Greed Island: Infinite Nightmare

Personally, I feel that the writing is generally good. Although there are some minor flaws, it is at least much better than those that are waterlogged and unsightly. It is worth following. Come on, author, the book is good, and things will get better 🤭

The writing is actually quite good. As an infinite flow novel, I think it is a good article with a score of 75-80. It's rare to see unlimited novels these days. So I was quite surprised to read this novel. Compared with those new books with unlimited streaming, the first 200,000 books were written using traditional routines and were extremely enjoyable, but in the later ones, either the protagonist fights alone in a team, or it collapses directly. Compared with these, this book is very good, at least the combat power is difficult to collapse. Author, your book will definitely not be signed. The current editor of Qidian requires that it explodes at the beginning, ignites at the beginning, and feels good at the beginning. Want to slowly warm up and write the foreshadowing? The editor will not think favorably of you. Today's readers like to gain weight, like to hoard books, and don't like book reviews. Your data cannot be improved. Readers are all prostitutes for free. They leave after reading it. No editor is optimistic about it. Are there any readers who will praise you to death? Do you think you can sign a contract? Editor from Qidian, hehe

As stated before! After the first story is over, a character solicitation post will be posted here. The required format is as follows. Character name: Power (not too buggy): Life background: Character and habits: Hobbies and dislikes: Stage: I promise that once adopted, readers will be rewarded with red envelopes! At the same time, the book has been signed. If you can invest or give some recommendation votes, please give it a try.

The author is interested in writing a book, so everyone can enjoy it and there is no need to worry about the author cutting off updates, eunuch

😅 Why haven't you signed it? I can't even give you a reward.

After reading it, I feel that I am still unsatisfied and am waiting for the author to update.

How many words did you use to apply for the contract? For novices, the minimum requirement is 100,000 words before they can apply.

Come on, write well and let the editor see that he can't cover the sky with one hand.

I think this book is okay. At least I have time to settle down.

What's the situation with 10,000 collections and zero monthly tickets?

230,000 Words and 170,000 recommendation votes. Can't you sign a contract? 🤭 How much is the starting point?

It's a bit stained. I started to jump after reading a few chapters for several days. Maybe the author likes to tell the story slowly, but you can't catch the readers so quickly. Nowadays, everyone is fast-paced, and the pace of online articles must be fast. I don't have the time or patience to listen to you slowly telling the story. It needs to be exciting. It must be able to catch people's attention. The reward must be as logical as possible and must be better than others. As for the protagonist of the cool article, then you can just make a logical and self-consistent one. The key point is the rhythm. We should look forward to breaking the chapter. What will happen next? In this way, even if there is a plot that I don't like, your tolerance will increase, and I will wait for this plot to pass. I'm a little confused about the plot now. I start to focus on the protagonist, who is calm, rational, self-interested, an elite lawyer, a private detective on the side, who likes to peel off cocoons to solve cases and win lawsuits. Such a person with a hobby and career combination is killed by someone. Although it feels a bit low, but in a society governed by the rule of law, you may not be so vigilant or think you can't kill. But how did you get discovered? How about your anti-detection awareness? Forget it, maybe the plot requires it. It's better to be terminally ill. Just look forward to showing me your worldview, your thoughts, and your behavior. But you are so boring. I can't stand the time for you to unfold. Oh, come on.

Fengchan! I'm here to support you!

I haven't read it yet, but I feel good about it. Many of the books on Qidian. Com are of poor quality and are very irritating. There are a lot of comments and insults, and they are constantly on various lists. I can't wait to finish the book. Come on!

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. It's a bit long-winded, and it feels a bit meaningless for the protagonist to return to the community to continue exploring after completing the mission. At the same time, I personally prefer to read unlimited stories with fixed supporting characters, because that way I need to remember fewer people, and changing batches after each round makes the story more cumbersome. Not suitable for follow-up reading. Maybe it will be better to read after finishing the book.

Even a hundred bookworms can read it and understand everything

I saw a friend recommend reading this book in his WeChat Moments. Just flipped through it! Feeling okay

I kept it for many days and it's gone again.

It would be outrageous not to sign a contract for this book. If you write it well, it will be fine.

Finished, invested 20, recovered 10.09. However, it's not a big problem. Come on, author!

Come on Duck! It's quite online

Let's discuss it carefully with the editor. I think it can be put on the shelves.

I've only read a few chapters and I think it's very good. Come on, author. Here's an example of "Surveying the Sky with a Heart". As long as you write carefully, the readers will not let you down.

Compared with the normal rhythm, it is still too overwhelming for the protagonist, and the end of the second copy does not indicate the protagonist's pursuit. I can't summarize the story in one sentence. I don't know whether it is the pursuit of survival or decryption. Compared with the editors of other novel websites, Qidian editors can be said to be more capable. The author should be much better after re-editing.

The question of why this book ended is explained in the last chapter! If you have any questions, you can leave a message here. The book I am currently writing is "Disaster Island: Infinite Killing" This way, I revised the beginning and rewrote it, because only in this way can I sign the contract. The reason why I finished the book is also because of the compromise made in the contract. Hope everyone supports

The pace is too slow and deliberately suppresses the development of the protagonist.

To supplement the above post, I feel there are three problems. 1. In the second copy. How to say it? I feel like beating the final boss was a big loss. I feel that the value of the things the protagonist gives to someone in the second copy is more than what the protagonist gets. The key is that the things given originally belong to the protagonist himself. Maybe the value of what the protagonist gets is higher, but I don't feel it. The protagonist seems to be a wise man with a little bit of force, but the protagonist has put a lot of effort into planning the boss behind the scenes, but what he received makes people feel that the protagonist's planning is not good. To put it simply, the character has collapsed. 2. There is something wrong with your equipment level system. I don't feel the difference in equipment. Especially for the enchanted marbles of the slingshot, there is no level introduction, and readers have no sense of its upper and lower limits. You have abandoned the settings of the game text to a certain extent, but you have not abandoned them all. The difference can be seen intuitively in the equipment level attribute settings in the game text. But I don't feel the difference between the equipment from the words you describe, and there is no sense of picture. 3. There is also the poison that the protagonist takes due to his poor bloodline.

It won't be released until Mortal is 60, come on

Author, no, come on, wife, I love you 😍

A graduate director in his previous life, he accidentally traveled through time and became an old man who picked up rags. He worked hard at variety show auditions, worked professionally, begged on live broadcasts, ate takeaways from Overlord Meals, and made bad movies to earn disgust points to extend his life. Kill decisively and without any scruples to survive After that, he traveled through infinite scary and strange planes to collect film materials. Didn't you say that there are not enough horror elements? Guman Girl, Dead Silence, Weird Madhouse, Silent Ghost Town, Fetal Resentment, Thirty-Six Haunted Houses... Didn't you say there are no exotic horror movies? The Old Ruler of Cthulhu, Mouth of the Madman, Shadow of Distortion, Scream of the Madman, The Last Witch, etc., Indescribable let you modern people experience what is pollution art, twisted exotic customs, ordinary people struggling to survive, I am not a mad director, this is art First order required You can invest with confidence after signing the contract, thank you for your support