In the Dungeon, One Resurrection Coin Per Day

Although I can still read it, I still have to say that this book is extremely poisonous and you should not try it unless you are a Shennong. This book is extremely poisonous and only a Shennong like me can endure it.

It doesn't matter what the protagonist's language habits are. After all, the protagonist has his own influence of more than ten years. But why do people from other worlds in western fantasy call the protagonist brother when they greet him? The name of the passerby is also Xihuan.

This is studio writing, I guess, it was edited.

There is no interactive plot about a girl who has a crush on the protagonist. The appearance of such a character will really scare away many people.

I can't help myself when I read Chapter 12! Your overall structure has copied at least 70% of the "infinite evolution starting from adding points"! ! ! Does the author think that we readers are blind and cannot read? ? ?

The first few chapters just can't attract people, there's too much nonsense.

Overall, it seems to be light-hearted, not too tense, which is what I like (some books have protagonists who want to be in danger of death every second as soon as they have the ability to be resurrected, which makes reading too stressful and tiring) The author's thoughts can also be seen from the fact that the resurrection coins are accumulated daily but the balance is not mentioned afterwards. It's obviously written with no sense of crisis (the reader doesn't know how many resurrection coins there are = the author says there are as many as there are), but this idea is too obvious and seems too lax. You don't have to say exactly how many coins there are, but you need to have a rough number. For example, there are dozens of coins. There are more than a dozen coins, and how many coins have been obtained in a few days. (To write down as many coins as possible, just write down how many coins you have obtained.) Accumulation is a good point. You should always mention it. Even if it is a rough value, every time it exceeds 100 digits, it is something worthy of celebration for the protagonist. Writing this kind of thing will give you a sense of substitution. Of course, too many resurrection coins will be consumed, and you still need to have a sense of tension, otherwise you will collapse. Try not to exceed a hundred, or even more than a dozen. It is also fun to convert resurrection coins into actual income from time to time (the income must be large, but it must be proportional to the consumption, otherwise it will be difficult to write later) And since there is panel data, it should be displayed more! Even the slightest progress must be shown! It doesn't have to be the entire panel, but at least the skills that increase proficiency should be displayed from time to time. It is even recommended to show the panel every time you are resurrected, and also show the panel after a certain number of days. If you don't write about growth, what's the point of these experiences? For example, the author writes that the protagonist learned a lot from the archer, but no matter how detailed and specific you write, it is not as persuasive and satisfying as the panel that displays "Mastery: Wilderness Survival (new), Adventurer's Common Sense (new)". The natural authority of the panel allows you to use it like this! The author can speed up the pace appropriately, but don't make it too tight, otherwise it will be too disconnected from the original style. Write more about the acquisition of panel abilities and the accumulation of resurrection coins. From time to time, develop the skills of the fantasy works in the previous life, and take the initiative from time to time (the protagonist has initiative is a good point) to consume the resurrection coins and make a fortune silently.

Instead of playing muddy intrigues with a few ordinary people, it is better to be a formal professional who has undergone strict training and start taking risks. Anyway, you are not good at handling this kind of start, so you might as well just skip it and not write. I chase high-traffic imitations every day. Just because they are popular doesn't mean you can be popular. What are the advantages of this type of book?

It's Chapter 6 and I'm still focusing on writing the protagonist. Because he is an ordinary person, it makes sense for him to be so stupid. . . No, author, why would such a stupid person be the protagonist? You wrote this book to prove that as long as you give a golden finger, even a pig can survive menopause, right? But I don't think your golden finger is strong either! I'm happy now that I'm convinced.

It's a bit outrageous, this writing style, this description

Che Zhuluan talks too much and the details are not perfect. The Western Fantasy NPC uses an Eastern accent. Shouldn't "Xiongtai" be "bro"?

The pace is faster, kill monsters quickly, upgrade explosive equipment and put it into the dungeon. Also, don't you have an upgrade system? Another thing, hurry up and use the resurrection coins to upgrade to the limit.

It's judged to be unattractive. The protagonist's IQ is not high enough and he is stupider than what most people think of an ordinary protagonist. Of course, I can understand how someone who is not stupid can be resurrected, but it's not attractive. There should be other writing methods.

The first dozen or so chapters of this book are very similar to another book, but the other book published it more than a month before you did. Could it be that you borrowed it from the other book?

The writing is so bad, the conversation doesn't sound like a peasant in a Western fantasy at all, and it uses idioms, which really makes people laugh, and the supporting characters are even more clever.

After talking a lot, why don't you want to be a deserter? Is this the reason why you have to die after completing the standard? And it is obvious that the author is evaluating the protagonist, which means that the author ranks the protagonist's IQ at a lower level, which means that the author's IQ is higher than that of the protagonist. As we all know, the author's IQ is equal to the protagonist's IQ. Are there any people who have overturned the IQ, or those who are lower than the IQ? Generally, these are growth-oriented protagonists who like to torture the protagonist when they are always disgusted, so that they can learn from hindsight.

If you don't choose a career that rewards your destiny, you'll be wasting your golden finger.

Let's complain. It's really better to come up with your own ideas. It's better to integrate FGO's self-destruction skills and create your own profession than to borrow from others. If the same routine looks too similar, no one will watch it. You have to include 80% of the same routine with new things to be considered innovative and watchable.

Investigation report: "No." -351 Investigation target: "People in the dungeon, one resurrection coin every day" - Male protagonist - [Lynch] Investigation result: [Physical time travel] Judgment basis: Abnormal characteristics: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is a profession that investigates and records the time-travel situations of time-travelers. It aims to let observers (that is, readers) in all worlds know in advance the time-travel situations of time-travelers in this world, and volunteers to provide observers with quick time-travel information query services If there are any fallacies, I hope to correct them ——Wanling Feast Zhenjun Stay until August 30, 2025

The relationship scenes are funny, but the plot after meeting the nobles becomes normal.

I went next door to take a look. Basically, the general directions are borrowed.

74-75 The desire to watch has plummeted, and the conflict plot is extremely boring. If you criticize me for not saving me, you will be said to be inhumane, and this is the moral high ground.

It's good to read, but it's written in this way. It needs a lot of updates and support, otherwise I have to save books and read them together, otherwise I won't be able to watch the entire plot.

Author, I personally think your writing is very good. Just write at your own pace. All the monthly tickets will be given to you. Come on✊

Everything that needs to be laid has been laid, and the world view of Goldfinger is OK. Let's take off directly🛫

I couldn't stand it until I saw the charges, especially the part about saving people and angering the nobles. In a world with extraordinary beings, are you so arrogant and domineering that you're not afraid of offending someone you can't offend one day? Or are you so strong that you are not afraid of others retaliating later? If there's someone on the road that I'm going to run over, forget it, I can't stand it anymore.

It would be better if some Eastern sentences and expressions could be replaced with Western ones, otherwise it would be easy to cause drama.

The writing is good, Liangcao, but can the words be changed? I feel that words such as Elementary Dzogchen, Zhou Tian or Half-step Peak are more suitable for use in fantasy. The words used in Western fantasy are roughly classified into proficiency and proficiency.

There are so few updates, only 16 o'clock a day

Why haven't you seen those nobles yet?