His and Their Stars

Subscribe now for 3,000 fan points. I am ready to abandon the book, let me tell you my opinion. I originally felt that the plot outline and character settings were very attractive. The space opera itself is pretty cool. However, the author lacks the ability to tell a good story and can only fill it with a lot of boring complaints, and the planned climax of the plot cannot be mobilized. Appropriate complaints are originally a way to quickly reveal characters and adjust, but too much makes it look bloated and mediocre. A good story should be fascinating, but reading this book is like looking for information in the chatter of a talkative woman. There is too much psychological drama and too little action description. The characters cannot stand. Goodbye

Why do you feel like the problems with this book have gotten worse? At the beginning, the protagonist encounters an ether dragon and is sprayed until he is reborn. When he wakes up, the team encounters a swarm of insects. The description of this part is obviously very good, but the atmosphere is ruined by the inner nonsense the protagonist talks to himself. Tucao ignores the timing and occasion, and the length of the complaint is too much. These two points very, very, very destroy the rhythm, atmosphere and reading experience. To be honest, Nissei's lightheartedness and comedy are completely inconsistent with a reasonable and complete worldview to deal with serious and heavy topics such as politics, economy and people's livelihood. It can even be said to be a waste of this worldview. Space operas are very interesting, but Japanese space opera light novels are too weird. —————————————————— My point is not to say space opera or anything like that. There are also serious and funny things, such as the Crazy Lich. The problem is that when it should be serious, it makes gags and ruins the rhythm. I am considered to be the second person who has been in the Qidian fan community for more than ten years, and my taste has only gradually changed. Many fans who used to make complaints about it can no longer tolerate it anymore. In my opinion, the fun of complaining lies in being in touch with the character's heart, and smiling knowingly after the protagonist flips the table in his heart and yells "Who knows this!" At the same time. The sense of resonance is the core of complaining. The expressive power of animation has great advantages in arousing resonance, but novels still need to foreshadow. For example, in the first chapter, when the protagonist was blasted by the Ether Dragon's mouth, I could smile knowingly. However, in the following paragraphs, almost every dialogue or description was followed by a complaint, which was overwhelming. It was mixed with game jokes and novel settings. The reader was more confused than the protagonist. At least the protagonist knew the background setting better than the reader. In one chapter, the protagonist was reborn and the Community team encountered a swarm of insects. It was really hard for me to read. Above, I typed a lot of words without knowing what I wanted to say. I hope the author can write better and better.

The world view of the stars, the racial setting of the star world, the political structure of Yin Ying, the love triangle of Breeches and Screws, and the tactical design of Star Wars + Warhammer + Star Wars. The author has extensive experience and is really suitable for science fiction lovers like me. However, after reading these more than a thousand chapters, I still hope that the author can push more main lines besides daily routine and jokes, such as time travel, psychic sequence, ancient civilization, terminal crisis, bipolar struggle for hegemony, strange small country and blue communists, secret organizations, and the small group of young officers established by the protagonist. I have dug a lot of pitfalls, but I am afraid that I will not be able to come back in the end. Up to now, the protagonist is still like a ball, being kicked from the New World to the Empire, and then from the Empire to the Alliance by the masters of the Communist Party of China. It seems that there are a lot of things mixed together, but in fact, the advancement of the plot is really limited. Brother Yu, didn't you say you want to make the universe move? You have to stand up for yourself first (laughs)

If I keep watching it, it still feels good, but I'm afraid that after watching the latest version, I will lose the feeling of fanatically anticipating the GM. The logic and display setting data of this book are OK, and typos are clear and easy to identify 😅. Personal feeling: The description of female figures does not arouse my desire.

After watching Titania and Heroes of the Galaxy, I particularly like anime with this theme. Unfortunately, there are too few of them, so I had no choice but to look for novels with similar themes. Overall, it's pretty good-looking, with politics, Star Wars, and organic warfare. It would be perfect if there was an aristocratic heroine.

