Become a Soul in the Fairy World

I advise latecomers not to read it. There are too many tragedies in this book. I have already read several tragedies that happened. The tragedy is well described, but as a human being, how many people like to watch tragedies...?

The first few paragraphs were well written, but the next few paragraphs were a bit confusing. To be honest, I was a little embarrassed! But it can be broken out of chapter. I hope you can work hard and continue the artistic conception of the previous one. Come on

The subtitles of each chapter are very interesting, so please give the author a boost

You can tell he is a boss at first glance. He must have done a lot of research on online novels. It is refreshing and pleasant to read. The opening scene is like "The Cowherd Meets the Weaver Girl", which is very attractive. 🙏

The writing is good, and the plot setting is very innovative. I hope it can maintain a good rhythm. However, some places are a bit stiff. It will be better if you pay more attention. Overall, it is quite good. I wish it a great success.

Come on, this chapter is broken well (sound of sharpening a knife)

The title needs to be changed, this novel's name doesn't work

It's a good start, I'll save it and read it later 🌹

I advise latecomers not to read it. There are too many tragedies in this book. I have already read several tragedies that happened. The tragedy is well described, but as a human being, how many people like to watch tragedies...?