The Lord Can See the Notes

This author really discourages me. . . In fact, I think the book is good, the subject matter is very novel, and although the plot is a bit messy, it is not too poisonous. But what I didn't expect was that the author would directly jump into the chapter and say that the princess' crime would not lead to death. If her crime was not worthy of death, then the dozen or so people she killed deserved to die? We really shouldn't use modern eyes to criticize past thoughts, so I think it's quite reasonable for you to ask the protagonist to let the princess go. After all, a country's princess will make too many enemies by hastily killing her. But you, the author, are always a modern person, right? Can't you tell the difference between simple right and wrong? This author gives me a strong feeling of "back wave". The princess is a master, so she is innocent and childish when she kills civilians, so the crime is not worthy of death, so as long as she grows up, everything can be forgiven. But you have to know that most of us are the corpses left behind by her growing up. Finally, I still hope that the author will think carefully before writing. After all, it is too difficult to find a good Western fantasy book now, so don't waste such a good subject matter.

Look what I found? A great book hidden in the signed edition. The plot is currently progressing very smoothly, with good preparation and no abrupt edges. The author's description of the details is excellent, with a pure fantasy epic style. What particularly surprised me is that the author's atmosphere rendering is very good. No matter at any time, the author can always rely on dialogue, environment, objects, and creatures to set off the right atmosphere, which is slightly wasteland style, but not dull, allowing readers to sink into the book. Obviously, this book has been polished. The characters have also been established. Whether they are the protagonist or the supporting characters, they all have their own souls through dialogue and psychological description. I hope the author can continue to do so. Although it may not be a hit because of the audience, it will definitely achieve good results

Freinds, look what I found. I bet you ten golden crows that this book will shock you more than The Swadian Knight's Mace! When you open this book and a whole vivid fantasy world rushes towards you, what can you expect? First of all, of course, it is a show of dedication to the world: if you are careful enough when passing by the river, you do not become a piece of meat in the teeth of the water ghost, you are lucky enough to avoid the gangsters during the journey, and you are not unfortunate enough to become the dance partner of the demon spirit on a moonlit night. So welcome to Taigunda, let's go to the Groove Tavern for a men's fight! But first, you have to endure the dirty roads that are only cleaned once every month, and the water splashed on both sides of the road... Well, this is also the norm in the continent of Kundia. After all, not everyone has a lord named Adam Bai. What you can also look forward to is a coherent reading experience, intertwined plots, and different characters spinning around on the stage because of their respective experiences, identities, professions, ambitions, etc.: The bloodthirsty mercenary who follows the protagonist through life and death will hesitate to kill. The servants were silenced; the knights of the kingdom put on an annoying and disgusting face; the strange businessman who thought he was a walking gift bag also had his own set of rules of conduct; how could the ambitious lord use his power to play tricks on all parties when faced with chess pieces that were not part of the plan? ... I didn't spoil it too much, right? In short, facing such a stage, if you can sit down and enjoy it patiently, you will not hesitate to applaud later. (I would like to emphasize again, Please be sure to slow down your reading speed when reading this book. The popular language, repetitive routines, and intensive concentration of cool points in online articles are all designed to speed up readers' reading and increase their reading volume. Read earlier One chapter is enough, but now you may need to subscribe to two, three or even four or five chapters to feel satisfied. This model allows many authors to support themselves by writing. When we are used to updating thousands of words, ten lines at a glance, and dedicating real money to the wonderful work of other writers. Please also give enough patience to the author who is willing to take you to see a world in detail, and read patiently, instead of rushing to comment on whether the routine is old or not, and whether the plot is poisonous or not. You must believe that the author uses the routine because it is suitable. If the plot is no longer cliché, it will feel poisonous. , Please read a few more chapters, there will be more detailed content) Some people may want to say, "Hey, did you blow it, why didn't you say that this book is going to heaven?" No, no, after all, this book has not yet reached heaven. While this book has not yet become a god, please allow me to make a few bold criticisms here. One of the labels the author attached to this book is calmness. When I read it, not only Adam (the protagonist) was very calm, but I was also overly calm. The inner voice is not "Wow! Cut him! What happened?" But "Oh, hum! Huh?" It's not that there are no emotional ups and downs, but the emotional experience is really a bit flat. My emotions can come from Luca's unyielding face to the princess in the dungeon, or from the silver python falling to the ground and the fragrant scarf floating in the tavern fight. As I read, I am getting closer to the continent of Kundia, but I am getting further and further away from Adam. If there is a guy who fills in for Adam throughout the whole process, I would like to say thank you for your hard work. It's really tiring to be Adam: I can't experience the pleasure of blood splattering. Most of my conflicts with others are purposeful. I can still swing my sword calmly in the face of life and death. Increased strength? The power improvement in this book is similar to the proficiency in horseback slashing. In the blink of an eye, I became stronger again. It was reasonable but I didn't feel much. There was no description of the qualitative change across time, and no additional talents. I became stronger just so silently. The people in the group loved me very much, and we were all refugees. We didn't have to deal with conflicts among the people, so Sean made me put some thought into it. I really tried my best to respond to the people's love. Today was also a day when I fell into bed exhausted! Hey, why should I say that? The last one is my little arrogance. If the author can read this article, what I want to say is: "What I said before, regardless of the advantages or disadvantages, don't worry about it! What readers like is the book written by the author, not me here to point fingers!"

