Tokyo's Manga Master

It's inexplicable. I am depressed for the sake of being depressed. If you write slowly, don't write poisonous things. Everyone's time is limited, and self-impression is the most fatal. If you don't want to make money by writing novels, just say so.

The protagonist is too smart and too short-sighted. Even though he has a golden finger, why does he look down on other original characters because he just relies on copying? When I see someone mocking someone inwardly and still smiling on the outside, are you, the author, underage?

Not only is it a chapter a day, but it is also very good at reading. . . .

I'm a little curious how you managed to read 4 chapters for 10 minutes?

🤫🤫🤫 The protagonist has traveled through time and was dozens of years old in his previous life. From the description in the article, I infer that his mental age is 14 years old, and he is extremely middle school. Suddenly I remembered the lyrics "You are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, you are so poisonous, poisonous, poisonous!" Goodbye

The biggest problem is that the protagonist was a successful person in his previous life, because the current protagonist does not understand the world, likes to fantasize, is often in a daze, and is a sensitive and middle-aged boy. He does not have the caution, calmness and high emotional intelligence of an adult at all. So why not write a time traveler who graduates from high school and is still doing nothing in his twenties? And what I've written now doesn't inspire me to want to read it. I wanted to see how the author successfully adapted the comics and improved his abilities. Unfortunately, there was very little written about it, and I gradually lost interest. I hope the author will work hard!

You wrote a novel about comics, from chapter 42 to chapter 51, you included 10 plot chapters that have nothing to do with comics. Although this may be your own consideration, it is considered the main plot, but couldn't you condense it and end it in three chapters? People who watched it said you were stupid because you didn't give what the readers wanted to see, and you just wrote some plots that the readers were not interested in.

Whether you copied it and no one knows about it or something else The counterattack of Long Aotian, which has nothing to do with the main plot, is really low. It felt like I had a good start, but then I couldn't continue writing in the middle, and finally I started piecing together things that didn't make sense.

The male protagonist's character is extremely real. The civil servant plan has not even begun yet, and he has imagined that he will be a great success. His proud and swollen look makes people have a weird and shameful feeling of being exposed in the dark history. Where? The camera was removed? But it is indeed easy to offend people. He is so naive that he seems to be overturned in the next second, planting flags everywhere. But I think it's still acceptable. After reading it for a long time, everyone seems to have a pretty face.

I haven't understood the chapters in the past two days. Why do these plots suddenly appear? Are they meant to be a misfortune? Or what?