The Almighty Swordsman of One Piece

This book has some strength, and it's okay if it's refreshing. It's not that bad. The only thing holding it back is that it was put on the shelf too early, and even pirated copies don't have your book (full version). The sudden death should be because the author didn't find an editor to test the waters and promote it on the shelves. Waiting for recommendations First of all, this system never explains whether the ability is permanent or switchable. On devil fruits, fruits in animal form are generally switchable, In Chapter 8, using skills that increase strength is also a switch, But later there will be situations where strength talent, swordsmanship talent, and Devil Fruit ability are added This is inconsistent, Of course, the average reader would like to see the fusion of fruit abilities, how to become abnormal The second point is the gloves that "eat" the Devil Fruit, This is the top technology of naval technology, how come just a small pirate group has it? Although it does not affect the reading, it is best to add two sentences of dialogue. For example, the protagonist asks the other party how you got it, and the other party proudly says how it is. This at least makes sense Then in Chapter 27, the protagonist says that he cannot get the bounty, so the head is useless No, many of them are the same. The protagonists of novels about pirates with bounties all choose the black market, exchanging heads for money, and letting the other party collect the bounty and take a commission. In this way, the protagonist also has funds to hunt pirates. Another point is that the protagonist often robs pirates, but apart from touching the corpses to gain skills, there is no description of the treasures on the pirate ships. They are rich after all when they go to sea, right? So far I have only seen one sale of a boat and made some money.

The plot of letting Fiya, the ship's doctor, board the ship is too blunt, like being forced into danger. A good man is the protagonist's savior. The protagonist asked her to follow him in danger to do business with the Capone gang. Why didn't she leave with the fisherman and his son? Later, considering that letting Fiya leave would be targeted by the Capone gang, Fiya's life was not peaceful. It was not the protagonist who had to take her there. Otherwise, would the Capone gang know about Fiya? The protagonist also completely blamed the gang. Although I know it is necessary for the plot, it feels too blunt, as if you are leading a good guy to do bad things. If a good guy doesn't want to be a bad guy, he will be mistaken for a bad guy. Fiya could have lived a peaceful life, but now she has become a pirate that everyone shouts about. Wouldn't her parents who were killed by pirates be happy if they knew about it? Having said all this, I just want to express my feelings. I guess a lot of people will come to criticize me, saying that I don't want to watch it, so I'll take the blame myself. You can do whatever you want. I hope the author's writing will get better and better, come on, I'm optimistic about you!

One Piece or Darkness is more exciting, and the light and funny ones are usually written for oneself.

The idea is good but the writing is lacking. Personally, I feel that lawful evil is better among pirates.

The deserted scene backstage was very uncomfortable. To be honest, the support of readers is really the biggest motivation for the author's creation. Every time I see someone commenting and voting for recommendations, I feel that I am more passionate about creation when I am not playing alone. Well, in order to encourage voting, I decided to create a voting update. The rules are as follows: Whether it is Qidian or QQ Reading, if more than 100 pieces are recommended this week, an additional chapter will be added. The total number of recommended votes for QQ Reading this week is now 29. You can see this when voting. There is no fraud.

I'm afraid it will suddenly disappear~! ! ! !

Dear readers, the author has published a new book. The author is a bit stupid and forgot to post a chapter before finishing the book. Therefore, the popularity of the new book is also explosive😅. If you have recommendation votes and like the author, please support it😁 One Piece: Pets Are King

The setting is good, but I disagree with the specific content! What's the use of finding a bunch of ordinary people on board? The battle in the West Sea is all fought by the protagonist alone! The bond of the pirate companions is not described, and the combat power of the companions is not! Why would the protagonist go to the Grand Line if he doesn't have a clear goal? No ideals! Also, you knew you had brought Robin on board the ship but you still didn't get up and develop and went directly to the Grand Line? This is the protagonist, otherwise I don't know how he died.

Readers, if you feel uncomfortable reading the book, feel free to complain here! Give an example. A reader posted that this book is extremely poisonous and that anyone who likes it is mentally retarded. I will definitely delete such posts. Because your taste does not represent everyone's taste, if there are handsome guys who don't read my book because of your bad reviews, wouldn't I feel bad for you? So come here and spray it, I won't delete it.

It's so miserable (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄), give the author a thumbs up from the front row

Everyone wants to kill you, pig's feet don't even dare to kill a soldier, saint, don't watch anymore

So there will be no updates this week. This week's goals are as above. 15 Tickets a day can reach the goal, I think I can try for it.

