My Uchiha Is Too Stable

This plot character is so stupid that I can't stand it. Danzo is written as mentally retarded. After all, he has been in charge of the roots for so long and is written as a useless person who can only be incompetent and furious. Uchiha Madara has been observing in the dark for so long. Obito has planned it for a long time, first letting him fake death, and then making him despair, and then win him over. The author is better, just let Madara rush up and be hacked to death by the protagonist. . . . , And your timeline is so messed up that it gives me a headache. You should also follow the basic laws for fan creations! You can have your own opinions, after all, the perspectives are different, but if you write like this, it's a bit insulting to people's intelligence!

This book can no longer be regarded as a normal Naruto fanfic, because the author has completely let himself go, and the original plot has long been torn to pieces. The current plot is very poisonous, saucy, and showy. If you want to read a normal fanfic, please avoid it. If you want to see the sexy operation, you must resist the poison and read it. The operation in these recent chapters has been so good that it made me stupid (ಡωಡ)

Recommended to readers who don't often read two-dimensional novels, fanfiction, etc., But often read fairy tales and fantasy novels. It can only be said that it is not written for Naruto fans, but for Xianxia fans. The first part was OK, but the second part directly changed to a fairy tale based on the Naruto setting. The style was incompatible with the previous Naruto novels.

I feel that the protagonist is getting more and more drifting. I thought it was farming that is steadily improving his strength. Using the convenience of family resources to steadily develop new techniques to stabilize the Uchiha's foundation. The dragon slaying technique learned in the past life at the university is competing with the old gangs at the top of Konoha. In the end, the protagonist I saw was floating before the kaleidoscope was even opened, or was he pretending to be cool? Is this really stable?

This book collapsed at the 20th chapter, and completely collapsed at the 40th chapter. Let's talk about the advantages first. This book is relatively clear about the political struggle in Konoha. Unlike many fans, the description of the power struggle is quite accurate. In this regard, in the general environment of fanfiction, you can It's rare but there are many shortcomings. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it is chaotic. I have always had a point of view, that is, fan fiction must not be mixed and matched. Even if it is mixed and matched, the compatibility of the world must be considered. The six styles in Naruto are really the first poisonous point of this book. After all, it has already been There is a soul-cutting sword, and the six styles do not match the Hokage, and then the telekinesis is used. It can be said that the power system has collapsed Why not mix and match? The important reason is that it can easily cause the power system to collapse, because when you do this thing, you must have your own characteristics. To put it bluntly, you must be stronger and the better you make it. The more, the greater the damage to the balance. For example, someone said at the time that the iron block in the article is exactly the same as the earth escape hardening technique, so the author must write out the characteristics, otherwise it will be meaningless. As a result, the protagonist's iron block is not only instant, has no dead ends, increases chakra, and integrates the blood successor The limit does not reduce the flexibility, which will inevitably lead to the collapse of the power system. If there are too many of these, the power system will collapse, and this book will collapse and become a simple and refreshing article The author himself said not to talk about sutras and Taoism at the age of three or four, and the jounin Hokage at the age of six or seven, but as for himself, because there are many Weird abilities increase the strength of the protagonist, and in the end, he becomes a 10-year-old movie-level actor. This is because even though he didn't want to, he became like that as he wrote it Coupled with the author's plan for the protagonist, since he has such a big imagination, he still has to open eternity in a eye-catching way. Isn't this true? Is it something that should be solved with imagination? Also, the plot is also messy. I can't see where the impetus for writing the plot like this is. What kind of battle are you talking about? Who are you fighting? It may be very exciting, but it doesn't make sense. Change the name of the person and the names of several skills. This kind of writing will look familiar to you, but the real Where is the plot? Where is the really meaningful plot that advances Naruto? I haven't seen it. Compared with the book "Death Ninja", this book is just adding a wavy line to the original story line, so I feel tired just reading it... I hope the author can write better and better. See you again...

The author has let himself go, Qiang! The plot of these chapters confused me, it's interesting

Although there is a lot to complain about, I personally think it is well written and I read it in one day. Friendly recommendation from a 15-year-old bookworm.