I provide the author with an idea for developing ships and fighting First, use various means (spy satellites, electronic reconnaissance aircraft, various scientific and psychic detectors, intelligence, etc.) To lock the specific position of the enemy fleet The ship first releases carrier-based aircraft and early warning aircraft to use photoelectric and radar to lock the specific position of the opponent. The settings are transmitted back through the data link, and then the fire control radar is suddenly turned on to guide the missile torpedoes to raid the enemy fleet (or not raid) and release the reconnaissance aircraft, and then the radar is turned off and the radar is turned off to use its own stealth and small size to avoid enemy radar searches and quickly leave, and then there is the second wave of other carrier-based aircraft (the carrier-based aircraft must gather at this time) After launching the missile and torpedoes, you can also use anti-radiation missiles to attack the enemy's reconnaissance units, and use fighting bombs to attack the opponent's interceptor fighters. The third wave is the missiles launched by the fleet. There is nothing to say about attacking local areas guided by the forward reconnaissance units To defend against a missile attack, you can use electronic jamming, close-range anti-missile missiles, etc. To defend against the missiles, and then send out unmanned fighter jets (the signal from the spacecraft cannot be transmitted at such a distance, right?). Small reconnaissance aircraft use various missiles to deal with the opponent's aircraft and then run away quickly. If the missiles of the large fleet arrive, people will be in trouble Projects that can be developed 1. Heavy fighter jets, light and medium-sized ones are not needed, because they all have the same electronic system, so it is better to just get a bigger one. In addition, the big one is equipped with a super-light device 2. A companion drone with artificial intelligence, which can carry missiles and radars to carry out some dangerous tasks and can also help To block missiles, you will be sorry if you don't bring two aircraft 3. Advanced computers and artificial intelligence without 0 elements (not the kind that can talk), needless to say, and the cost must be reduced 4. Invisible paint, how can you survive the enemy's radar without invisible paint 5. Radar , fire control radar, how can we lock on to the enemy without this thing? It would be great if we could make a phased array radar 6. Data link, we must know what each spacecraft is doing and cannot be easily disturbed by the cosmic environment and lose contact, so that we can concentrate superior forces to destroy the opponent 7. Hyperlight device, cannot If the road is blocked, you can't run. If you are poor, you can use tactics. If you are rich, you can't let go of this skill. Mobile combat is the king. 8. Anti-superlight device. Without this device, the two sides will definitely become an endless pursuit. 9. Missiles. According to the combat intention, there are strategic missiles, combat missiles, and tactical missiles. In terms of flight methods, there are cruise missiles and ballistic missiles. From the perspective of combat methods, there are anti-tank missiles, anti-aircraft missiles, anti-submarine missiles, anti-ballistic missiles, interceptor missiles, etc. From the relationship between the launch point and the target, there are surface-to-surface missiles, surface-to-air missiles, shore-to-ship missiles, ship-to-surface missiles, ship-to-ship missiles, air-to-surface missiles, air-to-ship missiles, air-to-air missiles, and so on. In terms of combat components and charges, there are conventional missiles, nuclear missiles and chemical missiles. Based on the propellant used, there are liquid fuel missiles, solid fuel missiles and solid and liquid mixed fuel missiles Please combine freely 10. Hot smoke, hot flame bombs, jamming foil. This may be the cheapest way to counter optical and radar. Will it be miraculous if combined with missiles? 11. Army vehicles. The army vehicles in the book are too unbearable. Even the current tanks can blast them (they can communicate randomly with each other), and the army tactics must be improved. 12. Exoskeleton, at least give me some photoelectric sighting equipment on the exoskeleton, so that we can better attack the enemy. You can't see anyone, but you still want to hit the opposite side? No matter how bad it is, you can still call for friendly fire support 13. Compared with individual anti-tank, rocket launchers are a must, and anti-tank guns are a must. Not to mention anti-tank, it is absolutely useful for fighting infantry 14. Army artillery, whether it is army artillery, rocket launchers or missiles, it is a must It can be maneuvered and cannot be found by the opponent. In the first battle, if Big Cat's shooting was not accurate, all 10 Sandman cannons were fired and the protagonist was wiped out on the spot. If it could run like the current truck cannon, this situation would be much better 15. A giant cargo ship that can travel faster than light speed. Soldiers rely on their stomachs to fight! This is especially true in modern warfare. Without sufficient supplies, a Gulf War can consume 30 million tons of supplies, let alone future space wars In the end, it is best not to make things that can only be assembled by the protagonist group and require a huge number of people to maintain. Everything must have a certain cost-effectiveness before it can be accepted by the army. Military expenses are not unlimited, and neither are logistical supplies. Yes, your Colossus consumes resources, manpower, and engineers

I like good books, please keep up the good work!

Is there no follow-up plot for the mediocre little nurse?

Are you going to kill indiscriminately?

Come on. I picked it up from the previous book. . . I like your writing style.

I feel like this game is much better than the last Crystal Palace! The previous work had too many strange digressions, but this time it has really achieved an excellent balance.

