BOSS Everywhere You Look

I don't think it's okay to have a wife in the beginning and the hero still loves his wife very much. After time travel, he has sex with another woman. Even if there is no heroine, he will definitely have an affair with the woman. This kind of love and relationship at the same time is really not love. If you want to write a time travel story, don't create a setting where you have a wife and children and still love your wife very much, otherwise you will really be persuaded to quit.

I just entered the state and saw a beauty service opened. A very rich and disfigured girl with a lot of acne came to the protagonist and immediately offered me a million. It was a bit poisonous.

There is really no need to write an emotional drama. Moreover, this routine is still a third-rate urban Chinese emotional drama, which is not helpful to your genre book! They all spend money to get rid of their kidneys. They have to spend money to get rid of their hearts and get rid of their kidneys. The key is to read idle books. Then when I have free time, let's watch you fall in love? ! You should concentrate on falling in love, fight or kill monsters as you like, and tease the little girl as you like! The most disgusting thing when people watch relationship dramas these days is that they can't forget their ex, they still have sex with him everywhere, and after the sex, they still say, I'm sorry, we are not suitable, fuck! Such endless favoritism, these women, the protagonist either finished eating, accepted the blame, and still wanted to move on! Or after eating, running away, you still have to think that you are sober, and you can have a few more emotional scenes while running away!

1.5 Million words, 17 discussion posts? Author, are you a ghost?👍

Nearly a thousand chapters and 21 posts? I'm afraid this book is not fake 😏

I'm passing by the daily guide, so cheers for the author.

The content dropped from the space rift into the wizarding world and the martial arts world feels the same as the two books written before. The protagonist seems to have turned into a bastard, playing tricks the whole time. The golden fingers have also been trimmed (not to mention that some areas have been enhanced, anyway, all the golden fingers are written on are not of great effect). What does Goldfinger want him to do if he's not awesome? Inexplicably, the protagonist is given a Buff that can only practice low-level martial arts. If you set the protagonist to be an alien, forget it. At a glance, you can see that it restricts the protagonist's operation. The most important thing is that the protagonist has no goals (anyway, I can't feel that the protagonist has any direction), especially when the two worlds of wizards and martial arts are written like this, I feel that the book has lost all its highlights. Finally, this book is still good. I just don't want it to get worse and worse before I comment. If you don't like this review, just delete it

The writing of the novel is really good, and the introduction is okay, but the title is not eye-catching. I guess there are many people who missed the good book because of this 😆

I didn't want to read it after reading more than 100 chapters, but the writing was quite good and the subject matter was also very good. Maybe I don't like to read that kind of relationship. Later, when there were more female supporting characters, I didn't want to read it, but it was quite good. I still prefer to read Dark Flow without a female protagonist, but this book is good. You can read it when you are bored. It is a good book.

Why have the author's other books been lost? I want to read the author's new book.

There are more than a hundred chapters, and it is still passable and readable. Although there are a few minor flaws, they are not major problems, so this book should be considered a licorice-level book. I just don't understand why there are so few comments in the comment area. Have you cleaned it up?

It's so miserable. It's really not easy for the author to persevere.

This is my first time reading this kind of novel. How to say it? It's not a question of whether he's weird or not. It was very uncomfortable for him to read it, and he wanted to read it without looking at his profile. You said you are the protagonist, so don't write it in such a clichéd way. Write about the main character who really wants to return to Earth. The entire article is about how the protagonist returns to Earth. And there are typos. Somewhat inconsistent. And the most serious problem is. Approaching people is obviously a passive skill, but he made it an active skill. Alas, I don't know what to say. You just opened a beauty salon and said it can remove acne, and the heroine will come right away. I had acne and the heroine gave me 1 million without even asking. When I read this kind of wisdom-reducing article, my head hurt. I am terrible at writing emotional articles. I have been living unclearly about what to write for more than 20 years, and my life is almost meaningless. There is no room for it. When you write a protagonist, you either have to write it better. Nowadays, this kind of protagonist is no longer popular. It was okay two or three years ago or 11 years ago. Now, this kind of protagonist is not popular at all, and he looks like an ordinary person. Worse than ordinary people. It's good to have both parents die. As a parent, you think about it over and over again, and you have daughters over there. Just say you still have lovers. What are these for? How can you tell me how to play the heroine easily? Let's just say that I loved my former lover very much. I don't know what to say after being worn by two worlds. Have you ever seen a person who can die constantly? If he dies constantly, wouldn't he become mentally ill? You say those who keep dying. In this way, The Tribulation of the Heavens is written very well. This um.

The author can definitely consider a new book

The introduction is attractive, but I give up after four chapters and introduce the background of the world in one chapter. Even if you write about the death of both parents, it is better than forcibly shaping the background of the protagonist!

If the emotional scene is not well written, just upgrade the matryoshka doll without thinking. At least it won't be so miserable.

This kind of protagonist is really disgusting

This book is very well written. The author lacks opportunities. Keep at it. The writing is really good.

I couldn't stand it until chapter 700. It was too far away from the previous story and lacked the motivation to continue reading. The main plot felt too weak. It can be said that everything after traveling to the wizarding world is a side story. It would be great if I could have the power of writing to change it to the universe, like swallowing the stars.

The writing is okay. I have seen more than 200 pictures for now, but the plot behind it is not attractive. It is 200 chapters. The pig's foot keeps being pushed around. There is nothing I want to do. It may have something to do with the character of the pig's foot. I am confused. Just a personal opinion, don't mind

After reading four chapters, I actually didn't know what it was. I only knew that the protagonist had traveled through time.