
The Secret Garden of a Retired Hero
转业勇者的秘密花园
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 322k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Sword & Sorcery
- Updated
- 2d ago
- English
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69Monthly votes
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I have been an old book friend of this author since 2013. I started reading his first serious novel of 50,000 words. First of all, let me tell you that the logic of this author's writing belongs to the background of offline screenwriters. The content is good, but the plot is awkward and not suitable for most groups.
The author's old problems haven't gotten better.
From "The Crystal Palace" onwards, the author has favored having a group of longtime friends with whom the protagonist has shared various past experiences. However, the author doesn't write side stories, so readers don't recognize them. These are minor issues; the biggest problem is that there's also a harem within the past events. What's the difference between a harem that readers don't know and the other women?
How many people are there in this harem?
It feels like there are a lot of people. If there are more than 6 people, it will be difficult to give the whole scene.
Please improve this outline. In the end of the last book, it was obvious that I could no longer control the plot. In the end, the original theory and the problem of the two female protagonists were not resolved. In fact, there is a rationality problem in writing two leading leaders of hostile forces as female protagonists. The male protagonist can no longer take the red route. I hope that when writing this book, I planned it so that it doesn't get out of control.
Is it the real Crystal Palace?
Considering that leaks in the first two books are almost certain...
Suddenly I realized this is the book by the king of harem novels with terrible endings.
The first few chapters were alright, but things got a bit off after the courtyard was revealed. The gameplay is more enjoyable when it follows the storyline; cheating without a storyline is meaningless. It's just unfolding right now, like the feeling of a pair of characters clashing at the beginning.
I love the feeling of having sharks in the Crystal Palace, and I really love Annie from the Stars!
I've always wondered whether the World Tree's corruption into the Abyss Tree would increase this trait, or if the entire World Tree would be completely transformed into the Abyss Tree?
I still don't know Where exactly is the World Tree that the male protagonist possesses? I always thought the protagonist's World Tree was a space within his own body, and the reward trees were the coordinates of various dimensions.