The God of Death: Forced to Open Business

At once. . . Quite helpless. The author really doesn't realize that his biggest failure is the emotional drama? You should be able to tell by reading the replies. Basically, the people who complain are all about the strange setting and the emotional drama. The former is almost always the same regardless of the fanfic, but as long as the latter appears, it must mean that the author has a big problem with his writing style for emotional drama. . . I am too lazy to talk about objectifying women in boxing, so I will just talk about awkward chats and logic. In the early days, almost all the chats I saw with female characters were awkward chats. That is, if there is such a woman in reality, if you say this to her in this situation, the other party will 100% think you are a retarded person. . . I was really speechless when I saw it. Actually, awkward chatting is not a big problem. After all, awkwardness may only be a matter for a few people. What makes me speechless is that the logic started to explode. Did the author really not feel it? In order to forcefully write an emotional scene, he flirted with the vice-captain girl he just met. When the other party obviously (forcibly) likes you, he inexplicably forced to flirt with the next girl who just had his first time in public. I met a strange woman, and made a unilateral agreement with the "strange woman" that if I lose, I will fulfill one of my requirements, and she forced me to look like she had nothing to do with the vice-captain (you have a bad memory, you should remember that I just flirted with you), no matter how you make excuses as the author, the plot in the book is just like this, the logic is so rotten, and there is no room for a circle. Of course, all the rest of your plots are actually fine and the writing is okay. I originally thought about skipping the emotional drama, but in the end, you deliberately wrote a separate chapter for the emotional drama to ask for your opinion on whether to have a harem? It's really just that I don't have a good sense of my writing skills. This rhythm is to bring out the worst parts of my writing. It's terrible, it slipped away. This is just a purely subjective complaint. It does not mean that anyone has any reference, but in summary It is not a romantic drama. This book is worth reading. If it is included, it is not even worthy of passing the time. But I only stayed at the single chapter "Should I have a harem?". Because of this single chapter, I had a premonition that the rest of it would be too disgusting, so I abandoned the book. I actually hope that I can really get rid of this rotten, smelly and broken relationship drama later on, and write a normal plot, but the subsequent story has nothing to do with me, the person who left. Above.

I feel that there are relatively few books written by my mother, and there are many non-Emirati texts in this type of lottery, which makes me feel quite uncomfortable. In fact, mediocre luck is the actual situation of most people. It is normal to have occasional bursts of luck and occasional bad luck. Why are there so-called African chiefs? It's not just about making money in game operations by operating in secret. I traveled through time, and when I received Goldfinger, I asked for a non-Chief, which felt quite uncomfortable (I was shot directly, and I felt like the non-Chief inside was me 😭). I'm sorry that I can't give birth to a human being (Open Net Yiyun. Jpg)

It was too complicated, and I wanted to write it to be funny and also add fighting, but the result was that it just didn't work, and it didn't measure up.

You are so poisonous at the beginning, you are so unfeminine, and you are drooling. The diaosi's temperament comes to my face.

In fact, there are a lot of things I don't want to say. If you want to read a book, if you like it, keep reading; if you don't like it, just click ❌ and it's over. Not everyone has the time to look at the comments and sneer at the heavens and the earth! Some time ago, I was very excited after hearing the news that "Death" will be animated later. Everyone came here when they were in the second grade of middle school, and they all have a certain fondness and concern for things that they have deeply felt about. So during that time, I was frantically searching for information and fan fiction related to "Death"; after reviewing the relevant settings I was familiar with, I wanted to see how the current fan fiction has improved compared to the ones in my memory (after all, the fan fiction I have read before was a second setting when the work was not completed). The result... In fact, everything is afraid of comparison. After all, without comparison, you don't know whether "Xiang" can be eaten! ! I have seen many posts before comparing the question of who is stronger between Sensei and Goku. I just want to say "Xiang eats too much"! Is there anything comparable? Two different works, two different settings, and two authors with different ideas. Sorry, I got off track. In the past, there was no official announcement of the completion of the "Bleach" animation and manga; there were many pitfalls that were not filled in, and the novels that came out of the second set could be read with gusto. Now that the setting is complete, there is actually no book that can be read. There is no real content other than jokes. Can you believe it? The ridiculous plot and the completely inconsistent Golden Finger that appeared in the second design are still available now, can you believe it? There are so many fans, but the only ones that can be read are the short stories in Anorectal Korduk Army. Can you believe it? Later I believed it, even if I don't believe it, I have to believe it...

