This Pass Lasted for Three Thousand Years

I read 20 chapters and 40,000 words. Overall it's not bad, the atmosphere is well rendered. It just seems to have a slight tendency to weaken the characters. I feel that the description of the characters is not detailed, at least it does not make me remember the protagonist at a glance. In fact, fighting and other things do not need to be described in such detail, which is a bit watery (personal feeling, a dog's head saves his life). My feeling is that the writing style is a little immature, but everyone improves it step by step. The more you write, the better it will be. One last thing, the idea is good, the only difference is time and practice, keep at it, I think you will eventually become a god.

Let's get straight to the point~ There are countless books about the world of cultivation in modern society, such as "Forty Thousand Years of Cultivation" which is similar in style to this book The difficulty and poisonous point in writing this kind of novel well lies in the sharp contrast between modern society and the elements of cultivation. It can be said that the elements of cultivation are based on a quasi-feudal society, and it is precisely the feudal society that modern civilization must break. It is very difficult to walk steadily and beautifully on this balance line. We won't go into details about the characteristics of modern society. If we go back and look at Mao Zedong, we can get an indistinguishable understanding of it (it is recommended to read and study it carefully) Next, let's talk about the small details. First of all, it is clear: social ideology and philosophy must be related, and life structure and productivity are also linked. The leap in productivity must be driven by technological changes.

To be honest, you can't retain your popularity at all from the beginning. It's so stupid.

How can a good book club not have idiom solitaire? I'll start first. Promoted step by step

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Brother Zhuo Chen, you are so fucking awesome. Damn it, I am rich hahahahahaha

Why didn't I watch the first one for ten minutes? Regret!

He is already considered a giant, does the protagonist want to change his skin?

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The writing style is very good. It won't always be like this. The setting and writing style can't be beat.

Raise 500,000 words first🙂

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