I just read a book that I thought was good. There is no need to give up because of some bad comments. I saw on other websites people who specifically came to support it.

I finished reading it in one go and let me know your thoughts: This is a novel that is suitable for and needs to be read carefully. Often if you skip a sentence, you will not be able to understand the rest of it and you will have questions. The writing is of high quality, with minimal watering down, and it also knows how to create an atmosphere. The overall style is like a sassy, ​​delicate and pleasant person. Of course it is still young and needs to grow. After reading this chapter, I said that most of the controversy focuses on the betrayal and imprisonment of the protagonist of Tedagan. I think the author Wen Qingheiya. Betrayal. If you haven't abandoned the book, you will know that there is a slightly clichéd but wonderful twist at the end. The protagonist can see the notes, and uses this to kill everyone at the gambling table. Whether his subordinates are betrayed or not can be understood from the notes, just think about it. But the author really didn't write it clearly. Maybe he felt that writing it would be boring? Then he threw himself into the cell. The reason for this incident is that the protagonist chose the latter between handing in the commission and finding the lost lord ring. As a result, he met the proud soldiers looking for horses and was unlucky. It is indeed frustrating, but only with suppression can there be a climax. The climax of the banquet was well written, and the protagonist gained a lot. The problem is that these two aggrieved things collide. Readers can tolerate one thing, but two things together will immediately make many people angry. Every piece of it is straight forward. It is best to give a reminder when this kind of frustrating foreshadowing is laid. Now readers don't have much patience. After all, there are too many choices. Let's talk about some suggestions. Can you write more about the psychological activities of the protagonist, such as tenderness, entanglement, determination, and goals. The protagonist is not very vivid now. I have a habit of reading pirated copies first. If I think they are good, I will come back and order them all. Because I was really disgusted by some authors. This book is good, I ordered it. Come on author, I hope you will become a god. By the way, is there a book club?

Why did it disappear after raising it for a while?

It's rare to find a book that's written in a way that feels comfortable to read. Unfortunately, I can't accept a protagonist who has no background and wants to change the world. Maybe it's because I feel that people with no background only have ideals and hard work and are not worthy of changing the existing order. The background here includes but is not limited to origin, bloodline, and talent. It is not a background in a narrow sense, but a manifestation of "power". Class changes often only occur during the change of dynasties from old to new, accompanied by war. After watching the Fog Wolf incident, I also realized that the difficulties faced by the protagonist can no longer be solved by themselves. In the end, there is no other way but to rely on deus ex machina. The above are just my personal opinions, and readers' understanding may differ from what the author wants to express. Although it was a pity, I still gave up the book because it looked uncomfortable.

It's very beautiful. Come on, keep writing like this. I will definitely order them all.

The writing style is very good and the writing style is mature, but to be honest, this book needs to go further. Goldfinger needs to be well designed. The writing style is obviously very mature, but after reading more than 20 pictures, it has always relied on silver swords and technical recklessness. This is also the first time I have seen it. Seeing that the ability of remarking is more like a writing style than a competent trump card, at least the protagonist cannot rely on this to make a comeback.

Awesome! So far, the IQs of the protagonist and the supporting characters are all normal. The protagonist is not reckless all the way, nor does he only have conspiracies and calculations. He is not a brainless black man, and he is not a holy mother. He also has a golden finger that can play a role but is not too buggy and invincible. I think it will be popular if it doesn't collapse!

The writing was quite good at the beginning, but later on, I found that the author was a little confused about priorities. You are a lord who farms and fights monsters, and you are not a literary youth complaining. There is an inexplicable brain-dead plot, a brain-dead supporting role, the whole article is piled with rhetoric, and a bunch of elementary school students in the comment area speak. If the author really wants to write, it is good to go to some literary and art clubs and newspapers. Writing novels is really not suitable for you.

From the beginning to the part where the Lord's Ring is lost, the writing and plot are very good. But when it comes to this part, it's like a different author. It's not even a bit worse. It's extremely boring. I have no desire to read it. Even the princess is a bit disgusting. And the protagonist has entered. What will happen to the protagonist's subjects? There is no leader in the land planning and development. The protagonist is the flag. Now the flag is gone. It won't be long before they are all gone. In the early stage, we were rushing to build the plot. Is there any foreshadowing for the plot? The princess in the back is probably a whitewash again.