Pursuing the goal of sexy women can turn off a lot of people. The timeline is too fast. I met the protagonist group just a year after arriving in the world of Death. What should I write next? There are so many pitfalls in animation. It's not bad to push the timeline forward a few hundred years.

Also, let me explain the consequences of asking someone in Soul Society if they know a Shinigami named Kurosaki. First of all, if all of this happened at the beginning of everything, when the captain of the fifth division was still Hirako Mako, then Kurosaki's surname represents Soul Society's mortal enemy, the noble surname of the Quincy family, just like in the former Soviet Union, asking a person if he knew anyone named Rothschild. No matter who you are, you will be targeted and even imprisoned in endless hell. If you are targeted by Aizen, everything about you will be asked. Including you are a time traveler. If this happened at the beginning, when Aizen became the captain of the fifth division, and Rukia had become the chief officer of the thirteenth division and was preparing to be stationed in reality, then your question might be overheard by Nirvana from the Technology Development Bureau, and then you would be captured as experimental material. If Kurosaki Ichigo has become the acting god of death, then you don't even need to ask, you can hear things about Kurosaki Ichigo every day. In addition, regarding Ryugen Ishida saying that he is the last Quincy, he is referring to his last name. Rather than referring to himself. In addition to Ryusen, the current Quincy also has his female assistant, and Uryū Ishida. Finally, what I want to tell you is that Kurosaki Masaki was the person he started to target from the very beginning, that is, after Aizen made the human form of Minotaur. You are in Soul Society at this time, and asking someone if they know a person named Kurosaki under Aizen's nose is as conspicuous as holding a searchlight in the dark night.

Women's clothing is impossible (so fragrant)

It's really yours, you start with a strong sense of being a loser, and you have the strength to persuade you to quit! Farewell!

How many people still regard reiatsu as a special energy of the Shinigami? Does every use of Kidō consume spiritual pressure? ? How did you come up with this weird concept? Reiatsu, a setting in the comic "Bleach", refers to the density of a person's soul. (Including judging the survival of the god of death) Respiratory power is like chakra. The higher the density, the more powerful it is. Reiatsu can also be understood as the energy of the god of death. Reiatsu can also be understood as a pressure similar to gravity, because it is often mentioned in anime that once a captain-level character releases a large amount of reiatsu, the opponent will usually fall to the ground and cannot stand up. The God of Death uses spiritual power as energy consumption. Reiatsu is the intensity of spiritual power. The higher the spiritual power intensity, the more spiritual power can be mobilized at one time. However, it does not mean that every time a Shinigami uses Kidō, spiritual pressure is consumed, spiritual pressure will not be consumed. Reiatsu is similar to an aura. But for the God of Death, this aura is real. Just like every time old man Yamamoto begins to recover, the spiritual pressure will be so compressed that the Shinigami below the vice-captain level will tense up, soak with sweat, and be unable to breathe. Just like the later version of Aizen, the souls of ordinary people were instantly crushed into nothingness by spiritual pressure just by getting close to him. The God of Death has always consumed spiritual power. Reiatsu will not be consumed! So please ask the author to modify it. You can at least not mislead others.

Never read harem stories, it's not like it used to be. Now when I see harem stories, I reflexively want to quit. I originally came here for the plot of the fan fiction, but later it turned into an emotional drama that was very disturbing. If you want to read about finding a woman, just read the articles specifically written about this kind of plot, why bother reading fan fiction 😭. Especially when the author's writing is still very good, he suddenly discovers that he has a harem, and it is very painful to end it, and he really can't stand it 😭😭.

It's very toxic, Goldfinger doesn't go well with the God of Death, I can't stand it after reading Chapter 10 The time travel point is too late, Renji has already become the vice-captain, which means that the plot will start in a few months, and I can't understand how the protagonist can reasonably participate in the subsequent plots (I didn't read the rest of the story, so I persuaded him to quit) In my opinion, if Mr. Yamamoto found out about the protagonist's abnormality, he would probably take action directly, especially in Chapter 35, the protagonist brags that he has omniscience and omnipotence with his Zanpakutō. Isn't this a head-on attack?

