Hogwarts Wizard

I have read Chapter 25. Except for the first few chapters and the rest, it is basically written according to the plot of the movie, but it has been converted into a text version. The protagonist has no sense of existence, just like an extra insignificant person. The characters who appear are not explained in advance, but suddenly appear. If you have not seen the movie, you can't understand it at all. I won't watch it for the time being. I hope the author will come up with his own original plot in the future, and at least integrate the protagonist into the original plot. Otherwise, it is better to watch the movie again. Save it for now and come back to look at it later.

I originally thought that after it was released, I would continue the story of Fantastic Beasts and try to find a way to obtain the wizard's abilities in the past story. I didn't expect that you would be reincarnated directly? What's the point?

So far, it's no different than watching a text version of the movie.

The plot unfolds too slowly. Although it may be due to the early plot, the combination of the plot is really... The language style is good and relatively relaxed and enjoyable. But so far, it is mainly copied from the original work. The original plot has not been developed yet Overall, it is still a book worth looking forward to.

The update is too slow. The combination of double updates and this kind of plot progress can be called a textbook for screening readers Free writing is certainly possible, but it is not like Shuicheng. This is possible if it is "shaping the protagonist's character and dealing with others". The most unpleasant thing to say is, "Is your transitional world connected to a million-word plot?" The protagonist has gone around in such a circle that he is not only a vase that gets beaten everywhere, but also gets no benefits (emphasis added, not to mention the benefits are not even a shadow). There are only a hundred words related to the three water rings of the elves, wisdom (the final interpretation belongs to the author), desire, and protection (the vicissitudes of farming for a hundred years), one gain, one negative, and one active. Only the eager and timid group show their existence. If you can't learn special magic in the world of Harry Potter, you can't expect Obscurus, a low-level substitute who is a supporter of the bench (spiritual body, pure melee, difficult to control, and can be hurt), to perform well. Fantastic animals are worthy of the word magical, they are just wonderful. Is that female cat planning to turn into a human again? The length is even comparable to that elf.

If the author doesn't arrange for the protagonist to become stronger, he will have no choice but to abandon the book. Everyone should have seen the movie, and no one will want to read the text version again.

It's quite interesting. I've collected it and invested in it. Come on.

An elf prince who lived for who knows how long after traveling across the earth and participated in the team that beat Sauron's Ring: Oh my God, this is the sea! Oh my God! This is a wizard! How powerful they are! ... I was vomited by my own reply.

Has the protagonist been watching the show🤫

I don't know about others, but I came here for the "elf" gimmick, but the protagonist ended up being reincarnated as a human? ? ! This is such a slap in the face that I almost want Ollie and me to fall in love with each other.

I just want to know, does the protagonist know the details of The Lord of the Rings before traveling through time, but doesn't know anything about Harry Potter? Even if you don't know Newt, doesn't Old Bee's name give you any impression at all? It would be okay if the protagonist was a native and not a time-traveler, but pretending not to know that he is a time-traveler is really heartbreaking! !

I subscribed to the first two chapters and discovered that the protagonist was actually reincarnated! The original elf bloodline is actually gone? ? ? Doesn't that mean you can't live forever? Do you know that the setting of the Elf Prince is what I want to see? Without this setting, is there any difference from other HP fans? I feel like all the good-looking HP fanfics are mixed with the settings of the two worlds, such as Game Time Watch and Harry Potter. What's more, the timeline jumps all of a sudden without any foreshadowing. When you meet those characters again in the future, you won't feel moved but just put on drama, okay? Originally, Lao Deng wanted to use the protagonist to open up the situation. I was quite looking forward to it, but you skipped it. How dare you make it more obvious that you don't want to follow an original plot line? Originally, everyone could understand that you were free, but in the future, if you meet the protagonist group at the beginning like other fan novels, I find it intolerable. Okay, I have picked out some of the things I don't like and told them. What do you have to say, author?

