Immortal Path of Immortality

As long as the author doesn't want eunuchs, it doesn't matter if he takes one picture a day

Losing the storage bag in this way feels like the biggest failure of the book. It does not mean that it cannot be lost, but losing it in this way shows that the protagonist does not pay attention to the foundation-building pill that requires all the family's efforts to obtain. It also shows that the protagonist does not pay attention to the most important thing that can further his cultivation. It shows that the protagonist is very careless.

It is extremely uncomfortable to insist on adding a Zifu between the foundation building and the golden elixir.

The protagonist is seventeen years old when he appears. The protagonist's mother is thirty-four years old. A year later, Guo Youli established the foundation and the protagonist joined the Zhengyang Sect. The protagonist was twenty-six years old when he entered the secret realm, and successfully built the foundation after coming out. I spent two years in seclusion practicing the exercises and accompanying spells. Then he returned to Yuquan Peak and stayed for a while. The protagonist was thirty-one years old and set off for the Central Plains. After staying in the abandoned land for almost seven years, the protagonist only broke through to the third level of foundation building due to lack of elixirs. After returning, he went to the Northern Wasteland. The protagonist was thirty-eight years old. Two years after coming to Beihuang, he broke through to the fourth level of foundation building and became famous, earning the title of "Little Sword Immortal". In the third year, a beast wave broke out in the war zone, and Guo Youli was trapped. Three months later, the protagonist went into the occupied area to search, and several months passed. The protagonist came out to perform a secret mission for the sect for five years. During this period, he received a pill and a spiritual fruit that increased his cultivation, and he successively broke through to the fifth and sixth levels of foundation building. More than two years later, after practicing the magic that comes with the technique, the protagonist is forty-eight years old. The monks once again arranged a large-scale operation to counterattack Beihuang. Five years have passed. The Nascent Soul monk and the fifth-level monster appeared, and the Beihuang incident came to an end. One year to return and one year of retreat to break through to the later stage of foundation building. In the same year, Guo's mother died.

The current reality at Qidian is that the novels about cultivating immortals circulated by ordinary people imitate each other, and they are basically the same routine. They release new books together, and the eunuchs are unfinished together.

The author did not highlight the difference between immortals and mortals. He also made the protagonist look like a mama, and made the hero's mother look like a white lotus. I believe that any mother who treats her child well would not force her to tie her child up and delay it for ten years in vain! Also, I should have discovered something when I lost the first storage belt, and I was able to lose the second storage belt like this. It felt good to read the first and second chapters, but I couldn't stand it once I wrote the mother part! The more reasonable the author writes, the more exciting the content will be.

Dear readers, why don't you comment? I've been playing solo for a month. It can be good or bad.

1. The protagonist's mother is reluctant to let her child endure hardship and does not allow the 8-year-old protagonist to enter the sect to practice. Is a mortal without spiritual roots so powerful? Haha 2, the protagonist's mother is 16 and it's too hard to be pregnant and have a baby, so she responds to the call and only has one child. Hahaha, his dad actually agreed. Still fucking powerful. 3. Why does he have the final say if he is so powerful? The first two chapters of the book reveal that the protagonist was 17 years old when he returned home. His mother was also 17 when she gave birth to him. (17+17=34) Now his mother is 34 years old and he follows the protagonist to meet his father. The book states that his father is in his early 30s, which means he is 31 years old. It looks like his mother was 16 years old when she was pregnant and his father was 13 at the time. Otherwise, it's always his mother who has the final say. Don't let your children enter the sect for fear that they will suffer hardship. No longer afraid of suffering when giving birth to a child. Hahaha. I feel like the author is a woman.

This book is well written, keep it up, and hope it gets published soon. 😍👍✊

Throw away all the small storage bags, wouldn't they be left to the family? It's not that it's difficult to get a storage bag when you're in the family,

I have the nerve to call this water spirit horse a spirit beast when I go here. Better wild horses can reach 50 kilometers per hour. One-in-a-hundred war horses can reach 60-70 kilometers per hour. You are also a spirit beast after all. At this speed and the 500 miles ahead of you, it will take you 5-6 days to get back. You only run more than 40 kilometers in a day. Even modern marathon runners are faster than you. I am faster than you even if you don't run marathon. You have the nerve to call it a light body technique. You are a cultivator of immortals. You are not even as good as a mortal warrior. You can't reach 100 kilometers per hour. Don't tell me that you are a cultivator of immortals.

