Tokyo's Manga Master

This is ridiculous. Trying to be depressing for the sake of being depressing. If you're slow at writing, don't include toxic elements. Everyone has limited time; self-indulgent sentimentality is the most fatal mistake. If you don't want to make money from writing novels, just say so.

The protagonist is far too arrogant and incompetent. Even though he has a cheat ability, does that mean he looks down on other original characters just because he copied them? He's secretly mocking everyone while smiling on the surface. Author, are you a minor?

Not only does it post one chapter a day, but it's also incredibly long and filler...

I'm a little curious how you guys managed to read 10 minutes of just 4 chapters?

🤫🤫🤫The protagonist is a transmigrator. In his previous life, he was several decades old, but based on the descriptions in the story, I deduce his mental age to be 14, and extremely immature. Suddenly, a lyric comes to mind: "You're so toxic, so toxic, so toxic, so toxic!" Goodbye.

The biggest problem is that the protagonist was a successful person in his previous life. Because the current protagonist is a teenager who doesn't understand social etiquette, likes to fantasize, often daydreams, and is sensitive and immature, he completely lacks the advantages of an adult who is cautious, calm, and has high emotional intelligence.

You wrote a novel based on a comic, but from chapters 42 to 51, 10 chapters were filled with filler content that had nothing to do with the comic. While you may have your own reasons for this, and it's part of the main storyline, couldn't you have compressed it into three chapters? The reason readers say your writing is padded is because you didn't provide what they wanted to see, and instead just wrote plots that readers weren't interested in.

Whether you copied it and nobody knows about it or something else... A melodramatic, overpowered protagonist who relies on sob stories and achieves a comeback, and whose story is unrelated to the main plot, is really low-class. It feels like I started off well, then got stuck halfway through, and ended up just piecing together a hodgepodge of characters.

The male protagonist's personality is incredibly realistic. Before his plagiarism plan even begins, he imagines himself achieving great success, and his smug and inflated demeanor gives one a strange sense of shame, like having one's own dark past exposed. Are you there? Was the camera removed?

I didn't understand the last few chapters. Why did these plot points suddenly appear? Is it to elicit sympathy? Or what?