I Really Don't Want to Create the World

Did any of it come from Jigsaw? Յ(¯ㅂ¯Յ)

Is there anyone who came from Xianlu with me?😁😁

I came from Doomsday Jigsaw. I was attracted by the author's introduction and the beginning of the plot, but after reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it. First of all, it was a bit confusing to write the real world and the sandbox world interchangeably. I wanted to develop the sandbox world and then destroy it, but I also wanted to fight in real business. In the end, neither side was happy with it. It is better to focus on one side, either use the black box to pass through the development of the sandbox world in one go, destroy the real development of the legacy of the first few worlds before obtaining currency exchange, or use some chapters to solve real-life problems and focus on the sandbox world. There are many problems with the author creating the world from scratch, and a lot of the content makes people uncomfortable (for example, the routine of writing Chinese mythology is very similar to the God of Wisdom in Western mythology, for example, operating Bi Fang to guide how to develop instead of guiding). Why not focus on destroying the world, using the black box to develop the world? For example, add some Chinese elements and use the black box to develop it into something similar to Chinese mythology, add some Western elements to develop it into a Western mythology, add some animation elements to develop it into a two-dimensional one, etc. Every time it is destroyed, use the black box to change the map, so there is a lot of content to write about (the source of inspiration is "Reincarnation Paradise") In the end, I still hope that the author can write more and more excitingly, adding a little more vitality to this book shortage.

Recommended by Zhuge Wanjun, the result is this

I am more of a shy person. The idea of ​​this book is very good, but you didn't write what you should have written. It started to fall apart from that Ahana. At least the protagonist you described is not qualified to become a god. The setting of your book is very similar to a book I read before. Take a look for yourself, starting from Chapter 98 The Last Supper, and take a look at how others have shaped the protagonist into a god.

Author, I came here from your friend's bookstore and saw one of your books recommended by him. I clicked on your personal account and finally saw this book.

There are not many people who can control the writing of player flow (after all, the various operations of the players are often too dramatic and spoil the fun)

It seems more comfortable to watch. I will get the first reward first. Let's see the results! I strongly support the author and ask for more updates. Please update after they are released.

I can only say that it is a passable book now. I can see that I have referenced a lot of books, but it still has its own thing. I feel that the more important thing is that the logic can be self-consistent, and the model can be but not the core idea. Otherwise, it is too boring. Maybe the first few chapters are a bit skipped, and I still don't understand the conversion of energy very clearly.

The author can honestly say that what I like about reading creation stories is all about imagination. If I like reading one book, I would like to think that it is as exciting as reading several books, instead of reading the myths we are familiar with, you know? Novelty or even curiosity can attract attention, especially the protagonist who doesn't know Chinese mythology. Therefore, it feels very bad to know what the protagonist is farting from just by looking at the protagonist's stubborn butt. I can only say that the author, please watch and work hard. Anyway, I have seen several creation stories about the creation of prehistoric times and heaven.