Calamity Island: Endless Trials

A bad novel, the plot is poisonous and disgusting. It repeatedly mocks the audience for being self-righteous. I don't want to make money to start writing a novel. I don't recommend reading it once I have written it. It is purely used as a mark to set up a memorial.

Come on! To be honest, I really like it The characters' IQs are online and the plot is very reasonable If the quality can be guaranteed, I personally can accept it if the updates are slower.

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A holy lady like Liu Ziyun basically cannot live in two worlds, yet she still has to keep writing

The author is quite pitiful. In the face of the readers' good-natured teasing, the author insisted that it was not me but the world that was wrong, and he refused to repent. It was quite interesting. First, the online novel you write is based on reality. It is not necessary. It just needs to be attractive. You are right to insist on realism, and readers are right to vote with their feet. Second, your writing method is to describe the true psychology of the supporting characters in a large space, highlight the changes of the supporting characters, and the protagonist is awesome. Where is the description of the key protagonist? You've already written supporting roles, shouldn't the change be a change in the protagonist? What changes have occurred in the protagonist's psychology? No. Third, don't think you are unique. Ten or fifteen years ago, you were the one writing in this way. It is outdated. Fourth, why did you write the book? Just listen to the readers, yes, do you understand?

Water slowly, your book can make me stand on my head to wash my hair

Others are in danger every step of the way, make one wrong move, and die without a burial. A holy lady is taken advantage of at every turn, and ends up having the last laugh.

Go listen to books and listen to your novels. If you don't know how to write, just move bricks. What you write is just for disgusting people, right?

It looks good, I really like this kind of main god style. The protagonists of the current main god style are either pretending to pick up girls, being various virgins, or cheating. I like this kind of protagonist who does whatever it takes to survive in a world full of dangers.

I just have an idea. I am just an actor. The expansion master in there is talking about people like the author.

Let me also comment. The previous Hydra was well written and very comfortable to read. It would be great if it could always be at this level. However, the author highlights an unconventional and unconventional approach. It can even be said to be innovative for the sake of innovation. It makes people feel uncomfortable when reading it. The various descriptions in the article can even be said to be complicated, and then it is the classic wisdom for the sake of the mentally retarded. The characters and inexplicable actions are said to be to highlight the sense of reality. First, this is a novel, not reality, and it comes from the simple truth that reality is higher than reality. Second, even for the so-called sense of reality, the behaviors and ideas of the supporting characters in your writing are also independent to a certain extent and cannot be called flesh and blood. If you can listen, just listen. If you can't listen, just pretend I didn't say it. I feel that even if you are a high-quality product, it is a kind of refinement. Purify the kind of person whose intelligence and experience are just about the same as yours. After all, there are always many similarities among so many people, but I still think that if he still thinks he can do it and goes his own way, then you will only have the same grades and level.

This book is very good, but there is a problem with the update. After waiting for several months, there is not much update (it's not about the author, it's just that there are very few updates)

All three novels have been discontinued. Who will read the character?

The group portrait is not like the group portrait, and the protagonist is not like the protagonist, putting the cart before the horse.

What is reality? The reality is that those who have great love will have it, those who have no hatred will be lenient, those who are mediocre will have many, and those who do not miss out will have high power. The Internet is not a place to complain about your own injustice. Mandarin: If you like to see, if you don't like to see, get out, what the hell.

Come on, author, you can properly deepen the team relationship and change the protagonist's personality through events. After all, you can't learn it alone, so the team needs it. Friendship and tacit understanding between the team are still needed. The unlimited flow of intelligence and hardware are fine. The author can take a look.

It's too ink, the dialogue is redundant, and the infinite horror gives people a sense of tension and oppression. It can attract people to read without even realizing it. This book also has a bit of a literary youth feel.

How do you say the policeman at the beginning? . There's nothing wrong with you writing about people accepting death, but it's weird if you write something that's a bit NT. Narcotics police also have the ability to discern, or one of the most important abilities in this job is the ability to discern. Practitioners with great benevolence and Japanese male protagonists who don't care about reality are two different things.

It's this kind of fake corpse state. It's hard for readers to detect it. Don't work so hard to finish the book only to find that all the readers have disappeared. It's a good book. But I feel that when updating the corpse fake flow, it's better to save more manuscripts and update them steadily for a period of time to retain people.

I just saw the end of the first world, which is quite interesting, but the author recommends keeping it first ╮(╯▽╰)╭. It is still being modified and adjusted It can be seen that the author is working very hard on the creation, and I hope there will be a good result. Come on ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

The writing is really good. The IQ of the group members is online. It is rare to see such detailed writing in Infinite Stream. It is completely different from those short-form articles. It is very suitable for old readers to watch. I like it.