Is anyone surprised that this book was cut? As expected, why, because the author didn't deal with the relationship between "Have a Better Day" and the development of the plot. The first chapter was okay, but after entering the city, it was just written for self-pleasure. How many people abandoned the book after seeing this section? Just look at the comment area to know. This plot may be written by the author very happily. Some people who like to abuse the protagonist also find it enjoyable, but there are also many people who don't like this tone. The protagonist's things were stolen, and then he was framed and thrown into the arena, and he almost died. , The last thing I saw was that the culprit was the princess and the magician consultant, what should I do? Of course, I chose to forgive them. I'm not saying that they must die. This is impossible. After all, the protagonist is just a small character, but you have to make them pay the price. Moreover, the protagonist has a system. To be honest, how can it not be possible in a period of chaos like this in the article? It's really hard to fight against the enemy's base. If this is called smart people with brains, well...

How should I put it, the opening alone is indeed a masterpiece, but after entering the city... Emmm, is this a substitution? The quality has obviously declined. I could read the first part carefully word by word, but I skipped through the second part. I can only say that the higher my expectations, the greater my disappointment. The writing is not bad, but it is suspected of showing off. The main style of writing is obscure, but reading the obscure style for a long time is a bit boring and tiring. It would be better to add some appropriate descriptions to make the whole story more obvious. Don't force it to be written just for the sake of style. Although it is difficult to adapt to online writing, the author still has to try his best to consider the taste of the public when writing articles, and not be too self-indulgent or suffer from literary youth. After all, you are not writing novels with love, but to make money. The taste of the public determines your income to a large extent. Of course, if the author writes for fun or purely for his own enjoyment, then just treat me as fart. Finally, don't spray if you don't like it.

A really good book, with a great start. In the previous book, I rated this game as Lanke Qiyuan (although the post-processing was not as good as the early stage). I hope the author becomes popular and can write full-time.

There is a suspicion of showing off the writing style. It is amazing at first glance, but the description method is always the same. After reading it for a long time, I got a little tired of it.

Old habit, claiming to farm, but actually going out every day... The lord is just a gimmick, but in fact he still takes risks everywhere...

The writing of Taigunda is really bad. He is imprisoned for no reason, and the protagonist is forced to gamble with his life on the loyalty of more than a dozen prisoners. Why can't the protagonist recruit normal people? An ordinary elf can issue mandatory tasks to the lord. Is this a symbol of human orthodoxy or a certificate of good elf citizenship?

This book may seem unclear, confusing, or even incomprehensible to you. No matter what, please don't hurt him. He is just a fetus that has not grown up. One day you will see his glory, his impassionedness, and even his hesitation and sadness. But please don't hurt him. We have seen too many evocative seedlings that cannot grow up. We love this book so much! Love is terrible. So please be kind to him. He doesn't need support or encouragement, he just wants you not to hurt him.

It's amazing, a eunuch novel has made a group of old bookworms obsessed with it... I can't help it either! How well written...

A group of brainless elementary school students take the values ​​​​and ethics and moral systems of modern society to ask ancient figures from the imaginary world. Do they intend to use this to satisfy their ridiculous sense of morality? Just giving advice on the plot without saying anything useful really seriously affects the reading experience of others.

It was really amazing at the beginning, but things changed after entering the city. Whether it was the plot or the writing style, to be honest, the inexplicable conflicts were really discouraging. It would be better to write a dozen more chapters where the refugees are being taken in. After entering the city, it is equivalent to seeing loneliness. Reading the comments, some people said that they would attack the princess and then let her go. I didn't know what to say, and I didn't even dare to look down. This is definitely not to the public's taste. For example, after a hard day's get off work, I want to read a novel to relax, but I end up feeling depressed. So what am I trying to do? We can only take care of it for a while, and then take a look at the follow-up after this episode is over.

The quality dropped significantly after Chapter 30, and it started around May 5th. Could it be that the legendary writer left with his pen and the real author started writing?

The author wrote about a female cousin who wants to build a memorial arch. The plot after entering the city is really disgusting.

The previous main line leads the refugees to survive in the forest and build their homes. Then suddenly at the end, the outline and the writer were the same, making people wonder if it was a ghostwriter.

This is a book that I read several years ago. The writing is very good and the subject matter is very new. I was a eunuch back then. I suddenly remembered to come back and read it tonight. What a pity.

Does the author have any plans to write a new book? I'll read the next one too

Does anyone else read this book? I recommend a similar book to all my friends who have the same taste.

Shu Huang suddenly saw this book again, Gan

Is there anything similar? This one is very close to my heart. Or does the author have other books? I just put them on the bookshelf and can't see them. It's very torturous.