Found by chance

(っ╥╯╰╥C) Keep up the good work, this week's goals are the same as last week's. More than one hundred plus one update!

It's a belated ending. Don't say that no one supports you at all. At least I gave you a reward. If you think it's too little, I'll give you 10,000 coins later. Really, believe in yourself. The quality of your writing, the ability system, the fullness of the characters, the plot setting, etc. Are all acceptable. I don't have it. To be honest, I am also an author. I have been writing for many years. As a reader, I have read countless online articles. If it is not popular, maybe it is really not recommended. Because there are too many well-written online articles that have not been discovered by readers Two words, come on. Add two more words to encourage each other. Don't forget to support me when I publish a new novel and give me some feedback.

Generally speaking, there are a lot of typos. I can't check them out when I finish writing. I can only see them when I read them once they are published. So after each update, I will read it myself. At this time, there is a high probability that I will correct some typos and very small descriptions. So I recommend: When you find a recent update, don't look at it immediately, because there may be typos, and I am revising it. It's best to wait for ten minutes before reading. At this time, the latest and best content without typos will be available!

If you have any suggestions for the author, plot or characters, please come here.

The body shape of the Neptune class is not equal to that of humans, and the power given is inappropriate. If it were an ant, it would be okay. After all, it is normal for a Neptune class to have such a large body and have such power. This is not a talent, it is the ant type. If you take away the talent of the insect class, wouldn't you be invincible in minutes?

It's so poisonous that I didn't even know what to practice before. A swordsman who doesn't practice swords keeps using other people's skills to fight, and they can't use them together. If you accept this setting, how can you become stronger by using other people's skills? Can you have sex with a major general without practicing in the early stage? A major general must be proficient in the six moves, and some are even domineering. How can you fight them? What's the use of this name if you don't practice swordsmanship?

Just make do

Hehehe

The updates in the past few days were really not good, and the updates were interrupted continuously. I said that I finished reading it in one go And to be honest, after two months and a year, the less this kind of writing appears, the better, otherwise the One Piece novel that only needs 800,000 words to be completed is too much. .

Ahem, I know Luo Lin is a time traveler but I haven't taken action myself yet. I'm a little drunk too.

Already noted. Probably during the National Day, I will try my best to pay off the debt.

Hehehe

Hehehehe, I couldn't find a picture of a man, so I'll just make do with it😄.

Alas, I stopped updating for two days, and now I stop updating for three days. How can I keep updating for the sake of more than 4,000 fans? If nothing else, it's always easy to update every day when your enthusiasm is down, right? Really don't become addicted to breaking updates. One day becomes two days, two days becomes three days, and finally one week and one month becomes annual updates. In that case, I won't be able to keep up. Maybe there aren't many people who have subscribed in the first place, and if you stop updating, they won't want to spend money to watch. And it's really not okay for you to have no improvement in your performance. Why don't you ask the editor for recommendations? Really, if you recommend it several times, the popularity will not be so low, because the quality of your book is good, And if you stop updating simply because the popularity has not improved, it will be a vicious circle, I think no matter what, if you have enthusiasm, at least write well After finishing the first book, please give more recommendations for the second new book. If you don't write about the popularity, you should at least have more than 10,000 recommendation votes. If you are lucky, it will be hundreds of thousands or hundreds of thousands of recommendation votes, and your income will also explode. Although the competition is more fierce now, there are not a few books that become popular in the new book period, and they are still quite promising.

Well, you can fight with the Major General in the early stage. The key is that the Major General doesn't even know how to be domineering! 🤫

I remember you can ask for a recommendation after finishing a novel. Can you try asking? Because you have never asked for a recommendation and are self-sufficient, the editor, out of shame, should give you a recommendation after you finish the book. Even if you fail, it depends on whether your emotional intelligence and words can get this recommendation. Really, a rubbish recommendation is much better than writing a book without recommendation. Strive for more. Then I know about the group, because it can't be found by searching people, so I said I can't add you. I added you as the group leader, which should be you.

The description of the protagonist's character is not very good. When he killed the captain and the fat man, he didn't feel any fluctuations in his heart. The description of his heart is not good. The protagonist is a time traveler, not an aborigine. At most, he just kills chickens. How can he kill people without feeling any fluctuations at all? I'm still reading it later. I'll comment after I finish it.