The Yellow Court and the Myriad Worlds

After reading Chapter 70, how many things happened? First, the master died, then there were military disasters, trapping and killing of powerful officials, animal disasters, wars with other clans, and reform. For a clan with a population of tens of thousands, so many things happened in just a few months? About 10,000 people died in total, of which 4,000 or 5,000 were soldiers and private soldiers? Old people, children, women, and adult men? Is it possible to recruit troops just like this? Want reform? You don't even know how to recuperate after the war. People are dead, so why are you still fighting? There are so many things written in the seventy chapters, and at least twenty of them are about cultivation. How about writing martial arts secrets? How much other space is left to write about characters, politics, and war? Are you writing an outline? While it's just getting started, revise it. The outline is still okay. The data logic should be more rigorous. The writing style should be grounded. Don't use so many fake and empty words without any story content. Character portrayal, political connotation and complexity, war description, geographical strategy should be put into more effort.

The natal card of the prince of Wu Kingdom is in the hands of the general of Wu Kingdom. . . The god-level protagonist actually rides thousands of miles to support. . . So poisonous! No match for fighting spirit!

I want to talk about it, why is the protagonist so small-minded and jealous? The golden finger is basically so wide open. There is no room for people who will become immortals and ancestors in the future. This person also wants to be a king! I don't want to develop the economy and lead my people to become stronger, but I always want to make trouble! When he killed the head of the Luo family (right?) Before, it could be said that he had no choice but to gain power, but now that he knew his father's actions but still paved the way for himself, he felt resentful towards his loyal ministers. I don't know what the purpose of the author's arrangement is, but at least it shows that the protagonist no longer looks like an emperor. He is forcing the people to rebel, and he is fooling himself!

I just don't understand why there are so many conspiracies and tricks in a world where gods and demons live in the world and one man is an army. Are you afraid that your subordinates will rebel after being defeated? Can people at the bottom really succeed in their rebellion? In such a world, the strong will only get stronger and the weak will only get weaker. Where does the ability to rebel come from?

How dare you change your vest when the other one is still not updated?

If you can't do even one update, no matter how good you are, it's useless.

Just like the original heavens. There are all kinds of magical strategies, which make people feel not domineering. Yes, it just gives people the feeling that the protagonist is very awesome and high-minded, but he feels aggrieved when something happens. There is nothing wrong with the fighting, but it feels like there is something wrong with the description of the protagonist's character, just like the original.

This is a palace fight, not fantasy.

Stop bragging about how awesome the pig's feet are and how awesome the treasures are. Seven of the ten chapters are useless boasts. In the end, no matter who you are with, you will have to fight for several chapters. If you go on like this, your character will be ruined. Who cares?

At the beginning, I thought it was about cultivating immortals, but then it was actually the flow of Qi Luck Divine Dynasty Fighting for Hegemony, but it is not the same as 4. Immortals don't look like immortals, and gods and demons don't look like gods and demons. Fighting for hegemony is not as exciting as fighting for hegemony, so I just fight within my own family every day. Talking about the fighting in the land of Gu and Yue, and then a few came out who said they have the image of the Ming Lord. After dozens of chapters, let's talk about the first place in the main land, the Immortal Gu Yue, Within a few chapters, the leader of the Lu family was forcibly raised to the same level as Pig's Knuckle, and then he said at the beginning that Pig's Knuckle had the best army in ancient Yue, and then when the fight started, there were 80,000-level troops among them, and then he said that he didn't understand the opponent's formation very well, and asked his ministers to risk their lives to explore, and then they fought the boss, and the protagonist actually got in his face and killed him? When the two sides are fighting against each other, they can use all their troops but not the ancestors who press the box, and let the pig's feet be killed by their advanced cultivation. But once there is intrigue, they can call a bunch of ancestors to come out and fight.