Pirate Card King

The book of Holy Mother Bitch is disgusting to read. The world of One Piece is a place where you can show your kindness. Are you stupid?

After reading everyone's book reviews, I feel very sorry, not for this book, but for the current book reviews in the book circle. I don't know why everyone is so hostile now. It's okay if you don't like it, and it's okay if there are people who criticize it, but it's okay to stare at one point over and over again, and keep posting repeated book reviews. What are you trying to do? The most controversial thing I see now is the plot to prevent Nami from killing Aaron. 1. Why doesn't the protagonist kill Aaron? Some people say that the protagonist prevents Nami from killing Aaron and blocks the knife for Aaron in order to gain positive energy essence. We first need to know how to obtain the essence of positive energy (obtaining sincere gratitude from others), then we need to understand who will sincerely thank him by doing so? Do you expect a defeated and dying Aaron? It's not worth it at all, it's not enough to even replace the positive energy essence from the healing blood bottle. The real reason is that it is on Fish-Man Island. The protagonist and Tago rescued several fish-man slaves at the beginning and after going to Fish-Man Island, they have a good relationship with Otohime and Shirahoshi. Later, they saved Tago with a blood transfusion. It is more in the interests of the protagonist to save Aaron rather than the Virgin. After all, compared to the friends of Fish-Man Island, Nami just saved her casually when she was looking for something to do to gain positive energy essence (you don't want to Bringing his feelings for Nami into it, the setting of the male protagonist is that he has never watched One Piece). If Aaron, the former fishman of the Sun Pirates, is killed, even if Jinbei and Tago don't say anything, will they have a grudge in their hearts? Moreover, the male protagonist's favorability of the fishman island has a purpose. Although he doesn't watch One Piece very much, he knows the existence of ancient weapons, and he also knows that Shirahoshi can control the Neptune class. 2. Why is Nami grateful to the protagonist despite being prevented from taking revenge? Brothers, wake up! The protagonist is here to save people. Someone kills your relatives and keeps threatening you, asking you to make money for him every day. Then someone comes down from the sky and arrests the person. You insist on killing the murderer, but he says don't get excited yet and let me send the person to the court for trial. Then you don't thank him for saving you? Not to mention that at this time, the protagonist's identity is a navy, not a pirate. So will the pirates captured alive be killed on demand? 3. Talking about the protagonist, the Virgin Where is the Virgin? Point it out to me, which enemy have you let go? So is Aaron considered an enemy? That's not the protagonist's enemy (I thought it was the protagonist who came here to cause trouble). Is he worthy of being an enemy? It's just a tool fishman passing by to earn positive energy essence. Isn't Spandam, who took the initiative to target the protagonist, dead? Didn't the Tianlong people kill them? Above.

The character of the protagonist? ? ? And the author's writing style? ? ? Seeing dozens of skeletons, swallowed? ? ? Hungry? When an ordinary college student travels back in time and sees an entire exhibition room of human specimens that have been slaughtered and preserved, his first reaction is confusion and anger? ? ? Shouldn't the first reaction be fear?

Not a bastard! ! Some time ago, I was in a book shortage and looking for novels to read. At first glance, the title of this novel seemed a bit uninteresting. Highlights below In my personal opinion ❶, this book is still okay. It is not like other PZs that are tasteless and brainless, and the plot is broken. On the contrary, the plot is very compact (of course when you first start reading, you may feel that the author's level is a little low). About 50 chapters, it can be said that it is basically on track! ❷Many of the plots are relatively novel and thoughtful, and unlike other fans, they are not copied blindly ❸The protagonist setting is also better? Right (maybe it started to break down a bit after having an affair with the empress) 👏 If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Reading novels is just a hobby and there's nothing to worry about, right?

It's all ordered, and the poison resistance is high. I'm bored recently. Let me talk about the problem: I feel that the author's thinking is problematic at the beginning. In Nami's case, I thought the author wanted to make the protagonist Zefa, Spider-Man's case, but the character you created at the beginning was decisive in killing but kind and righteous in heart. Wang Na is really boring. This problem was particularly serious in the middle period. It made me want to vomit out of boredom. I may have discovered this problem again in the final plot, and slowly started to write my own plot. In summary, it is not a very good book, but it is systematic. The setting is quite interesting, and you can subscribe, but the monthly pass is a bit difficult (I don't want to give my monthly pass to this kind of book). It's really stupid to speculate on One Piece in the middle. The most important sense of anticipation and freshness in the novel is completely gone. The plot is the same. Why should I read your novel? Revisiting One Piece? Anyway, after reading it, the author is also a novice. It may not be easy for him to write so much with his passion. Come on.