If a virgin author doesn't know how to write emotional dramas, then he shouldn't write them. There is a certain level of humor in making fun of yourself. If you write it like this, it will be embarrassing to watch.

No wonder, there are so few recommended tickets and monthly tickets. It seems to be for no reason. I just traveled through time and knew which world I was in. The first thing I thought about was picking up girls. Most people hate this. It's so poisonous (the poison of Celestial Silkworm Poison)

Well done

After reading ten chapters, I personally felt that the protagonist made too many complaints. It was completely a book written by the author for myself to read. I couldn't get enough of it. Anyway, it was very embarrassing and painful for me to read!

I feel that the author's creativity is good, but I personally struggled a bit with the previous photos. I guess the author did not make many detailed outlines and just followed his feelings. Also, I feel that the author thought too well about the powerful ruling class of feudal society and the nobles of Soul Society. Although the original work also has a background, the key point is that the protagonist is a person who buys goods. In a society with a solidified class, who wants to get ahead is not a bloody mess. In the early stage, he has no background and no strength, so the source of the goods is questionable. . . The main character who sells goods has a smooth journey. I can only say that the halo makes people smart, and the pretense is a bit awkward. I wrote a lot of props to exercise, but the battle ended immediately. . Probably not very good at writing battle scenes. . Also, I personally feel that the author is too hasty in cutting time and enters the plot all at once. The main source of the protagonist's strength is mentioned in one stroke. I personally feel that it is too superficial and has no foundation. Suddenly she is strong, suddenly she is pretending, and suddenly the boss is overthrown. In the end, I personally think the author made Yongyin good as the heroine, and the other supporting female characters do not feel that they have the strength and status to engage in emotional dramas. That's ridiculous. If the author doesn't write Zhutianliu, I think the fixed moon world will be fine. After all, there are already enough good things for the author to write. Too many worlds will collapse the power system. If the author really has an idea, I personally think it can be rewritten. After all, the foundation in the early stage is not solid, and it will be difficult to write later. Good ideas are rare. If you don't write well, it feels like a waste. I hope the author can work hard!

I've been poisoned again. Shen Nong, come and save me.

It's really annoying. I finally found a book about the Grim Reaper, but when the main character came in for a sexy big sister, I was immediately persuaded to quit. . .

The writing is too out-of-the-box, with all kinds of inner dramas, complaints, and it's completely self-pleasure.

Just writing this will make you become a Yu-Gi-Oh! What on earth did you write? I came here to see Death. You wrote more than 40 chapters of Yu-Gi-Oh! What do you want to do? The word count is low?

A hot-blooded novel turns into a commercial novel...

Why are there so many books about the God of Death, but none of them dare to solve the problem of the star that opens up the sky and the earth? Are you afraid that the power of a sword that explodes the world will be too powerful to keep writing?

The truly all-knowing and all-powerful God cannot be killed because he is all-knowing and all-powerful.

The author has a suggestion: just write your next novel without a female protagonist.

Let me tell you my personal opinion. This book was okay in the early stages, although it wasn't perfect, but it didn't have major problems. Later on, the plot became quite conflicting, and I skipped reading the Yu-Gi-Oh section. It's such a mismatch. If you traveled back hundreds of years to slowly develop and accumulate strength, and then interspersed your daily life with Yu-Gi-Oh! To destroy the Jing Ling Ting, it would be a bonus for sand sculpture entertainment. But at this point in time. The war started right away. The protagonist just finished educating Unohana Retsu and said he was impatient, and then suddenly started playing cards. . Although I know this is a way to become stronger, it really doesn't work. . 😥

It only takes 17 months from the beginning of the plot to the thousand-year bloody battle in Death. How do you make the protagonist invincible?

The design of Zanpakutō's skills is a bit strange, and I can't stand it anymore.

Just one sentence, no sense of substitution, it's awkward to give a Chinese name in Japanese comics

It's starting to get boring seeing me fighting against the nobles.