I'm a Mastermind in Another World

The author wrote this book very well, but for some reason it always felt like it was too eunuch, or ended hastily. 😥😥

It's a pity to discard it if it's tasteless The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it's not written in a good way, it's not interesting, and the main character is an ordinary person.

It's very interesting. That book review you wrote was so toxic. If I hadn't read it, I would have been fooled by you. I suggest you start reading it from Chapter 7.

The Eastern world is too lacking. There is no way to practice independently. Weapons and elixirs are not only single, but also too technological. The refining is rigid and too distorted. The magic ecology is not bad. I thought gods would appear in the West. Gods and great arcanists PK immortals and warriors?

Xiaobaizi, have you entered the palace to serve the emperor? At least tell us 😟

Let me go, did someone change the writing from Origin of Magic? I didn't realize it, but after Shengyun, I suddenly realized that my writing skills are much better than before. Okay, if I keep writing at this level, it will be at least a good book. But isn't this pace too fast? The content of your first chapter is enough for someone to write a book. It's not enough to read

Is it a modern technological background or an ancient background? Now there are veterans, now there are ancient costumes, then there are silica stones, and there are copper coins, it's so confusing.

This book is well written from behind the scenes. I have read a lot of behind-the-scenes articles and I can vouch for this. However, there are too many commentators, which affects viewing. You have the final say on whether a book is good or not. Don't be influenced by others.

Brother, I'm begging you, please put it on the shelves as soon as possible. It's too little to update in one day, and it's still discontinued 😰

Renew! Renew! Renew! Renew! Renew! Renew! Renew! ! ! ! !

There is no atmosphere, and creating a race is just like playing in a trivial way. I suggest you watch "I Am God"

Let me briefly explain the main points of the behind-the-scenes flow 1. Changing familiar things, similar to the revival of spiritual energy in modern times 2. Making unfamiliar things familiar, similar to creating ancient Chinese myths in another world The author is currently creating new life in another world, and the attraction is basically zero, because the readers of the other world are not familiar with it. Is there any difference whether the Kirin currently appearing is created by the protagonist or discovered by the protagonist in the wild? What do readers see in this way? Not to mention that the current protagonist's code of conduct in this book is completely confused. He wants to live forever, but it is currently unclear what life-span-related efforts have been made. The biological transformation only seems to have intensity but no difference in lifespan. He wants to make the other world familiar. The problem is that the settings of the Seven Stars and the Monster Tribe are all original. How can it be familiar to readers? Looking forward to the next book being better,

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Author, I really misjudged you! Oops, you actually cut it anyway. At least say it! 😭😭😭😭😭

There is a girl named Wu Qiong in our class.

I didn't understand it. The previous chapter was about salvaging underwater ruins. I thought it was a cultural re-enactment flow. However, the next chapter was from the perspective of an inexplicable person, and then it became a time-traveling flow. I was quite confused.

Not bad! Good grass in the early stage, close to fairy grass in the later stage

Has the author changed his vest? Do you have any directions?