When is the time for retribution! 🙏 Nami, I'll cut myself off, please spare Aaron! Although you 🐴 are dead, for a strong man like me to cut myself off and take the punishment for him, it can be considered as a balance between the two! Give this good man some face! 🙏

The editor highly recommends what I saw here. Although I don't know who this editor is, he is definitely gone now.

After reading more than seventy chapters, the main problem is that the underlying logic of the book is broken. The protagonist's cheat is to get system energy and draw cards after receiving people's thanks. At the beginning, he saved hundreds of slaves and got thousands of system energy. This kind of cheat is destined to be based on the masses. As long as you think about it with your brain, you will know that the protagonist needs to have a territory of his own power, have a good reputation, develop his territory, govern the people within his sphere of influence well, and get their thanks, so that he can harvest the energy of the system at all times. This is the right way. Just like the Sand Crocodile, no matter whether it is true or false, it must be famous and it must have its own power base. However, the protagonist has no intention of doing this or working in a similar direction. He just keeps wandering on the sea like a pirate, drifting with the tide, and is very lacking in subjective initiative. When something happens, he just does something good and good. He receives thanks from a few people and gets hundreds of system energy points, which is not even enough for half a lottery draw. You must know that the more people you thank for this kind of plug-in, the more energy you will get. You will get thousands of energy by saving the hundreds of slaves at the beginning. It is completely unreasonable for the protagonist to never work hard in this direction, but to sink into such trivial matters. This is the breakdown of the underlying logic of the book. The protagonist, a person with normal intelligence, seems to have never thought about the correct use of his plug-in, and is constantly frustrated in the process. The combination of the two is a bit discouraging. My friend is dead. The main character, the Virgin, etc. Mentioned in the book review area are just minor problems on the surface. It is the big problem if the underlying logic is wrong. If there was no such problem, I feel that the score of this book would not be so low. I don't know if the author is aware of this problem. I would like to remind you that the author should delete it after reading it. After all, this is a negative book review and it is not good to keep it.

Lei Luo: Nami, although Aaron killed you🐴, robbed your money, beat your neighbor in the village, demolished the house in your village, but when will repayment be repaid? You two will be settled in the future Oh, you are not satisfied, then I will take a stab for him 🔪 It's okay, the wound looks very deep, but I have a digitized body, just drink blood and it will be fine I have successfully resolved your grudges. Oops, I am so positive 🪖🪖

Those who die are not their own🐴, but those who advise others to be generous are so wicked that they will be struck by lightning while walking. .

I read Chapter 85. Actually, what's disgusting is not that the protagonist prevents Nami from taking revenge. What's disgusting is that the author wrote this thing as a kindness. And Nami is still grateful to the protagonist? This is originally a matter of persuading people to be generous. Now that you have done it, keep a low profile. This is not a shameless thing, but through the author's description, it has become a positive energy? This makes people unhappy.

Ah Long disgusted me so much. I didn't expect him to stab himself.

The protagonist should not be too tall. . Then there is no sense of substitution. Just be as tall as Luffy, Ashshanks, Hawkeye and other mortals. . .

I feel like the navy in this author's works is not as good as pirates! There are too many private goods, and those private goods feel like they can't be rounded off! The protagonist should be a good person, spread positive energy, and then become a pirate wholeheartedly! Others have been doing business to save his life for so many years, but he has no idea at all!

I don't want to say anything anymore. The author should stop writing. Please, please, really don't write anymore. I can't stand it anymore. Some shit is funny, but your shit is so painful. Why do you write fan fiction because you want to change things that are too painful? What did you change? Maybe Ferrog is still alive. But not enough. And what makes the protagonist stronger? I was really about to throw up. Please stop writing. I beg you. When I saw Muir's wife being killed directly, I was dead. The coincidence is too bloody. When I say this, you write like this, you are so strange. Author, although there are many sad things in the pirate world, writing fan fiction itself is to change those things. I even suspect that even without looking at the back, I could have guessed that Ace was still dead in the end. Whitebeard is still dead. It's really worse than this one I've seen before, but at least some things are good, Whitebeard is still alive, Ace is still alive. And the world he describes is not a novel of the same type as One Piece, it is a novel about traveling through all the worlds. But if he just writes about One Piece, the fan fiction will definitely be better than yours. Because people who don't deserve to die will never die. It's just too data-based. Stop writing, please author.

Chapter 95 is outrageous. . You are already a lieutenant general and you still don't know what the Celestial Dragons are like. You even brought your wife to the World Conference. . What kind of stuff did the author write?

Nami would give up killing Aaron. If I haven't watched the anime, I might really believe it. If Nami herself said she gave up killing Aaron, believe it or not, her sister would beat her to death, a fish-man who killed her mother. Nami would be stupid and sweet.

