Leveling Maniac in the Wizarding World

The recent three films about finding a murderer are really bad. The author doesn't know how to write crime-solving or spy novels, so he shouldn't design such plots. People who read them will want to vomit😰 I don't understand what they want to express at all.

People have made it clear that they want to kill the protagonist, but they don't dare to kill people even after using the ultimate move. What kind of protagonist is this?🥵😡

I turned on the big plug-in, just want to write a cool article, then don't suppress it too hard, there is an experience penalty, and the pig's feet are not good enough. The number of water words is still a small problem. The cool article is to be cool to the end, kill decisively, and upgrade without brains As long as it is cool enough, there will be no problem with water and other bugs, and it will be a successful brainless cool article.

As for the online game "Lords of All People", it was good in the past. When I saw the force-feeding around Chapter 230, Xue Rengui, Zhao Yun, Hua Mulan and Fang Xuanling were beaten to death by Le Yi alone. Readers said that he was banned and the author immediately banned him and deleted the post. . . I got really bad tempered and I vomited

The beginning is pretty poisonous. The three golden chapters are considered depressing. The opportunity was robbed, and he vomited blood and died. After traveling through time, he was randomly beaten and killed again. Anyone can step on them. The beginning can be said to be very ancient.

In view of the recent opinions of readers, I have modified the settings regarding time setting, mutual address, experience penalty, and attribute reduction. Thank you all for your opinions, I love you! Let's persevere together!

The author should have come from the studio

As far as the wizard novels I have read are concerned, the author did not deal with the status relationship of highly qualified wizard apprentices. In fact, for wizards, apprentices are consumables, including highly qualified wizards. If you don't believe it, the author can take a look at other wizard novels. For official wizards, they have definitely experienced a lot of conspiracies. It is impossible not to see this. How can you say that this kind of calculation is equivalent to doing what they do best?

I'm not sure what others think. . . Anyway, it's quite awkward for me to watch content that reduces attributes every day. .

Is this a work of hatred towards Dali? The author feels that he has a grudge against others, and abuses the owner and adds private goods. 🤫 No wonder there are not many people

Is a villain going to be written into the finale? Vomited

You must read the book you wrote twice more, so that you can clearly understand how confusing the plot you designed is sometimes.

Author, you have perfectly created a negative teaching material for Golden Chapter Three. How many passers-by have read two chapters and directly opened the table of contents and glanced at ten lines? I suggest you get rid of that damn villain within twenty chapters, and don't mention it again. If it continues, your book will be completely hopeless.

Balance is everywhere The plot needs to be balanced, the golden finger needs to be balanced, and the protagonist's upgrade needs to be balanced You have already cheated, are you still unhappy? There's always a balance there. .

39. Persuade you to quit. What I just wrote before is not to upgrade to death. I will slap you in the face immediately. It is better not to write it before. Is this a high-end game🐴?

Every time I read this kind of wizarding novel, I can't help but compare it to Egret's Wizarding Journey. It is true that the gap between this book is not even the slightest, so I can't stand it anymore.

It has quite a lot of potential for a new author, but I personally feel that there are a few points that should be handled better... 1. Protagonist's character The wizard gives people the impression of being rational, rigorous, and wise. But the protagonist in the book is a complacent fool at the beginning of the chapter, and then the plot gradually gives people the feeling of turning into a licking dog... There is a strong sense of incompatibility between the protagonist and the image of the wizard! 2. The coolness is weak The battle in the sewer is a small climax in the early stage, but it is also accompanied by reduced ability + experience penalty? Under the premise that there may be an experience penalty for upgrading, the reason for the protagonist's upgrade is not an experiment but a brainless hand deficiency? The sudden suppression gives people a full sense of abuse... 3. The rigor of the data The speed unit in the book is actually feet? Feet is the unit of distance Speed = distance/time, be more precise and use feet/second. Isn't it good as a unit of speed? The writing is not bad, it's a pity...

I took a look at the author. I only read the first two pages in detail, and then I read the tenth chapter at a glance. I saw someone was persuaded to leave in the chapter review, so I went back and read it again from the beginning to this point. This kind of useless or abusive author might have been acceptable in 10-15 years ago or people who were new to online literature. But now it is force-feeding disgusting people to readers. No one will carefully read the reasons and details you gave. Why would a villain want a protagonist to oppose him? All kinds of passers-by and idiots come into conflict with the protagonist. Most people may be like me. After reading the beginning, they found it difficult to pin down, so I made a chapter in 10 seconds. In the end, it only gave people the feeling that this Woody is the protagonist. If you let the readers take the role of a garbage protagonist, naturally some people will find it toxic, and many people will be discouraged.

I feel that the protagonist's mentality is wrong. He is a poor loser without any wisdom as a wizard. This will feel very inconsistent when the level is higher later. I feel like the protagonist is like a dog, the kind that turns into a spirit.

The previous progress was too slow, Golden Finger only appeared in Chapter 7, and Golden Finger was officially opened in Chapter 14, which focuses on the protagonist of [this book] being suppressed by Woody [Children of the World] in various aspects. The content is very depressed and cannot be vented. The calculation of time is not clearly explained. It is always hourglass time, and the direct insertion of witchcraft minutes and years is not very good. The first part was very dull and depressing, and I wanted to give up after a short time. Later, it was better to start using golden fingers to develop.

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I feel that Pig's Knuckle's mentality is a little wrong. He obviously has magic skills on the landline, but he is half a magician. He has to face three magicians as a warrior. He obviously has a field of vision to fight long-range, but he has to stay close to him and seek death. He knows clearly that he will not die if he doesn't seek death, but he still has to explode. There should also be a link between skill experience and character registration experience. You cannot upgrade to the top level all the time. Otherwise, if the character is level two and has top-level skills, then the level of the character does not matter. Moreover, there is no experience penalty for low levels, and there are experience rewards for high monster levels. This is considered a BUG.

An organization of wizards. You need to know roughly how many members there are in the organization. There is a wizard apprentice who has a grudge against a fifth-level talent and he dare not accept him? Such an organization is too small.

Being a wizard but not a mage, qualifications should not be so important. Wizards should have many ways to change qualifications, bloodline, etc.

It's well written, I don't want to be a eunuch.

Mao Ren's equipment is not worthy of time travel, knowing full well that others have lost money when selling their houses.

The characterization is perfect and the writing is pretty good so far.

I have already guessed that the blood essence of Mobius in the first chapter must be in the body of the protagonist's enemy.