It's 2026. I wonder if the author's previous "lofty ambitions" will come to mind in his spare time.

I don't know if the author can see it now, but it's about rewards and Tang's strength. First of all, I'm not here to argue. First of all, it is the mind crystals in the werewolf. Tang and Liu and others are not far apart. It does not mean that Tang is higher because he is the protagonist, but it depends on what they have done. The mind crystals mentioned here are Liu's number of mind crystals that kill teammates. The difference between Liu's number of mind crystals and Tang's is too small. The reason is that although Liu was always active when he was with the werewolf, Tang's activity was also Not bad, almost the same, but Tang had one more line than Liu and others. The trial mission was an open line, and the secret of the town was a hidden line. This line was basically monopolized by Tang, but when it was settled, it was only a hundred or so different from Liu's. The author has also played the game, and the reward for hiding the plot is more generous than the open line. This is no problem, right, Tang Qian I have been involved in so many plots, and I have explored the town much more than my peers. (The potion that Tang took at the end should be an unexpected gain, not counting the settlement reward). To sum up, Tang has a higher degree of exploration and activity than others. He is alone in the hidden line, but the settlement reward is not available (this is not because Tang is the protagonist, so he is given preferential treatment, but Tang has done so many things and deserves it) Second point, regarding Tang's bloodline, first of all, it's okay for Tang to increase some values (but not that much) after he obtains the bloodline, because the real big head of Tang's bloodline is at the back (that is, efficiency). There is an essential difference between Tang's bloodline and other bloodlines. His bloodline is more like a This kind of evolution, the improvement of the race, the upper limit is higher than that of the werewolf. Even if it is a pure-blood werewolf, no matter how pure the werewolf blood is, it has not broken away from the first-level race (here refers to those who have not evolved). The werewolf bloodline is just a change of race, and Tang's one is an improvement on the original. Even if it is incomplete, it is still two-thirds higher (on his original basis) (above), the upper limit will be increased. Although Tang's current numerical value (for example, strength attribute) is not as good as Liu's, the upper limit is higher than him (even if the over limit is not enabled). This is one point. Secondly, Tang's efficiency is lower, which is what I mentioned earlier. That is, Tang's progress efficiency is much higher than before. But the author, you still wrote about Tang's progress when he had no bloodline. Step by step efficiency, every cell has been improved and reorganized. What a terrifying thing. Everything he does, every training is more effective than before. These add up to the fact that the early stage is the same every day. Taking Liu's muscles as an example (after all, you always talk about his muscles), Tang only needs to put in three or four tenths of Liu's (efforts to develop these muscles). (It may be a little less, but that's the meaning) You can get the same results as Liu, that is, the same strength as Liu. Although Liu is also improving, but still he is not evolving. The werewolf blood brings him an increase in the attributes of werewolf instead of the growth in the normal period. In other words, Tang can be on par with Liu in attributes (strength category) in a short period of time. I know you want to make Tang weaker. You want to write Tang as the brains and Liu Zuo as the strength. Because of Tang's character, if he is strong, no one else will have anything to do with him. Regarding this point, there is one thing to be clear about, that is, whether he brings others with him or not. What he faces is team difficulty, not individual difficulty. He needs time and emotion to think. Reporting, this is inseparable from other people, just like the zombie trial, even Tang Qiang will be overwhelmed by just him, because he is too busy (he can complete the task of 12 people by himself), so it has been established that no matter how strong he is, he needs the help of other people. Even if it is not much, he can save some energy to think. He needs such an environment. As for newcomers not being good, then he has to protect some old people, right? After all, every time an old man leaves, an unknown newcomer will come. This is a loss-making business. This also lays the foundation for Tang to need other people no matter how strong he is (not the kind who can break stars with one punch), so after Tang obtained the bloodline, his combat power was really suppressed. , Unless it is another type of blood, after all, Tang's blood is really different (even if it is incomplete, it still uses an A-level one) The content is a bit long, but I still hope you can read it, that's all I want to think about for the time being, there is nothing else, just about Zhang Tiandao's B-level, is it effective for him to pray to gods or is it just good luck? These two are different

A few years ago, the author said in the group that you would insist on updating. Later, something happened and the fan group was disbanded. Now it seems that you have stopped and you have not finished the book. Well

Damn it if this book becomes popular. If you want to create a character, that's no problem. How about fun? Sorry, it's almost like nothing. It's just a lot of bullshit, and one character just won't die after a long time. Just for fun, why, I want to learn from Blizzard and teach readers how to read novels. Therefore, the data of the work is not good. It's the author's own fault.