Let's create an original heroine. I've already thought of a name. She'll be called Fei Tong.

To be honest, I don't know what angle to consider this sentence from. The author has more than ten years of timeline to write, which can completely resolve this contradiction. If all are denied, do you want to take Uchiha away? It's unlikely. The most you can write about is that Uchiha became a Kage, but becoming a Kage is of little use and it doesn't solve the fundamental problem. How should Uchiha's character be dealt with? If this contradiction cannot be resolved, will the book fail? Because there is no coordination between Uchiha and other people in the village, the author is simply using force to intimidate.

Is this protagonist probably going to follow the path of Cthulhu?

Did the author really watch Naruto, or was he just trying to gain popularity? There are many problems. Kakashi's graduation and White Fang's suicide timeline are wrong. Secondly, Lin is not a child from an orphanage, but from a civilian family. In the future, Kakashi will not be the seventh generation, but the sixth generation. Also at that time, the Sandaime was a Ninja's apprentice and the Sannin was so domineering that Danzo didn't even dare to stab him, and there were too many typos. In the end, the protagonist is given so much to worry about, because the Uchiha clan itself has shield melting, Zanpakutō, and can develop various skills in the novel. It turns out that the protagonist's goal is to capture Obito's future Mangekyō Blood Ring Eye, which is really rubbish.

