Techniques to Convey the Way

1. The protagonist is a genius. There is no golden finger at the moment. Maybe the wind spirit type is one? 2. The part about killing Ding to become a Taoist was quite satisfying. He killed the monk who had just broken through. The principles contained in it were quite logical. 3. There are no brainless villains. Ding Chengdao, Long Tu, and Long Yan all have online IQs.

See Chapter 40. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing style is very good, like a fantasy author from Platinum Master. I'm not addicted yet. There are two possibilities. The first one requires reading hundreds of thousands of words. Many super masters also have to read hundreds of thousands of words before they can tell whether it is good or not (some can't read many words, and they may not adapt to their own style, such as "Lin Yuan Xing" written by a certain master. I don't like the books he wrote). The second type may also be like this. Take the Sword Soldier Crossing the River as an example. The more ordinary it is in the beginning, the better it is to write. In fact, when you see the 50th picture, you don't want to sleep, but around the 59th picture, you are very interested, because his practice is very ordinary from the beginning, so every experience and every progress he makes will make people very happy. For example, he used his meager strength and counter-reconnaissance methods to kill people. From then on, he suddenly liked it. So back to our book, if a monetary spiritual stone system is established at the beginning, it will be very difficult for the protagonist to get one spiritual stone or two spiritual stones. Then whether he obtains spiritual stones through trade or receives spiritual stones from the sect, readers will be very excited. This book describes hundreds of spiritual stones, various techniques, various treasures, etc. In dozens of chapters. However, the readers have no concept, no excitement, no feeling. In fact, they have not established a standard system, so they will never be addicted (this is why many books list herbal weapons with grades). Let's take Mortal as an example again. I have read this book for more than 10 years, but I remember the details of Mortal Realm very deeply. It is also the only book that I remember the details of. When he first started reading the first 100 or 200 pictures, it wasn't very good. It was just that he was reading the first book at that time and was not as discerning as he is now, so he kept reading patiently. Then he gradually became addicted to it. The reason is that he was very ordinary at the beginning, trading in the market as a casual cultivator, and later he was robbed and killed (at that time, he had just come into contact with cultivating immortals, and his level was extremely low, but he was very excited). I am very happy every time I earn a few spiritual stones. I am looking back, maybe I will be fascinated later. My vision is so high now that I have almost no books to read. Although I pointed out some problems, what I said may not be correct. If you meet the right opportunity, this book may be ranked in the top of the monthly popular list (some books currently ranked in the top 10 are really not as good as your writing). The most attractive part of a book is the plot. This needs to be polished slowly. I will look at it later.

This book is okay, but the update is too slow. I put it on the bookshelf last year and read it in two days!

I think it's very well written. I've read a lot of novels. I think the one about cultivating immortals can be at least in the top five or three. I don't know why there are so few comments. I guess many people haven't found this book. I hope the author can stick to it. Come on.

If you don't talk about the plot and just talk about the writing style, it's still fine. Except for the Mortal book, all the other books in Lies are not good-looking, but they were not low on the rankings at the time. Based on this comparison, the writing alone seems to have great potential.

The few books I'm following now are all not on the shelves just like this one. I update them every week.

After reading Chapter 43, through the detailed explanation and background introduction in the article, I finally have a better understanding of the current situation of the protagonist, such as the division between secular and aristocratic families in the sect and some minor conflicts. It is good. After I have a clear understanding of the protagonist's surrounding environment, I will slowly understand the level of his skills and cultivation, and then I will have expectations. Voting starts tomorrow.

I sent a red envelope for recommendation votes, so cheers to the author!

The writing is good, but the focus is on the plot. The plot is the key.

Okay, if I were the decision maker, I would allow this book to be on the shelves. Although some interests have not yet become famous, if the subsequent plot is good, the level of this book will continue to rise. I think with such good writing style, the author will be in a period of rising in the future. The book "Swordsman" was okay in the early stage. After entering Xuanyuan Sword, it became more and more interesting, and it lasted until the end of the war in various galaxies.

Be prepared to wait for between 180 and 270 photos to be put on the shelf. It is always more difficult for newcomers. It depends on luck and whether they meet the editor's taste.

It's a pity that the author doesn't have time to update

Swordsman Crossing the River is currently updated to Chapter 81, which completely fits my fantasy fairy tale feel. Whether it is the protagonist's skills or the acquisition of his resources in the future, there are infinite expectations (the previous foreshadowing plays a very important role in rising from the ordinary). The author can learn from it.

It was suddenly taken off the shelves, but fortunately it is back.

I always feel that his great opportunity is not the Dao Jian. I always feel that I haven't written more. Even the things I have learned from the Dao Jian are a bit more confusing.

I can only update this frequency once every six months.

. . . The first three chapters use the stories that happened to the protagonist and the author's narration to basically explain the difference between mortals and monks, and how mortals can cultivate immortality.

This book was written by a really perseverant author.

See Chapter 26. The fight here, because there is no protagonist involved, I skipped it directly. So far the role of the protagonist has not been established. Look at a few dozen more pictures to see what happens next. Only when the protagonist is well established through foreshadowing can readers be attracted.

Thank you for writing, I love reading it 🤓

A style similar to the Wanderer's Road Confrontation

It was so well written that I read it in one sitting. I have to say that the author is very talented.

The protagonist has an unpleasant personality and always calls the shopkeeper Xu Fox, no matter how big or small he is.

I don't know if I'll live to see the end.

Tomato's Cang Yuan Tu is particularly interesting from the beginning (after episode 20). You can refer to the tips.

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