The Final Cataclysm of the People’s Lords

The writing is messy and disorganized, and the plot is disjointed and confusing. It's best to avoid it. I even subscribed to 20 chapters of paid content to criticize some parts, but I didn't finish them and quit immediately.

Another protagonist trying to protect some rubbish. Protecting parents? Don't they know everyone on Qidian is an orphan? Go ahead and write about parents, then I won't say anything. Protecting love? Probably impossible. Protecting friendship? Utter nonsense.

What can I say? Aside from the protagonist, the entire Eastern faction is utterly vulnerable, while the Western faction is invincible. It seems like without the protagonist, the Eastern faction can't do anything. Is this kind of plot really interesting?

As long as you don't abandon the story, everything will be fine. Your writing style and the world-building you've created are enough to support a high-quality novel. Besides, there aren't many good lord-themed novels right now, so keep it up!

The fatalistic feel is too strong. It's basically a matter of whoever possesses a divine artifact, and the protagonist can only accept this fact without any resistance. As the protagonist, even when trying to steal a divine artifact, he's tricked into letting someone else take it by some so-called remnant soul. If this is what it means to be a ruler, then I have extremely low hopes for the future of the world the author has created.

I really can't help but complain. According to the author's calculations, the total area of ​​the Human Realm is approximately 1600 Earths. Then, each Earthling starts with 3000 people. This means that, excluding the native inhabitants, the Human Realm is twice as crowded as Earth. Even if the number of natives and newcomers were equal, the Human Realm would still be four times more crowded than Earth... Those who know, know what that means.

The opening is incredibly toxic. A campus beauty? Does your university even have such a title? With so many departments and no alumni, do I not know who I went to? Did I attend a fake university?

Why do people think the Human Emperor is stronger than the Heavenly Emperor? What kind of illusion is this? Don't you know who the Five Heavenly Emperors are? The Yellow Emperor in the center, Taihao in the east, Shennong in the south, Zhuanxu in the north, and Shaohao in the west?

To be honest, the protagonist isn't suited to be an emperor; he's only fit to be a henchman. He lacks the basic mindset and wisdom of an emperor. I skipped through parts of the story; he doesn't possess the demeanor of a ruler. All I saw was an ordinary person, not a leader of a faction.

The city wall was thousands of feet high. They just used a siege ladder to attack, and it even reached the top of the wall! Are siege ladders automatically retractable and electrically powered? 😅😅😅