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I want to know, how many readers of this book are P Club players? It would be useful to make statistics so that relevant departments can arrange the number of bullets in the future 😏

The last Crystal Palace was a real harem story, but this one actually has a single heroine. The rest are two (the fox and the orange cat). They are reserved for stock traders because of their high popularity. Brothers who want to read a harem story can just jump on it.

Harem or not, revolution or not, the more I look at it, the more distorted it becomes. Either you must pursue your ideals to the end, or you may sink to the point where you have both wants and needs. Little bourgeois really can't achieve anything big.

The ending really didn't work, I couldn't write it anymore. With your title, everyone is rushing to the harem. In the end, you have to have a single female protagonist. The revolutionary part is just a background board. I just wrote a few random sentences. This primary color organization did not play any role in the liberation of the earth. It is not as good as the local resistance forces in the front. Finally, a deus ex machina was used to create a colossus. The main villain of this book is the Empire, but in the later stage it is almost like a comic, running around all the time. Not to mention being incomprehensible, you at least have a little challenge. This kind of mindless abuse is not interesting. The emotional line of the protagonist is really bad. He is interesting to people but has to think of the harem line. In the end, the writing is neither good nor bad. I personally feel that the quality of the later subscription is not worth it.

The Imperial Alliance exploits all kinds of things. As a time traveler, you can engage in red affairs and liberate civilians. But uniting alien races to rebel against humans feels like betraying one's own race. 😐

First of all, the book is good. In science fiction, it can be said that the filming of the above exists, but there are some parts that I really can't help but complain about 1. There are too many typos, and even some names are wrong. Sometimes I see the clouds and fog, and the reader reminded me, but there is no change. It is really uncomfortable to read 2. It is a bit depressing (probably imitating modern times) History, now I think about the teacher more and more. I really admire him. He is my only idol). About 5-6 years ago, there should be a market for such books. But after the epidemic, everyone's thinking has changed. In reality, I am already very tired. I hope the novel will be more relaxed. This is just my feeling. The novel is well written

Who can write an interstellar novel about stars, farming and development, and filling in the general macro one by one? I dare say it will be absolutely popular. I didn't read this book and I knew it was not pure just by reading the comments. Why do novels nowadays tend to rely on fantasy? I'm so fucking convinced!

I like this book very much. After all, it is rare to find something that suits my taste. It is more humorous and harem-like, but as most people said, it is neither harem enough nor revolutionary enough. I can see Feifei and Fox as clear cut characters. Orange Cat's position and plot performance are too poor. The empire's external nature is too strong and they are on opposite sides. Their relationship with the commander-in-chief has almost become an unrequited love. The Alliance is a party with profound internal problems. It is both an enemy of the community and an investor. The community has to rely on it to fight against the empire. At this stage, it is an alliance against the empire. The latest plot will involve backstabbing. Even if there is no backstabbing, I don't know how to fight against the alliance in the future. It is infiltrated by capital in every possible way. Capital is very powerful. It is impossible to expect the fox to change. Are you really betraying your own class? . The other female characters can only be used as house maids, and a certain star hunter is almost gone. As for the revolution, the class contradictions are not deep enough and are all based on race. Non-humans with high status in the Imperial Alliance all rely on their own abilities. Once they are no longer useful, they will be eliminated. Hereditary titles are impossible and will be stripped away. But do you expect these non-human beings to overturn human supremacy by relying on original theory? Striving for independence is a problem. Unable to be independent and unable to defeat the real master, his role can only be to serve as a background class and combat power? (Sad) Maybe we can only pursue one thing and have most of what we should have. . Moreover, I seriously doubt that the Enlightened Ones are a single powerful human race, so these racial conflicts do not exist. Then the only thing the original theory can bring to non-human beings is national independence. . But living like that is like a native of some planet. Perhaps change will only be possible if technology that is not monopolized by the upper class and eliminates racial disparities comes out. (I think it is best to write about it until a complete revolutionary trend of thought emerges, and the Yulian Community completely becomes the third group and we are on equal footing. The subsequent revolutionary issues are too abstract. After all, there are non-human issues, so I think it is difficult to write about them). Therefore, it is impossible for this book to have a complete ending on the issue of revolution, but your harem plot is also unsatisfactory, which is a pity.

Even a three-year-old child knows that xx is not a treat for dinner! And the author actually thinks that xx is the greatest human sophistication? It almost made me laugh for a year

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This book really made me feel uncomfortable... Shouldn't firepower and individual combat effectiveness develop simultaneously? The protagonist advocates the theory of fire and looks down on psykers, while at the same time using the power of psionic energy... It's really both authentic and upright. And according to the world view, high-level psykers also have a dominant position in the battle. Why on earth does the protagonist look down on psykers?

