Travel Through Time at the Same Time, but If One Dies, the Entire Army Will Be Annihilated

Jiang Mingzi: Interesting Dharma Corpse, not only did he not run away, but he was still hanging around the successor of the Three Truths Tongyue Order. I will give you two Three Truths Mingzi Swords. Duan Xinglian: Dharma corpse? , Let me tell you a story that only I know, "You are gone" Dharma Corpse Gao Haoguang: Family members, "Who knows, there is a Dharma Corpse jumping in the face and taunting, giving you face" Sanwang Sword Formation Talisman. The corpse is performed in the same place as the sun and the moon. If the head is exposed, it will take seconds. Those who lie to you will be killed if they don't show it.

I thought it was okay in the early stages, but when I saw the wrong chapter, I felt like I'd eaten a fly and couldn't stand it anymore. It feels too much to bully an innocent passerby who the bully likes when you can't beat someone who bullies you! ! ! I've already been killed, and I don't want to kill him back when I get stronger. Instead, I thought about making God sick in his long life, and I felt really speechless.

Is the protagonist's brain a bit 🐷, was it deliberately designed by the author? Anyway, it looks weird. It's not like I've never seen a protagonist with a stupid brain, but he's also stupid and loves to use his brain. It's really not common. You don't know how stupid you are, right?

Author: Have you ever thought about a question? If one of the protagonists dies, all will be destroyed, but the transformation of strength is limited by the world view. A protagonist in the city who is not very strong can be killed with a pistol, but this peer who cannot break a concrete wall will cause the stars and the universe to explode and the protagonist will die together. And even if no accident occurs, a hundred years later, the protagonist of the urban style will die, and all other worlds will be wiped out!

He is a good brother with one mouthful, and he is stabbed in the body with one knife.

Freya charms the protagonist? ? ? Tsk, this introduction... Even if the traveler's heart is not black... He is also colorful, how can he be pure white... When the character who takes advantage of others' danger falls on Freya and is killed by her younger brother, then the protagonist is the way to go 🤭

If one person dies, everyone will die. This setting cannot even reach the later stage First of all, everyone will be afraid that others will die for various reasons. For example, accidents, vendettas, enemies that cannot be fought, long-term fear of the death of others, the pressure of causing one's own death, and many others. Secondly, as long as people find that their death is related to something, people will try to influence and manipulate it, etc. This leads to some of them using some methods to control others, such as using language skills to control them to become magic weapons, lichs, etc., Reducing their autonomy and accidents. Over time, they will find that this space does more harm than good, and their own unknown risks will increase with the number of people. The author also added an upper limit on strength. Those who are strong are safe and those who are weak are not safe. In conclusion, I can't think of any good way for them to survive.

In addition, the protagonist's life is in his own hands, which is a bit inconsistent with the Naruto world. If you defect, change your appearance and improve your strength in an unknown little ninja village or in some theater versions, it would be fine. But you were captured by ANBU, and whether you live or die depends on other people's eyes, so it doesn't look very good.

Among books of the same type, this one is relatively poor, with many poisonous points. You don't have to read it until you've read a few chapters.

It must have used a lot of AI, the writing is too literate, and secondly, it is the first time I have seen an author put shit in the introduction, which is unprecedented. . . . No one has written about the Zhutian section in eight lifetimes.

You can write a jojo. Whether it is the golden spirit or the dark will, before it becomes stronger, it is a bonus to get into the sight of the boss, and there is also a substitute as a way to gain easy power. Even if you are afraid of dying, you can train to the extreme and naturally awaken your substitute. Anyway, sharing is easy

The whole thing is the introduction of the above introduction, and the writing is really literary and youthful.

The author is considering adjusting the length of the chapters. I want to eat it in one breath and I can't tell what the taste is.

I read it again from the first chapter and it was very creative. One death, all death, is particularly suitable for writing about the kind of people who are reluctant to win even if they have a 98% chance of winning. Kamen Rider World is okay, because I know the plot, and there are no particularly strong bosses, so I can still get through it by playing steadily. Although the Dicuo World has attracted attention, God cannot die, and the death rate is still very low. As long as you are steady, everything will basically be fine. This is the world of Naruto, it's so confusing. There are many masters, and jumping around can easily lead to death. It's Uchiha again, the accidental death rate is too high. I have no interest in watching Naruto World.

I'm thinking, as a member of the organization, it doesn't matter if you kill the people in the organization and don't run away, but you also have to take the initiative to go back. If people follow the rules, you should kill them. Should you go back and give them their heads? While saying this, are you looking down on Konoha? On the other hand, he kills people in the organization without any thought. If you don't run away quickly after taking action, you have to go back. What kind of GP principle is this? If a soldier kills his comrade, he will definitely have to go to court-martial. He deserves to die. So why don't you just run away if you kill me? How on earth did you come up with this?

There is a saying that he is too naive in the dungeon, and everyone helped him to prevent him from dying. However, this little brat planned to die with Freya. There is a saying that there is a person who is born enough.

The author basically added a setting of life and death in order to suppress the combat power, making the novel depressing throughout. Because even in peaceful daily life, I have to worry about other people dying. How can I not be depressed? And there may be some fun points later on, but the fun points in the dungeon are basically useless, and the subsequent plot is not promising. After all, it is too difficult to kill Freya. Other gods will basically not help their subordinates to be strong and powerful. Unless the deus ex machina descends, it is impossible to kill Freya in a short time. Not going to kill? Even more stupidly, treating the protagonist like a dog and torturing him without killing him, then this article is not a waste but a poisonous point. More importantly, it is impossible to write without Freya first. The favor needs to be updated from time to time, so it is extremely difficult to write. And most people who watch fan fiction or time travel at the same time want to watch a lot of exciting plots, but your way of writing basically ruins this path. It doesn't matter if the writing is good, but after reading the novel, I think you, the author, basically do not belong to this type.

The vote on whether to suppress or not is gone.

Do you want Douluo

After watching it, I personally like Kamen Rider World better. Because the setting is that if one person dies, everyone will die, so the protagonist should be very stubborn, not 80% sure, and will not do risky things. But Naruto is in a different world, and his development is not very good at the beginning. And this setting is a Sword of Damocles suspended above the head. The protagonist should be crazy to improve his strength, but if it is too unscrupulous to improve (for example: using a good person and then killing him. Using ordinary people for human experiments, treating human life as bread), I personally don't like to watch this kind of protagonist. So let's see what the author writes later.

I'm a kind-hearted person and don't want to see the protagonist suffer, so let me make a few suggestions One goes to Catachan to play extreme survival One goes to the Eastern Land and Tang Dynasty to defeat the Khan of Heaven One goes to be a human before the establishment of the Fairy Kingdom

You can add people, but don't switch the perspectives too much. Too many simultaneous perspectives won't look good. If you add too many perspectives, the old perspective won't be able to be followed up. It won't take long to connect, let alone if there are too many perspectives, the jump will be very short.

Author, you have been involved in so many things, can you still make money?🤔

Then he was forced to owe magic debt due to synchronized energy, and was forced to fight against the goddess of magic.

Shake, shake, shake, shake...