After the death of Uzumaki Naruto, the invincible Jo star awakened and met Sajisuke, who claimed to have come here from the future timeline. Sajisuke said that Naruto was the future demon king and wanted to kill him, but was saved by the passing Asakura Leaf King. At this time, Urahara also came and told Naruto that everything was because of the Four Souls Jade. Naruto decided to go to sea to find the Four Souls Jade. In the Kronos Star Territory, Naruto and Cloud defeated Sephiroth. But in the CCC Star Territory, he suffered a major blow. Naruto tried his best, but could not stop Darko. When Naruto was defeated by Darko and the CCC would completely fall into Darko's control, Sephiroth sighed, I will not become a memory. With a flash of eight swords, the avenue collapsed, Darko returned to ruins, and Naruto embarked on a new journey. In the SNHJT star field, Naruto picked up a bronze box, and discovered Bai Lan's conspiracy on the way. He also picked up a little girl, and then found out that this little girl was what Bai Lan was looking for. Naruto tried his best to protect her. The little girl was very touched, so he decided to leave voluntarily and went to Bai Lan's place. Naruto said that I was too weak, so he wanted to rescue the little girl again. His determination made the little girl understand. It's a pity that Naruto is too weak. In front of the little girl, a hole was made in Naruto's chest. The little girl cried and shouted: Help me, Naruto-kun. At this time, the bronze box lit up. It turned out to be the holy cloth and was automatically put on Naruto. After that, the little girl's tears still hit the holy cloth. The bronze holy cloth evolved and became the holy cloth. Naruto burned the small universe and used a Pegasus meteor punch to defeat Bailan. Naruto embarked on a new journey. Naruto came to the Keiyu Star Territory. It was peaceful here and everything seemed normal, but Naruto always felt as if something was watching him. At night, Naruto always had a strange dream. Finally, at the night when he was about to leave the Keiyu Star Territory, he woke up from the dream. He had already entered the monster's mouth. It turned out that the peace was the real dream. The sacred clothes were like mortal things. Although the invincible Jo Star could work. , But could not escape. Just when Naruto was desperate, a voice sounded from the bottom of his heart, "Hey, Naruto, you are still as useless as ever." At the same time, Naruto's face began to grow bone, and his body was out of his control. The bones he came from were uncovered, and although the battle was a bit embarrassing, he still left the Kedog Star Territory. Naruto was afraid of the voice in his heart, so his strength was reduced. He had to wear sacred clothes when he encountered a monster. In the Faiz Star Territory, Naruto fought in an extremely awkward manner. The Fire Spirit of King Ye couldn't stand it anymore and beat Naruto up. Naruto realized it and immediately attacked Teruo and Kitazaki. , Murakami and others were taken away and embarked on a new journey. Finally, Naruto came to the new world and found clues to the Four Souls Jade. The Four Souls Jade was related to the Orange Juice Project. When Naruto was looking for clues related to the Orange Juice Project, a man named Mibu Kyoshiro told him that the Ofi Enoch he met in the Faiz Star Territory was the failed product of the Orange Juice Project. At the same time, he told him that the Four Souls Jade was the result of the Orange Juice Project. In his hand, if you want the Jade of Four Souls, go to Infinite City to find him. Naruto has been asking for a long time, but no one knows about Infinite City. At this time, Sajisuke appeared. Sajisuke said that he wanted to kill Naruto to prevent future tragedies. Sajisuke felt that he had a great advantage. Sajisuke went up, and Sajisuke hit gg. After Naruto beat Sajisuke to the ground, he started his mouth escape, indicating that he would become the most benevolent and kind person. Demon King, Sajisuke said that I will not believe you, and I will not tell you that Infinite City is on Red Corpse Star. Naruto continues to escape. If I change in the future, I hope you can defeat me. Naruto got clues about Infinite City and prepared to go to Red Corpse Star. Sajisuke said that he wanted to monitor Naruto, so he followed him. Naruto came to Infinite City and was surprised to find that he couldn't even beat the gatekeeper. The door's Lu Otsutsuki. Lukar hit Otsutsuki and threw him. If Lukar hadn't been merciful, he and Sajisuke would have been gged, and Naruto was in trouble again. Sajisuke said that the world is like this, so for the sake of noble justice, I am willing to give my heart, and wait until I die with him with my fellow travelers. Naruto, you took advantage of the chaos to enter Infinite City, Naruto said how can this be allowed? You promised to knock me down Naruto is very Troubled, he gradually fell asleep and realized a strange place. He met a person who called himself Kumenma. Kumenma asked him: What is the difference between a king and a mount? Naruto couldn't answer. Kumenma attacked him and told him: It's instinct. Gradually, Kumenma turned into Naruto's color. Kumenma disappeared. Naruto's Jo Star evolved to the second stage and became the Platinum Experience Requiem. Naruto. Feeling that he could defeat Lucal, he wanted to find Sajisuke to share this joy, but found that Sajisuke had already gone to find Lucal. Naruto anxiously headed to the gate of Infinite City. When Naruto arrived, he found that Sajisuke was out of breath, but Lucal was fine. Naruto was very angry, so he used the Platinum Experience Requiem to kill Lucar Orla, and then used the Platinum Experience Requiem to manipulate time and resurrect Sajisuke. After Sajisuke was resurrected by Naruto, he was also very angry and shouted at Naruto, why do you have the power of time? Just like the Demon King in the future! Naruto said, if I become like the Demon King in the future, I hope you can defeat me! This time Naruto did not activate the mouth escape, Sajisuke was not affected by him, and Sajisuke left angrily Naruto was sad, but he did not go to Sajisuke because he wanted to. To know the answer, enter Infinite City. After entering Infinite City, Naruto found that he was still very strong. It could be said that he came to Mibu Kyoshiro without any hindrance. Mibu Kyoshiro did not wait for Naruto. Speaking, the nameless god Feng Liu slashed his sword. Qinglong chopped Naruto to the ground and said: Wait for two more days, after Xuanyuan 14 comes, you can come again! Naruto was very unwilling to this, shouted and rushed forward again, Ren Sheng Kyoshiro stabbed Suzaku with his backhand and chopped Naruto to the ground. At this time, Sajisuke came Sajisuke said, Naruto, you go first, I will kill him. As he said that, he opened his Mangekyou Sharingan, and went crazy. He smiled and said to Naruto that this is the power I can stop you. Then he was chopped down to the ground by Mibu Kyoshiro with a knife. Mibu Kyoshiro became a little impatient. With a slight swing of the knife, the color of the world changed and everything returned to ruins. Mibu Kyoshiro said to them The two said: Mud Bodhisattva said that you two are the ones who can defeat me. After Xuanyuan 14, if you defeat me, the creatures in this world can be resurrected with the Four Souls Jade. Naruto and Sajisuke wait until Xuanyuan 14 comes. After that, I realized the fusion technique and merged to become Narujisuke. Narujisuke said that I was 1000% ready and went to challenge Mibu Kyoshiro. After 20 rounds of fighting between Narujisuke and Mibu Kyoshiro, he was stabbed. He fell to the ground and exited the combined state. Mibu Kyoshiro said to him, why are you so weak? Forget it, if I don't kill you two, you two will just live with regret! After saying this, Mibu Kyoshiro beat the ground in pain, angry at his own incompetence. Naruto wanted to comfort him, but he was surprised to find that his body was out of control and he crushed Sajisuke. Heart, Sajisuke said with difficulty: I'm sorry, Naruto, forgive my cowardice, maybe you will become the Demon King because of me... The combination technique can't defeat him, but what about the power of the prophet family? I am the last prophet, I lied to you, I did not come back from the future, but I saw the future, the death of the last prophet, the huge cause and effect is connected with infinite power, Naruto, please defeat him! The man was invincible and furious, and the huge cause and effect melted him and Platinum. The sacred clothes disintegrated in front of the huge cause and effect, and merged into Naruto's body. The most benevolent, supreme and powerful king! Mibu Kyoshiro was ecstatic when he heard the so-called two people! Then Naruto replied: I have indeed received your joy. Then Fengmo punched Kyoshiro, and Mibu Kyoshiro said softly before he died: Welcome to the top of the food chain.

