Wake up from Nightmare

The setting is very good, and the handling of clues is also very good. There are very few villains who are idiots, but there are very many female idiots. This shows that the author is not very good at writing female characters. This is actually the same for male videos, which is understandable. I really like the setting of this book. Although the plot line is a bit slow, the explanation and presentation of logical prerequisites are a bit cumbersome, and although some parts are not clear, it is still very interesting to read. The male protagonist is too shameless, really shameless. The male protagonist really ruined my good impression of the narrative and setting of the work. There are all kinds of tricks and deceptions, as if you have rich social experience. In fact, these eight hundred people are bullying the weak and afraid of the strong, which is very bad, but the male protagonist takes his kindness to others too seriously. It does not mean that he must be more positive. Taking advantage of others can also be a very cute personality flaw, which can gain a sense of recognition. But the male protagonist is really too shameless. There are routines like flirting without marrying He, but there are too many flirting without marrying He. The male protagonist has a greasy feeling that shines through the screen. He touches more than one girl. The female characters collectively reduce their intelligence. You can be cunning and deceive, but the unified operations of this male protagonist are really good. Being able to pretend is really because the author pushed the plot and gradually lost the goodwill of the male protagonist. It doesn't mean that he has to set up a character, but this male protagonist is really unlikable. The so-called cleverness and ability have turned into cheating and sneaking, and he always thinks that he can make up for other characters with better things after deceiving other characters. Although I like male protagonists with rich human nature, and I also like protagonists with flaws, the way this male protagonist interacts with the female characters in the book makes me feel like a loser. It's not that the thick and black male protagonist is not good, but this male protagonist makes people feel that he is neither up to nor down. Really, the setting and some villain descriptions are very interesting, and there is nothing wrong with the inherent cognitive description of some male points of view, but this male protagonist really seems to be getting lower and lower the more he writes.

The original love between brother and sister suddenly changed into love between man and woman, and the protagonist's personality collapsed in the emotional line.

This book is quite good, and I will always support the author as long as I am not a prisoner. The rhythm is okay, but I bought a lot of props and the protagonist's own strength has not improved much.

I made a Snake King ability for southern travellers, and put it inside the ability building.

Why is this book not popular? I think it will be popular if it is written with the current quality. The plot and writing are quite good, but the time advancement is a bit too slow. When I saw the protagonist upgrade, I had already written so much in just a few days...

It's really annoying to see too many of some routines. Pandora is the largest power organization in mainland China. Every time it takes action, it first fails to investigate and is stupid, and then finds that the number of people must not be dominant, or even disadvantaged, and finally relies on the protagonist to turn the tide.

There is a major bug. There is no moon in this world. But the time travelers communicated in lyrics with the word "moon" in them. If there is no moon, then how can there be the word "month"? Furthermore, this world uses months and ten days as cycles. Since there is no moon, where do the months come from. If there is no moon, and time-travelers publish moon lyrics through newspapers, wouldn't the editor wonder what the moon is? How to write [month] and what it means. If anyone doesn't understand why there is no word for "month", let's give a simple analogy: there is no single word such as "pear", "ri", "shi", etc. That can be used to describe coke, radio, and CPU.

It's too bland. Time traveler, you just have to hide your identity and become powerful. What kind of National Security Bureau? Stand aside and create your own organization to do things behind the scenes and pretend to take off. This is the protagonist. You are only suitable for the soy sauce party.

I don't quite understand why he arranged a plot where he keeps flirting with Shirelin. There is no emotional basis at all. He just helped her solve a problem, asked her to borrow a car, and started flirting when she returned the car? At first, I thought it was just lip service, but the further I look at it, the more wrong it becomes. Judging from his description of his heart, he also directly regarded his father as his future father-in-law. This is too embarrassing! Looking at the plot trend, is this the beginning of a harem? Most of the female characters appearing now have a romantic relationship with him, including his sister, Xiao Bai, the singer, Xierlin, and it seems that Qiao's daughter is still alive. . .

Every fucking time they fight, the villain is higher than the official level. Every time they fight, the official power is at a disadvantage. Damn it, I might as well just follow the villain and get away with it.

I have always been puzzled by the setting of this book. Pandora, who controls the energy lifeline and the most powerful force, needs to survive between the federation and the wild awakened people. The provincial governor goes to the inspection office to inspect the public security bureau, just like the real provincial high-ranking officials inspect the public security bureau. This is the result of thousands of years of development. This setting is really anti-human and too dramatic.

Twenty-eight hour clock

In the early stage, it was fairy grass, in the middle stage, weeds, and the protagonist became funny. I don't know if other people can accept the change in his personality after they started to be attracted to it. I am tired of being funny.

The protagonist has quite some ideas. He writes about bringing his sister into the harem, which is really cool.

Alas, I think the author is really not suitable for writing group portraits. Except for the protagonist who is good at both business, the others are really smart, but their image and character are a mess. I can't stand these people's smart operations. It's the first time that I feel like I can do it or even better 😅. This is really the first time! Some people may say that those are just ordinary people, which is very logical. But when writing group portraits, shouldn't we write about the characteristics of different people and their respective growth? Let's talk about an ordinary person who has no characteristics and no advantages in character. Since the mud can't support the wall, wouldn't it be better to live an ordinary life? Why does the author spend so much money and give them so many tricks to help them become gods? In the final analysis, there is a problem with the character's personality.

Recently, on a whim, I suddenly remembered this book that I had forgotten for three years. I flipped through it for several days before I took it out from the corner of the bookshelf. When I opened it, I realized you haven't finished it yet.

Whether you want to double wear or wear more than one, you can clearly indicate it in the introduction. Do you still want results?

It was okay in the early stage, but it started to fall apart around chapter 294. Did you change the writer?

Don't ask, the 50,000 yuan was rewarded by my trump account. Wrong account added... What is truly powerful is not the invincible power, but the wisdom that matches it.

It's pretty good. There are no obvious poisonous points. Most people's IQs are online It's just a slow-heating type Fantasy grass jelly.

Very good novel! I read five o'clock in one breath. I'm probably going to feel sleepy during the day. By the way, why is it not considered a superpower type? . .

It feels very strange. The author's writing is okay I always feel that this score should not be enough I hope the author will not be discouraged. Come on! ! ! I just gave a reward, although it is not much, I will reward you again if I have more pocket money I will continue to subscribe 😄

This reminds me of an early anime called Black Contractor

Just because you got 6,000 recommendation votes for your last book and still managed to finish it with 1.17 Million words, I will definitely read this book!

How should I put it? I like the subject matter, the writing style, and I voted for it. But the results always feel weird. Is the exposure too low? I think this style should still be able to retain a lot of people.

I think there are a few points: 1. It is slow to warm up, and there is no way that suspense is like this. 2 The protagonist's ability seems too weak. On the surface, he is mind-reading, but in reality, he is also mind-reading. But judging from the ability to directly read the rune language of the doll, this should be a foreshadowing, and mind reading is only the most basic function. 3 Combat system, ability props lead to little difference in combat effectiveness, but it is precisely because of ability props that this social system is stable. No way.

Is it really not updated? I'm really looking forward to the follow-up. Today I watched Aniya, the heroine in Spy House, who can also read minds, but she is really bad compared to the male protagonist. The male protagonist is really amazing. She used mind reading when her level was still very low. She completed the task simply by using the ability of mind reading. She completed the task step by step.

Please update, author. I will keep it on the bookshelf until you come back.