Ming Shen Chases the Immortal Path

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the writing style is too immature. I want to read the book to see the details, but the author only gives an outline, and the most important battle scenes of Xianxia are briefly mentioned. . . The conversations and descriptions in my mind are like rushing through the flowers as if they are in a hurry.

Can I not use CP? I'm scared when I see CP 😨

I wanted to complain at first, but I saw that it was my first time writing an article and I didn't have much experience, so forget it. Taiyin Shadow was second, so what do you mean, Taiyang was first? Why? The lunar sun and the lunar sun should exist equally! It would be too disgusting if the male protagonist was the first sun. This is a story about a female protagonist. What does it mean to have a male protagonist who is stronger than the female protagonist to put pressure on her head? Isn't it disgusting?

In the previous life, I was still a casual cultivator at the peak of the Yuanying. Since I was a casual cultivator and had poor qualifications, I still cultivated to the peak of the Yuanying. That means I have the ability, wisdom and city. The starting point of the author's design is too high, but the heroine's character cannot keep up.

This is the first time the author has written a book, and it has many shortcomings, which must be admitted. But I still long for five-star reviews. Ratings are really, really important. If you like it, please give it a five-star review. If you don't like it, just leave a thumbs up. It takes many high scores to get a low score back. It doesn't mean that you can't accept bad reviews, but it just looks ugly. When it is written, some people will like it, some will not like it, and people will comment on it, but the author really has a glass heart 😂😂😂 So... Well, everyone understands, right?

I have read a lot of novels about cultivating immortals, but I still like those with male protagonists.

I feel like the supporting characters here are sick, the heroine doesn't owe them anything, they hate others after being saved once, and the heroine becomes jealous of the heroine just by looking at them

Do you have any recommendations for the same type of genius-style fairy tales? The heroine is not a genius, but she has better qualifications. She has a sect and a backing, and is serious about practicing and upgrading. There are not so many messy stories about love, hate, plots and intrigues. It's so hard to find...

The biggest flaw of this book is that all the immortal cultivators in the world have less opportunities than the heroine.

The heroine sometimes makes me feel quite disgusting and stupid. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit immature and some redundant words make me feel that the heroine is like that. But this is also the author's first time writing a book. Please continue to work hard in the future. I will not rate it.