Global Deity Evolution

When I saw Chapter 30, I came out to say, why do so many people say this book is good? I think this book is very average. I read this book at the same time as another one. The protagonist in that one was just an ordinary person, and the plug-in effects were similar to this one. The story was just better, but not much better. Let's talk about the problems of this book. First of all, it is the setting of gods. According to the author's setting that I have seen now, this is a world with gods, but the battle is mainly about whose followers are more powerful? ? ? Is there any difference between this setting and previous lord stories? It's exactly like me sending out troops to fight other people's soldiers. This is like me cultivating my inner power to break open monuments and rocks, and then raise my height to the point where I can split mountains. Isn't this an example correct? This novel simply changed an adjective. In fact, it has not changed at all. The essence is still the previous Lord novel. Then it's about writing. I read chapter 30, and there are five battles in chapter 30. Even if there are five battles, they are all homogeneous battles and there are no details yet. To sum up, the soldiers are expelled, and then they are crushed due to their physical constitution, and the corpses on the opposite side are obtained and then strengthened, and the cycle proceeds. And there really are no details at all. It is impossible to write more details about the battles. Five battles were written in 30 chapters. Now let me talk about the solution I think, whether to change it and how to change it depends on the author. Since it is a god, why do we have to use the setting of belief in God? Do you think this type of god is easy to write? I think there are two directions for improvement. The first one is to add various other types of gods. The gods I gave examples do not require belief, such as elemental gods. These gods directly control the relevant elements. Upgrading depends on plundering. The ability to absorb more similar elements can make them stronger. The way to fight is to directly use the elements on their own. The god of technology gains stronger abilities based on his research on technology. The deeper he researches, the more powerful he becomes. The way he fights is determined by the direction of his research. For example, the god of Skynet is all artificial intelligence, or the god of machinery is a combination of various machines that resembles Cybertron. The god of magic (including fantasy elements such as fighting spirit) studies various types of magic and develops various uses, such as using various combinations of magic and small spells to destroy the world, or using fighting spirit to directly and violently destroy opponents. The second type is that they all believe in God but use different methods for believers. For example: treat believers as artificial intelligence, shut down the minds of all believers in a place similar to the online world, let them directly control corpses or magical creations to fight, and use them completely as tools to destroy the opponent's believers. Or, thousands of powerful forces can be gathered into one body, and each battle will end in person. All believers will contribute their strength to God every time they fight. Then it's about writing. Why are you writing this in such a hurry? Describe some details of a war. For example, when two races are fighting, the left side of the opponent's battle formation is weak. Let your vanguard force resist it and let your own troops that have been lingering on the flank attack, and then open up the situation. Write more, it won't take much time, and it will enhance readability. It ends so quickly. I'm rushing to upgrade. Some people actually think the story is compact. So after reading 30 chapters, can you tell me what the protagonist's outstanding actions are?

This is what the author calls Cthulhu, the image of Cthulhu in "When the Stars Are Right". The name is Cthulhu will wake up.

Play games? Virtual? Please explain the settings clearly! After reading Chapter 16, it feels like playing a game! Reality is ordinary, but the game is devastating?

I invested, and the author promised me that if I didn't finish the book with a million words, I would just wear women's clothes.

Do we need some coins from you when we come to Qidian to read a book? I've been working on anti-theft all day long. I want to tell the eunuch directly, don't beat around the bush.

If it's a eunuch, please give me an explanation, okay?

What a eunuch!

January 23, 11:30 noon, the anti-theft chapter has not been changed! ! ! ! ! ! Abandoned the book, the writing is not very good, but the fun is very good.

Is this Cavan? Or was it reported? I haven't followed you for several days.

Actually, I want to ask, since you are already an official, who will carry the sedan chair?

Your anti-theft annoyance has made me annoyed, and the experience is extremely bad. See yourself clearly.

I feel uncomfortable looking at this anti-piracy version.

Poisonous, being hunted, not telling the authorities, the school,

I'm really convinced. Is this genuine? The words are all backwards

What's this about anti-theft? The pirates sent you to prevent the genuine ones, right?

Taking things for granted and people being too talkative makes me feel like I'm in hard water

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​I don't want to look back is that I don't want to look back after you made a big change. The subsequent plot is a bit incomprehensible. It doesn't meet my expectations at all. We don't match. It's not that your writing is not good, it's just that I suddenly don't like it. By the way, I would like to make a suggestion. Next time, make a major change not before it is put on the shelf. It is best not to directly change the entire style. I can see the latest chapter and update it, which proves that I can accept your current style. As for the reason for your change of the book, I personally don't have Bigge. I can slowly change it back later. There is no need for a complete overhaul. (I suspect that you didn't even know how to write the next plot after you changed it) You made two mistakes that are the most intolerable to me: The first one: You made major changes to the book after it reached a certain number of words. Those who persisted until the end were readers who accepted your setting. But after you made major changes, it became another book. I couldn't accept the new style, so I gave up. Most of the other readers who can't accept the old style will not come back, so you won't please either side  The second one: It was put on the shelves not long after the major revision. For readers like me who don't want to look back, I hope to find the interest in the new chapters to continue reading. But you put it on the shelf and the updates dropped a lot after the major revision (I haven't followed it for a long time. I don't know if it was even less in the past). The word count is small, the updates are slow, and the chapters are incomprehensible. In addition to the fact that it is on the shelf, I have no reason not to sentence you to S. After all, I don't have no choice. It only represents my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it, thank you!

In fact, I personally feel that Cthulhu is not very suitable for this novel system. First, the combat power of the Cthulhu mythology is too vague. After all, the Cthulhu novels highlight the indescribable and lack of specific abilities. Moreover, Cthulhu's enemies are generally investigators and mortals, and there is no battle between gods. The power is too vague. It just highlights a meeting madness. You can't let the opposite gods also come to meet the madness. On the contrary, the ancient gods in World of Warcraft are very suitable and have specific powers. The void, and the power of the void also has the characteristics of mind control and corrosion, and the power of the void can also corrode transformed creatures, such as faceless people, aqirs, naga, etc., And it also has its special power Curse of Flesh, which can corrode inorganic objects, such as elemental creatures, and can also corrode the earth. A bloody mouth grew on the ground, surrounded by a bunch of tentacles, which made me crazy. When I was playing the game, I jumped in, and a bunch of purple ooze monsters sprang out to attack me.

The eunuch also said something, which made people wait in vain. . .

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