What are you doing, being rejected by the world, where does your affinity come from? The gods of nature are not the same anymore, so what is the use of your system? It can't solve any problems, and it also loses the Elven Throne. Being an elf prince for thousands of years has no pride at all. He gives up his elf identity as soon as he gives up. He has no sense of glory or epicness at all. The system is useless and he still relies on it. He has such a long lifespan and has various properties and affinity with magical animals. He doesn't find a way to reincarnate himself without saying a word. To put it bluntly, in reality, he is just a useless person. Legilimency and elf talents are directly related to the development of the soul. You can definitely work hard in this area. There is also animal affinity. The most likely thing is to run deep into the mountains and old forests for a while and be protected by a group of animals. Use soul spells to overcome the world's resistance and then start the plot. Your operation is to feed Xiang directly. Obviously, the simple essay pen is not bad, and it was quite interesting at first. However, after a wave of cool operations, all the interesting points were cut off, and then a huge buff was added to the poison point. Originally I thought it had quite a bit of potential. As for this book, I think it needs to be revised or restarted. As it is now, looking at the comment section, I guess it's a bit broken.

The scene where Nekomata turns into a human is really not good, unless she is the established heroine, and her character is not vulgar. We have accepted the elegant gentleman, and her graceful demeanor is now suddenly more romantic. The protagonist is essentially an elf over 3,000 years old. This twist is somewhat unacceptable. Furthermore, the protagonist is essentially over 3,000 years old, and has also gone through the period of protection. The protagonist should be the kind of person who looks at others with care and love for the younger generation (my own feeling, if it doesn't match other people's thoughts, just pretend I didn't say it), and will not be so interested in many things, because after all, he is an "old man" who has experienced the rise and fall of wars in Middle-earth for three thousand years. Reincarnation in the seven-part series is actually not a big problem, except that unless the protagonist is written as an elf with the same pointed ears as before, it will be very abrupt. My suggestion is to write it so that the protagonist awakens the elven bloodline of his ancestors and regains immortality and pointed ears. Actually, I always thought that it would be Dumbledore using Elrohir to deal with Grindelwald as a hidden line. I didn't expect that I was overthinking it. It just felt like the reincarnation was too fast and it felt rather abrupt. It would actually be better if this paragraph could be described more. I really like your writing style, but the recent plot twist is too abrupt and I'm not used to it. I'll wait for the author to write more. Many doubts may be explained later. I just want to complain, but I hope the author will continue to work hard!

What did you write? Come to see the elves and wizards, come to see Hogwarts, and then what? All about magical animals? After looking at more than a hundred pictures of the prince, he couldn't even cast the most basic magic. . . If you want to weaken the protagonist, then you can show his original strength. This is not respecting the original work, this is copying. After all, the Elf Prince, a supporting character who is very popular in the original Lord of the Rings, did not expect that after becoming the protagonist, he would not be as involved as the protagonist of Fantastic Beasts. After reading more than a hundred pictures, I feel that the main character is as dispensable as this book. The results are dismal and the main line is chaotic. . Well, I didn't see the main plot, I just saw the protagonist dawdling around. No, I didn't even have any participation, and I didn't write much about him. I didn't see the highlights, the feelings, or the results. Nothing.

After reading Chapter 7, I am still disappointed. So what if the surname is Elf after reincarnation? Isn't the protagonist still a human? Even if you later assume that the ancestors of the Elf family are elves, after so many generations, the protagonist is no longer an elf. Can he suddenly return to his ancestors and grow pointy ears and live forever? And it's very strange that his personality suddenly became wretched after reincarnation.

In fact, the author, you have been arguing, and we don't know what to say... If you think it is well written, please sign it downstairs. The comment area is now full of recent comments. (How many people applauded?)

In order to forcefully push the plot to Harry Potter's admission, the protagonist is suppressed from having no magic for the time being. Author, you are really showing off.

Is it true that this author is a ghostwriter? What I wrote about how much money Newt and the others paid in the beginning was disgusting later on. It felt like he was going to fall in love with Hermione and the others again, and then he didn't recognize Newt and the others. He obviously already had something to prove his identity, and the protagonist was obviously an elf prince. As soon as he came, he lamented how powerful the wizard was. He had lived for so long and had no means of attack. It was obviously natural. Even though I'm a child, I still can't use magic, and the author himself said that you can use magic by merging with the Obscurus, and you don't have to give up your body to reincarnate. Then you reincarnate as soon as it is released. I suggest that the author delete and rewrite it after it is released. I really can't stand it anymore. I only subscribed to "Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them" when I saw it written before, but it disappeared after it was released. Are you ghostwriting?

It's a good copy of the movie, but I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

I always feel like I've been reincarnated... The character of the protagonist has changed. I never thought that it would be better to learn magic this way or an elf.

I'm curious, how many people are still subscribing?

Apart from the poisonous egg novel, I have never seen such a poisonous novel.