces in the end, so I'll vote for the monthly vote first 😁

It was good at first, but suddenly he started flirting with girls, and the level suddenly dropped, and the dog meat was no longer on the table!

Seven monthly votes have been cast and no refinement will be added

A new book is coming out so soon, you old scalper

After reading Chapter 124, I couldn't stand it anymore. Is this a fairy novel or a female romance novel? It's far worse than the previous one.

There is a heroine, I don't like it, pursuing the high road is the right way

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Wishing Season"} At the end, the daughter of Wang Qi (Su Li's son in his previous life) married the son of Su Li (Wang Qi's father in his previous life). I felt something was very wrong. I thought there should be a side story - Wang Qi and Su Li met again!

Refining and refining

The novel ends with flowers! ! The novel is good. It takes over the world of "Sword Sect Side Sect" and also creates a new training system. However, Wang Qiyi has the same talent as his father Su Li - the talent of swordsmanship. The opening of the game is full of imagination and practice, the middle period is about invincibility, and the later period of the interstellar plot is not something I want to watch. I hope the author's next novel will be more interesting and more imaginative.

The author, the background of this Han Dynasty replica is also speechless. Liu Che, just make Lu Che

A novel, no matter what the final ending is, at least the author has no eunuchs and gives everyone an ending, which I think is pretty good. I have read so many novels, and when you think about it at the end, you may have read a lot and feel that this one is not as good as this one. Of course, there are also many perfect works that everyone thinks are perfect. When there is comparison, there is a gap. Novels are nothing but coincidences. The author may have repeated words too much. This is a shortcoming. Just point it out and let him change it. When I see a group of people saying that this is not good, it is too bad, I would like to put it bluntly and let you write it. What words can you think of to use to express turning points, exclamations, and questions? An author who can express clearly in a short sentence is already better than most people. After all, it is a story. It is very powerful to leave room for everyone's imagination. They are all here to have fun. In the end, don't let your own ideas mislead other readers. You don't want someone to like it. No one is perfect. I hope the author can have other ideas. Better novels, about cultivating immortals and interspersed with comedy. As long as you don't start a harem, I think there won't be any problems. Those books about harems end with love and love. There is really no love in this kind of daily life. I have read too much and it is similar. Why not delve into other aspects Come on, don't let everyone down.

{"TopicId":"803665280248184832","TopicName":"Internet Article Filling Festival Wishing Season"} What about the meeting of the century between Su Li and Wang Qi? Come on!

I like the character of this protagonist very much, he is kind but not a virgin (that's what I see anyway), but the only uncomfortable thing is that the emotional line with the heroine is so crooked! It's not that I don't like the female lead, but just watching the male lead's scenes makes me feel smoother and more motivated to watch!

It can be generally divided into three realms: Qi training: Inner Qi, True Qi The overall practice in this realm is to temper the True Qi. In order to practice Qi better, there is a "foundation building" state: opening up the meridians and building the foundation. And "heartbeat" is the transition between foundation building and Qi training. Power comes from the soul. Sincerity is the result of true Qi. Only by having a flexible mind can you practice Qi better. So, the next three realms are: foundation building, heartbeat, and Qi training Yuan Shen: Zhen Qi As the name suggests, this realm is to condense the Yuan Shen. To condense the soul, three souls and seven souls must be integrated into one. The human soul and seven souls are already in the body; the earth soul is the thoughts generated by the intersection between oneself and the external environment, which are around the body; only the heavenly soul is a ray of heaven and earth spirituality at the beginning of a person's birth. This is why the Yin Shen Realm exists: to find and hone the earth soul, that is, the Yin Shen leaves the body. Yang Shen: Fairy Qi Mana, also known as "the power of construction"