, If it doesn't look good, don't talk so much nonsense. Writing a book is not easy, why don't you write one yourself and let me see it. This book is good, good-looking and to my liking. Recommend "Earth Travel Era", "Eternal Kingdom", "Add Immortal Lord", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Martial Tomb", "The Ancestor of All Demons", "Drunken Immortal Gourd", "Invincible with Eyes", "I am the King of the Summers", "Don't mess with that dragon", "White Dragon Lord of Winter", "Zombie Evil Emperor", "Mechanical Latitude", "This Lord is not easy to mess with", "Killing God", "Demon Sky Chronicles", "Rebirth as a Tree", "Super" "God Refinery", "Carrying a Mist World", "Nightmare Corrosion", "The First Emperor of the Human Race", "Ji Dao Heavenly Demon", "Wizard World", "Spirit Login Device", "Huntian Star Lord", "Ancient Games Invasion of Reality", "Ji Dao Fist Master", "Global Spiritual Tide", "God of Killing", "Zhang Sanfeng's Journey to Another World", "Soul-Eating Book", "The Road to Heaven", "Ping Tian Ce", "My Wild Tribe", "Ji Dao Demon" "Ghost" "Carry a Lottery Panel with You" "The Strongest Non-Human" "The Farm of Gods and Demons" "The Torrent of Ten Thousand Laws" "The Beast Control Evolver" "The Lord of Destiny" "Let go of that demon pet" "Travel across the Qin Dynasty to become a tyrant" "Start picking up attributes today" "The Wizard Earl" "The Great Eternal Summoning" "The Wasted Kingdom of Online Games" "Super Wizard" "The Wizarding World" "The Eternal Sword Master" "Heroes" Alliance Invasion of Another World" "Super God Mechanical Legion" "Pirate Lord" "Farming Lord of Time Travel" "I Summon Heroes for the Emperor of Heaven" "Green Sea Tycoon" "Xingyao Canidi" "Fa Dao Zun" "Supreme Conquest System" "I Have Evolutionary Talents" "The Skeleton Emperor" "The End of the World Inheritance Showdown" "Portable Mountain and Sea Realm" "Immortal Space" "Monster Altar" "Horror City" " Wild Fairy World" "I Have an Eye of Truth" "Summoning Nightmares" "Crazy Evolution" "Supernormal World" "Dragon Shepherd" "I Have a Big World" "Misty Hunting Ground" "Mage Secrets" "My Countess", "Shadow Dragon Law", "Lord Wizard", "Wizard World", "Wizard Immortality", "Poison is the Way", "Devil of the Abyss of All Realms", "I Can Redeem Merit Template", "I Am Immortal", "Shu Zong", "Sword Builds Immortal Road", "Book of Gods and Demons", "Weird World" "The King's Landing in the Starry Sky", "The Realization of the Dream World", "Plutonium Dragon Realm", "Cultivation in the Elf Continent", "The World of the Gods", "I Have a City in Another World", "The Tauren Lord", "Mountains and Seas Are Dragons", "Searching for Immortals", millions of words cannot be found on Baidu search. I am in a book shortage, please recommend the same type. I don't have money to support, but I recommend it to others.

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For novels about cultivating immortals that are similar to the mortal genre, I personally think that the most important thing is not to write brilliantly, but to be steady, especially the rhythm. Losing the storage bag at first is just a small flaw with little impact. The problem is that the first mission after foundation building is too long. It may pave the way for the main plot in the future, but in any case it is not appropriate to pile it all into one plot point. Anyway, I endured and skipped through it. The rest of the book is generally okay. It is expected that if the author can insist on writing 700,000 to 800,000 words, this book should be able to enter the second tier. After all, there is a bit of a shortage of fairy tale books now.

After reading a few pictures, I feel that it is a combination of Yuquanmen and Changsheng Road. The big man and the woman in red are not Nascent Soul monks...

The storage bag is all gone. Playing with wool and the foundation-building pills are all in the storage bag.

The writing is very poor, like writing a running account. The plot is engaging and clever.

From the introduction, you can tell that it is a book about Laji.

You, mother, are blocking your own path. . . Poison

I didn't read the content, I only read the introduction and comments. The introduction was okay. There was a comment by Shen Nong. Then I looked at 450,000 words, more than 2,000 recommendation votes, and more than 10 monthly votes. Come on, I estimate that there are only more than 20 people following updates 🤭

This book is not going to be popular, there are many unreasonable things, and the author's self-righteous plot arrangements are very awkward to read.

This book is okay, it has no shortcomings or highlights, it's just average.

Are you writing a novel? Just like a running account.

Changing the map and rebuilding it is too psychedelic, and all the updates are in vain. I haven't wanted to watch it since I entered another world of immortality. What on earth were you thinking?

The writing skills of this book are quite good. The writing is crisp and concise, but the plot arrangement is not good. The Qi training period is all about accumulation, fighting monsters, and opportunities. It cannot exceed the capacity of the pig's feet, otherwise it will be a failure. The author's brain is short-circuited. This book is just for practice writing, so I won't read it. Looking forward to the next book.

When I saw the abandoned land, there were too many foundation-building monks, which was unreasonable. There are also many unreasonable settings in the front. The only reason to persist is that the protagonist still has a fairy spirit. Sects will not kill each other.

Pull a few interfaces, disgusting, groveling

The protagonist is more or less nt

This novel is a mindless and poisonous novel. I just read the second chapter and I can hardly stand it anymore. The protagonist is hunting for treasure in the foundation building cave. All the magic weapons are good and fine, but the robe is broken without the nourishment of spiritual energy. I just want to ask, the robe is also a magic weapon. Why is it broken without the nourishment of spiritual energy? Why aren't other magic weapons broken?