Ranbu Hokage: Teruya Scroll

I was embarrassed when I saw it. I didn't know what to say. There was a ninja in the ninja village who was not killed, and the team leader was a genin. I have never seen a genin leader in Konoha.

Each chapter has explanations. Two-thirds of a chapter is explanations. There is no plot advancement in a novel with twenty-two chapters. It is all explanations. Are you the author or the narrator?

I'm a bit suspicious that the manuscript has been cleaned, and the last few chapters have been so messed up. If you write about Naruto, just write about Naruto. It doesn't matter if you stuff it with personal stuff, but you can't just keep everything personal. Authors are welcome to ban their comments. Thank you 🤫

Author, the most important thing in writing a novel is to express the story in your heart in words, use characters to promote the story, use characters to slowly reveal the world in your heart, and bring the characters to life while promoting the story. In the process, use characters to express your thoughts. The characters in your writing are dynamic, not static. If you use characters to express them, rather than interpreting the characters and the world you write on behalf of the characters, this is not a novel. . Writing novels, writing essays, and writing documents are two different things. . . . . It's full of science style 😄. I really need to practice my writing skills. . I agree with many of the points you made in your narration. To put it bluntly, productivity determines production relations, and production relations in turn affect productivity. But the point is, you cannot tell this point of view without leaving the story. You have to use the stories you write to interpret or express them 😅. . . . By the way, I'm curious, what major did the author study?

From a different perspective, the most difficult thing about fan fiction is that it is easy to see the ending, but you can write a different scenery without breaking away from Naruto. It's very powerful, with a bit of a suspenseful feeling, and there are also big flaws. For example, the protagonist's attack is too big, and the explosion weapons cannot explode like this. The existence of Black Zetsu is also ignored. Black Zetsu can burrow into the ground and monitor, and then tell the Ninja Village about its weaknesses.

It would be great to come out alive. Who would have thought that a small problem could cause such a big trouble? That little injury actually progressed to the point where he was notified of critical illness, and the doctor directly said that he would have to amputate if he couldn't fix it!

What a weird thing, trying to force Naruto to associate with Japan's Warring States Period? It needs to be emphasized every few pictures.

The name Li Yunlong is very dramatic😁

Ah, the author's protagonist is already a person in another world, why does he still need his original name? In fact, the name Ranbu Shishimaru in this article is quite good, at least it can be used in numbers!

When he saw Li Yunlong, he ran away, thinking that the author was just practicing blindly.

The narration is like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long.

The name Li Yunlong is really too embarrassing

This book was okay, but the author was too verbose. There was no need to write many things. It was too tiring to read.

Author, please change the title of the book! This title is really hard to describe. Nowadays, the names of books about Naruto almost always start with the words Konoha, Naruto, Unoha, and Uzumaki. If you are familiar with it, you can tell that they are Naruto fans. It's understandable that Teruya comes from the protagonist's name, but what the hell is the word Ranbu! Readers who want to watch Naruto with this name will have a hard time searching for it! I hope the author can change it

Naruto, isn't there a lot of divergence in the second dimension?

The author writes nonsense from beginning to end, with no real substance.

I saw all kinds of Li Yunlong and Li Yunlong... The content is good or bad and I can't stand it. The sense of violation is too strong. I really can't accept the Japanese fan style. I'll say goodbye.

I've never learned to comment, but I couldn't help it. What the hell did the author write? Is it writing a story?

This is an author who does not want to follow the crowd. I hope the author does not rely on coding and writing books is just a joy.