Sword Shadows Across Autumn

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... How should I put it? It's pretty good-looking, but its shortcomings are also quite obvious. First of all, the plot. I don't know how to describe this feeling. I can only say that the protagonist is worthy of being the protagonist, and anything can happen to her. When I encounter something, I hate that I have no strength, and I don't practice well when I have free time, and just do some messy things (yes, I am talking about the plot in the East China Sea realms, especially when I saw [the protagonist was reminded by Ye to react at that point], which means that the protagonist is busy with his career "making money" and has no intention to learn "cultivation" "Have you digested all the inheritance? Do you think you have too much free time to make money? Do you want to work for him for hundreds of years? What's the point of procrastinating without thinking about it?" Indifference is a Chinese word, pronounced lěng mò, which means indifference and indifference [towards people and things]. Indifference mainly manifests as being wary or even hostile towards others, not communicating thoughts and feelings with others, and looking on indifferently, indifferently, and without sympathy to the misfortunes of others. Don't care about anything. Indifference is the pinnacle of emotion. Ruthless... I don't need to say more about this. A cold and ruthless protagonist✘ A cold and ruthless [complaint, multi-emotional] protagonist✔ As for the pacing, I feel that it is quite well controlled. However, the overall feeling is that it is dragging. Especially when I read almost two hundred chapters, that feeling was particularly strong. Maybe it's because the number of words in one chapter is small, but it is undeniable that in terms of content, if you say it doesn't exist, there is still a little bit of it. If you say it does, you can't say anything. It often takes dozens of chapters to get a clear impression. Then the copywriting is false, saying that all members are evil, but it turns out that there are evil people, but not all of them, (don't say I am picking on words), at least Hee He who the protagonist meets at the beginning (oh, does it count if he is dead?) What about Su? Is she considered a villain? It doesn't count. What about Jing? Not really. Unless they all turned dark later on that I didn't see, otherwise... (Note: I saw Chapter 264) In general, if it's not a dark text, don't use "all villains", it's easy to mislead. All in all, there is no problem with the writing and the pace is okay. There are abusers, quite a lot of them, and this is a point of dissuasion. Secondly, not much growth of the protagonist can be seen. Outbreak? Not quite consistent, but somewhat relevant. Finally, this book seems quite depressing, with an indescribable feeling and a unique "temperament".

Research shows that having the same name as a character in the novel has become a major reason for time travel. Xianyu Wei decided to test it with practice and now invites book friends to participate in this event. There are no rewards, personal safety and property safety after crossing are not guaranteed, and return services are not provided. One life at the beginning, and then all depends on the waves. If you are interested, please fill in the information below according to the format. Xianyu Wei will select some book friends who are in line with the development of the plot to participate in the pilot project. Everyone is welcome to sign up, thank you for your cooperation (⊙v⊙) Attachment: Information sheet [Character name] [Character race] [Character gender] *[Character personality] *[Character social relationship] (* is optional and can be left blank)

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To be honest, I think this book is better written than Weiwu Xiaoyao. You can clearly see that the writing style of Weiwu Xiaoyao has some youthfulness. This book is perfect, but the results are not particularly ideal so far. I don't know why.

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