Immortal Seed

The first few chapters left me confused!

I have read forty chapters, and I have written a lot of nonsense. Things that can be clearly explained in one or two sentences have been written into a paragraph. I have turned it over and over again. It is as smelly and long as the old lady's footbinding. If the current plot is not so good, I would have given up on the article long ago. At least 10% of these 800 chapters are composed of just a few words.

I can't figure out what kind of image the heroine has. Beautiful words decorate her previous life. I can't see where the personality that stands out in this life fits and deserves all the praise. It's such a mess of contradictions. Where's the logic? What's the use of foreshadowing?

I read it a long time ago. It was the first book I read about a female protagonist cultivating immortality. I first realized that this book was good. Now that I think about it, it's quite nice.

I have read about twenty chapters, what are they written about? There is nothing that catches the eye at all, and there are a lot of things that have nothing to do with cultivating immortals! The core content of each chapter can be explained clearly in a few sentences, but I have to write a bunch of side things that make me more and more irritated the more I read it... Really, the more I read it, the more I get mad~ An ordinary start... It is not a cool article, but as an author, you have to make the article have content that attracts readers to continue reading, right? The shining point that should be given to the heroine is not given at all (currently, there is no promising qualifications, knowledge is required but not knowledge, opportunity is not opportunity, and intelligence is not considered). The author, you are not writing about the heroine, but the handyman who manages the cave beside the heroine, right? ! The descriptions of the third female protagonist in other articles are more interesting than this heroine.

I was confused when I saw it, it was illogical, and the strange heroine might not be my cup of tea!

It doesn't look good, I don't recommend it, I can't stand it. It's a mess, and there's another story after Chapter 10? And there are repetitions... It's different from the introduction, what the hell is this! ! !

Going to the forbidden area with others makes me want to buy a piece of tofu and shoot the heroine to death. I don't even know how the hero fell in love with the heroine. At the beginning, I saw that the hero ignored the heroine. I was really speechless. It's not as good as Guan and Liu Xuan. Anyway, I personally think she is the heroine. The main character is the Virgin Mary. It's really, really the Virgin. It's really not outstanding. The male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist. There are no attack methods. There are so many treasures that I just can't use. It's really a waste. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I am. I'm really exhausted and I couldn't bear to read a lot of them that didn't make me depressed.

The description is very scattered, and I don't know what the main point is. Abandoned

The heroine travels through time and has an adult mind. She is a weakling who can't even compare to a minor. She is weaker than the weakest Five Spiritual Roots. She has bottlenecks at the first level of Qi training. It is really the worst one among all the immortal cultivation novels I have read.