The Orphan of Taitel Continent

Apart from anything else, with this score and word count, you are really awesome.

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Your writing is not very good, but your core is good. The article is filled with a lot of nonsense, and there are problems like this and that. By the way, the details in it are not very good, and there are some problems with the plot of the protagonist and supporting characters. Regarding the writing problem, you can read more Some foreign, some fantasy novels, study their dialogues, scene descriptions, and one more point, regarding combat effectiveness, I have now seen the combat effectiveness of 74% of people on the seventh street and above. What about their fancy elemental combat skills? For example, the description of Cole's battle before he died in the battle made me think that the combat power and destructive ability after level six were very great. However, in most of the Qijie I saw later, the battles were just like ordinary martial arts novels. I felt that there was nothing to let me see those fantasy elements and what achievements they had. , What element, I didn't feel anything, I just felt like an ordinary martial arts novel. In addition, there is the problem of the physical body. The higher the level, the stronger the quality of their body should be. As a result, the human body above level seven can be stabbed by a bow, arrow or sword. . . It doesn't need to be that fancy, but it doesn't need to be so ordinary, right?

If you don't know, looking at this book review section, you would think that the author hired a navy army. A group of trainees are speaking here.

That's outrageous, 2 million words for free, 1 chapter v

Use love to generate electricity, I have nothing to say

Code words quickly, otherwise the wind from the Valley of the Wicked will blow over

The writing style is too slow, and the pace is also very slow. It rushes through thousands of chapters. To be honest, I really have to be patient and wait for growth, and the protagonist's character is too childish and has not yet grown up, which is a bit awkward.

This book is good, but the plot is too long. It is better to make progress faster and have more fun. I usually don't have much time to read books, and the overly long plot is very torturous!

The first two volumes were a bit slow, but then they became more and more exciting. 👍