Let's give some popular science to readers who don't know about the hyperspace passage in the stars. Hyperspace Channel: A "tunnel" space formed by the interaction of the gravity wells between star systems that allows ships to use hyperspace engines to travel at faster than light speeds between two star systems. Among the stars, a star system can generate up to several channels, and at least 0. (This means that the Milky Way will have many island galaxies in the universe, which have no shipping lanes, cannot be visited by cosmic civilizations, cannot be developed, colonized, and included in the territory.) The brackets are explanations.

Externally powered armor (unarmored version)

I haven't read it for a long time, and now I have no desire to pick it up again. By the way, I want to ask the author whether this book is still about harem. In the beginning, it was actually aimed at harem. After reading more than a thousand chapters, it seems that it is not that inclined. It is said that it is still not there now. I have almost forgotten the plot. If it stays like this, I probably won't be able to pick it up again.

But speaking of it, it feels like there is no point in fighting Stalingrad. In reality, Stalingrad has Moscow behind it and cannot be bypassed. However, Marshal Li's Grad in the book is only a city in Gaia. It has no impact on crossing over to fight the "Moscow" behind it. It is meaningful tactically but meaningless strategically. The fleet on the opposite side can come and leave whenever they want. The planet's ground forces can't do anything at all. It is completely incomparable to the offensive and defensive battle of Stalingrad, which is called the turning point of World War II.

They used their fleets to destroy empires one after another, and they used Colossus to destroy planets one after another. All civilizations were trembling under their torrent of steel. However, what is not known is that they were only trying to save the overwhelmed CPU0. . . .

I discovered this book when I was in junior high school, and then read it all the way through my sophomore year. Today, I suddenly thought about what happened and found out that it was over. I had mixed feelings and wanted to say something. I liked this book very much when I first discovered it in junior high school. The world view and the plot are very suitable to my taste. Going home once a week in junior high school and once every two weeks in high school made me happy to read it every time I went back. Then fantasizing and guessing about the plot in the book in class and before going to bed was one of the rare pleasures in my boring life. When I was in junior high school, I was a shallow history buff. I would read some history just like a novel, just for entertainment and not go into depth. In high school, I became a vulgar throne. I liked the color red and the harem, and became more picky because I read novels for a long time. This book was extremely popular with me at the time, and it became the book I read the longest. Later, after I couldn't read the pirated version, I also turned to the original version and posted comments to join the readership group. I chatted, verified, and deduced the plot in the group. I was really happy during that time. The change was after I graduated from high school and went to college. After I was freed from the prison-like life, my time online changed enough, and the distance between me and this book became wider and wider. On the one hand, my understanding of red has deepened. Although I am still very vulgar, I have now understood that the two cannot coexist. The excellent works that perfectly hit me in the past have become regrettable works that "revolution is not revolution, harem is not harem". Secondly, from the beginning of the war, my own predictions and speculations with my friends in the group determined that this book was likely to be unfinished, and my love for this book gradually faded away. Because I feel that I will not be able to see Yu Lian leading the workers' Star Destroyers and Colossus to cut off the chains (Yu Lian has also changed from a revolutionary and interesting protagonist to an unattractive little bourgeois warlord in my eyes), nor can I see the plot of Yu Lian hugging the fox, orange cat, owl and their respective maid groups to make sweets. At the same time, Laomao had to add more water more slowly. In addition, I later had more things to do, so I abandoned the entire book and stopped speaking in the readership. Until tonight, I suddenly wanted to see what happened to this book. Having said so much, I still regret in the end. I regret that this book does not have a good ending as I imagined when I was lying on the bed in the dormitory. I also think back to the time I spent chasing books. After writing so much, there are actually many things I want to say but don't know how to say, but I really can't express them, so I can only thank you. Thanks to Lao Mao for writing this book and accompanying me through junior high and high school. Thanks to Lao Mao for creating Yu Lian, the protagonist in my bedtime fantasy. Thanks to those who discussed with me in the comment area and the group. Although we are strangers, these words are worth recalling in the future. Thank you to me in junior high school and high school, you really worked hard. I wish Laomao and other readers good health and success in their family and career. Thank you

The author should simply write adventure stories with a single protagonist. Group portraits are not good, and the author's layout is really not suitable for writing revolutionary stories. It will only give people the awkward feeling of floating or deus ex machina. All the female supporting characters are also too superficial. So let's write a single-maintained story similar to the Legend of Xiaobing.