Great. Don't join the navy.

Why do I feel like the introduction is full of poisonous points. Am I asking too much? 🙂

Does the protagonist know the plot? Sometimes he pretends to be a fool and doesn't know anything, just to use various accidents to connect the characters When I arrived at Nami's Cocoa Nishi Village, I suddenly knew the plot. It felt like it was just to recognize people.

I'm afraid the author didn't recharge, so why is it in the editor's recommendation?

What are you writing about?

It's time to visit the land of women which is a must-see for Pirates fandoms. I've watched too many Empresses, and I hope I don't end up recruiting Empresses. It would be great if the Empress treats the protagonist as a savior. After watching too many Pirates fandoms, the Empress will lick the Protagonist. Now that I see the Empress falling in love with the Protagonist, my points will be greatly reduced.

First of all, when you were fighting the Celestial Dragons earlier, kill them as you say. When it comes to Aaron, Aaron, kill Nami's mother. It turns out that it's time for you to retaliate. Then why did you kill the Celestial Dragon? I forgive you. You said you don't want to enmity with the fish people, so you are not afraid of the world government? Once again, the combat power collapsed, and the protagonist was replaced by a general. Although you, the author, said that the protagonist was not strong enough, I laughed, facing five lieutenant generals on Judiciary Island. He also injured three people and used his ultimate move to save others. He was able to fight five people at once, although he didn't win, but are you telling me that he can't beat Doflamingo? I laughed, how strong is he? You can almost tie with Marco. Are you telling me that you can't beat Doflamingo? Marco is a deputy to the emperor, so who does Doflamingo count? Could he beat Marco? Why are the four emperors always the same? Not only because they are powerful, but also because their subordinates are powerful, Katakuri, Marco, Jhin, Ben Beckman, and Shiliu. Each one is powerful. Did Doflamingo fight that one? Writing blindly.

After reading the comments, I wondered why there was such a disgusting and virginal bitch protagonist. . . I read specific chapters specifically. . . The protagonist asked Nami to kill Aaron by herself and blocked Aaron's knife. . And when it was him, he still stabbed it in himself to make others think that he wanted to repay Aaron. . Nami was completely confused. . In order to refresh a wave of positive energy essence. . Then he went on to say something pretentious about when will retribution come. . It's really embarrassing. . . Then Nami was asked to let Aaron go this time, because he was very close to Aaron's former captain and the fish-men. . It's not easy for him to kill Aaron directly. . And will not stop Nami from taking revenge in the future. . . Then they sent these fishmen to the deep sea prison. . It was mentioned later that Aaron was poisoned to death when Blackbeard was causing trouble in the deep-sea prison. . . The most toxic part of this article for me is the later version of it becoming a stallion. . . Wherever he goes, there is always someone giving the protagonist a wife. . There is also an adopted little girl who is annoying. . If the gender is changed to male, he will be the kind of naughty kid who can be kicked away a hundred times. .

😅 I really don't know what's going on in my heart right now Aaron's paragraph, explain it from different perspectives 1. Protagonist's perspective Aaron is a subordinate of his old friend Tiger, so for the sake of his friend, he is not killed, but arrested Nami, as a person who suffers, asked her to put down her hatred and embarrass others, so she gave her a knife and a chance to take revenge, but she couldn't do it? My friend's subordinate did something excessive, and in order to apologize, I stabbed myself (PS: Regardless of whether Nami is the protagonist or not, to the protagonist, she is just a villager who just killed her. Metaphor: Your relatives and friends kill a person with a car. Do you want your relatives and friends to be punished by law, pay money to apologize to the other person's family , or let the other person directly drive and kill your relatives and friends) . . 2. Nami's perspective Aaron killed his adoptive mother, so she wanted to kill Aaron, but she was too timid to kill him. I am angry that the protagonist did not kill Aaron But regardless of his selfish behavior, can his stabbing himself repay Aaron's mistake He is still the benefactor who saved the entire village, and a 'thank you' to his benefactor is not an exaggeration

If you accidentally travel through time, can't you be more careful? 😏

He persuaded me to quit based on his strength! The name is called Pirate Card King, but the cards provided by the system have no sense of existence. It can be said that after seventy or eighty cards, no one will mention the system cards.

Why don't you have the brain to write a book?

What can I say, Aaron's plot is understandable and acceptable. The plot of Judiciary Island and Feresrosa is a bit too much. The protagonist is a good person, and it doesn't seem like anything. But please don't become a saint, it looks disgusting Good person - saint The early stage is pretty good The middle stage is a bit too much, my scalp feels numb when I look at it, and I can't go on.