The Orphan of Taitel Continent

Putting everything else aside, this score and word count are truly impressive.

Twin Dreams Faction Battle Point: Bei Yuqi Feng Joins the Group +++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Your writing isn't very good, but your core message is good. The text is filled with a lot of unnecessary words and has various other problems. Also, the details aren't very good, and the plots involving the main and supporting characters are somewhat problematic. There are issues with the writing style.

If you didn't know better, you'd think the author hired paid trolls to write reviews; a bunch of novices are commenting here.

That's outrageous! 2 Million words free, 1 chapter VIP.

I'm speechless when it's powered by love.

Type quickly, or the winds from the Valley of Villains will blow over!

The writing style is too slow, and the pacing is also very slow, aiming for several thousand chapters. To be honest, I really don't have that much patience to wait for the characters to grow and mature, and the protagonist's personality is too saintly and immature, and he's taking too long to mature, which feels a bit awkward.

The book is good, but the plot is stretched out too much. It needs to be faster-paced and more exciting. I don't usually have much time to read, and an overly long plot is really tedious!

The first two volumes were a bit slow, but it got increasingly exciting later on. 👍