The Development History of Yaoniu Family

The writing is contradictory

Speaking of which, some of the spells here are really embarrassing 🤭🤭🤭

Among the family-style novels, apart from Immortal Road Supreme, which is the originator of family-style novels, Taiqiu and Immortal Road Evergreen are the best written. However, the one I voted for the most was Qinglian Peak. If nothing else, it is more updated and stable.

I have seen many family stories. To be honest, I feel that one person achieves enlightenment, and chickens and dogs ascend to heaven. This is an abnormal family. In fact, Taiqiu wrote it well, but it is a pity that the eunuchs, and the fight between immortal cultivators are too high and simple. Just like Taoism has Tao soldiers, Buddhism has monk soldiers, I think the monk soldiers in this book are all OK. Introducing them, although it is difficult for these individuals to fight against immortal cultivators individually, they can be introduced into military formations and groups such as Junqi can fight against powerful immortal cultivators. They can also be used to do various chores to facilitate the lives of immortal cultivators. I think the flow of family has reached a bottleneck now, and new systems can be introduced to join in to make it better.

Personally, I feel that the cultivation level is borrowed from the human level, which is very embarrassing! It feels like a fairy tale in demon skin. Nothing new.

Kui Niu is not a cow. It is the same as Laozi's mount Banjiao Qingniu. It does not belong to the cow race. Kui Niu is a spirit born to control thunder and lightning.

I feel like it needs major overhaul in the early stage, mainly because it doesn't look like the demon race, it looks like a human race wearing a skin.

The biggest failure is that demon cultivators are the same as human cultivators. No features. He is also slowly cultivating immortality. Shouldn't the demon clan be based on blood?

How should I put it? There are not many demon cultivators in this book very early on. This book has always been about the protagonist. The rest of the family has no sense of existence. What about other people of the same age? The author hopes that the protagonist can lead a whole family? Even if you write off the family to death now, the protagonist becoming a wild monster will not feel too inconsistent compared to now. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist looks like a person, not a monster, which is not monster enough. In addition, the difference between monster beasts and monster clan is very vague.

This is a family type. Please let more supporting characters be members of the Demon Niu family (⊙o⊙). If you give too many resources to cultivate the following demon soldiers, what should you do? If you are strong enough, you can command more demon soldiers in the later stage of Qi training.

Author, I wonder if I can update it three times? (☆_☆)O(∩_∩)O

Why do demon clan still need to learn to control beasts?

Will they still be of the same clan after reincarnation? What if we find someone who is not a member of the same clan? Should we train him? If he is a member of a clan, their clan should not be big. Wouldn't it be chaotic if the elders become younger ones? And it can be found by reincarnation during the foundation building period. Isn't this lower limit a bit low?

By the way, is it too girly for a cow demon to use a changing knife? Fan Tianyin, cow fork, iron rod, and flat axe.

This is the human race dressed as a demon cultivator😥😥

There is always something awkward between demon cultivators and demon beasts. How about changing to a half-demon family?

The typesetting is not good. It is a long paragraph. It is recommended to divide it into one or two sentences. Reading comfort is very important.

The overall plot is okay and the writing is okay, but I feel that you are not writing about monsters but humans. I feel that the biggest flaw is the environment and appearance, as well as the space and volume it occupies. You write it according to people. How can a cow body complete operations that can only be completed by many human bodies? Many descriptions are inconsistent. I only talk about the size of the protagonist, but in the book Many places are set according to human body shape. Please note that the protagonist is a giant cow, not a person. Many places are inconvenient. I personally suggest that you pay more attention in the future. Humans and monsters still need to be distinguished. There is also a lack of female characters in the protagonist's family. There are also some problems with family reproduction and development. Family and family reproduction are the key points, and they cannot be created out of thin air.

Why is it a eunuch? I think the writing is okay.

Break it up into sections, brother, I can't stand this.

Isn't Kui Niu just a leg? How inconvenient is the life of the descendants of this family?

Can you continue to work hard to write?

Why is the Yaoxiu family among the Immortal Cultivation Family (people) written well? If you just bring another monster clan to grow, how come the weird people wearing monster skin are actually human beings?

It's interesting. It's the first time I've seen Yaoxiu's family story.

I was originally most willing to read Immortal Evergreen, but then I stopped reading it after it turned into Ziyang. It was boring. In fact, the family can eventually become an immortal dynasty. There is nothing wrong with it. Throughout history, power and resources are in the hands of a few people. No matter what you do, you can't get far without your original intention. Especially Immortal Evergreen's later attitude towards the family is really cold-blooded.

Brother, remember to divide it into sections, I can't stand it like this.

It doesn't make much sense if the family flows to the back, hey

I didn't expect it, I didn't expect it to die.

You wrote two chapters about breaking through a small realm, but you got a lot of success. Then you wrote about breaking through the golden elixir, and you got a lot of success?

If you don't like traditional Chinese immortals, you might be disgusted by Journey to the West.