As long as it's a bad-tailed whale's book, collect it first and then recommend it.

My bad tail whale title is too solid

Starting from Chapter 60, it becomes a fantasy novel. God tm proved to be a film-level person. If you can beat the shadow, you are the shadow. Why is it that Ye Cang, who can kill shadow-level people and can kill shadow-level people, is not a shadow-level person himself? The previous writing is very good and interesting to read. I personally don't like too many anime elements running around. This book handles it very well and makes me feel quite interesting. But why should we preach?

There are a lot of interns and quarrels in the comments 🐶 Why do you have to clean up this matter of fan settings being changed? Is it necessary for the bad-tailed whale's book to be so hard-edited? Isn't it great to have a great imagination, not to abuse the owner, and to be non-toxic throughout the process?

Look at the achievements of those wandering toads, and look at you. After all, you were also a famous figure back then, right?

Is this a fairy tale written too much? It also proved to be a film level. It made me laugh to death.

When I was just searching for books, I thought of The Bad Whale, and saw that he had changed his waistcoat. I saw the recommendation in the old book, and then I found this book. After carefully reading the reason for changing the waistcoat, I realized that I had to start over. But before I even read the book, I found that the book was bad again. I can only say that reincarnation can't change the bad news! Full of resentment😅

The brain of the rotten whale has always been good, but it's just too lazy or three minutes of blood. With one tenth of Tang San's patience, he can surpass five whites. It's a pity that now it's difficult to figure out the circle.

I failed in two chapters. Why should I read a book like this in Sanjiang? I doubt the author has even read Naruto.

While saying not to be serious about self-pleasure, he also frantically repeated the old double standard of "proving the film level"

Although it's a cool article, why should it be so perfunctory? At least, write more carefully. Can't you find information on the Internet to make it more reasonable and logical? Is it so easy to make money now? To write a novel, you only need to improve your grades, buy a recommendation position, hire a few trolls, and a large group of followers will come and give you money. When you are happy with the money, you will turn into a licking dog. I really don't know whether some people in the comment area are trolls or lickers? Aren't novels supposed to be popular if they are good-looking? What's going on now? The rankings are a bunch of garbage. Are there too many primary school students? Or are you a bookworm who doesn't even read it? Or is it that people nowadays are stupid and have too much money?

After reading your book, a person, a book, a corpse, there are no miracles

It's easy to make the book review area quiet. Just set a comment limit of 500 followers. This was the case for two new books in the last issue. It's really interesting that the emperor is not anxious and the eunuch is anxious

As expected of you, this book is also bad

Rotten whale, when can you start to cheer up again?