Orphans of Tetel Continent

Apart from anything else, with this score and word count, you are really awesome.

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Code words quickly, otherwise the wind from the Valley of the Wicked will blow over

Use love to generate electricity, I have nothing to say

That's outrageous, 2 million words for free, 1 chapter v

Your writing is not very good, but your core is good. The article is filled with a lot of nonsense, and there are problems like this and that. By the way, the details in it are not very good, and there are some problems with the plot of the protagonist and supporting characters. Regarding the writing problem, you can read more Some foreign, some fantasy novels, study their dialogues, scene descriptions, and one more point, regarding combat effectiveness, I have now seen the combat effectiveness of 74% of people on the seventh street and above. What about their fancy elemental combat skills? For example, the description of Cole's battle before he died in the battle made me think that the combat power and destructive ability after level six were very great. However, in most of the Qijie I saw later, the battles were just like ordinary martial arts novels. I felt that there was nothing to let me see those fantasy elements and what achievements they had. , What element, I didn't feel anything, I just felt like an ordinary martial arts novel. In addition, there is the problem of the physical body. The higher the level, the stronger the quality of their body should be. As a result, the human body above level seven can be stabbed by a bow, arrow or sword. . . It doesn't need to be that fancy, but it doesn't need to be so ordinary, right?

If you don't know, looking at this book review section, you would think that the author hired a navy army. A group of trainees are speaking here.

The writing style is too slow, and the pace is also very slow. It rushes through thousands of chapters. To be honest, I really have to be patient and wait for growth, and the protagonist's character is too childish and has not yet grown up, which is a bit awkward.

After reading it, I feel that there are some shortcomings. The story is there and Hall's growth has been seen, but I am not looking forward to the subsequent development. There is no laughter. Because of the setting, the overall writing is very serious. If there is no pleasure of mindless golden finger novels, I have to find other attractive things. Otherwise, it will look very boring and will not be able to attract and retain people. But I still have to talk about Lao Bei Niubi 👍

It's rare to see this kind of fantasy novel without cheats, but the style of writing is too slow. The protagonist is kind and righteous, and without cheats, there is nothing exciting about it. It is difficult to attract readers who like to read fast food stories. Only those who are patient can read it. However, the story is very strong and the coherence is good, but I still have to write something different in the future (for example, I just want to be happy) to attract readers. Come on 😁.

The first two volumes were a bit slow, but then they became more and more exciting. 👍

We are( )! ( ) Deserve to die in battle! 20 Points

This book is good, but the plot is too long. It is better to make progress faster and have more fun. I usually don't have much time to read books, and the overly long plot is very torturous!

It's so slow. I've only read a little bit and I want to fast forward. I'll come back to read it when the book runs out.

Feng-chan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

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This is too slow. Just a few dozen photos from a pharmacist made me drunk.

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Awesome, very well written, thank you to the author

I just want to ask at which chapter in this novel you start becoming a lord and at which chapter you start farming. Friends who know can reply to me. Thank you.

People who read this book are furious and feel very aggrieved!