The Last Reckless Man

One point to note is that the protagonist the author intended to portray actually doesn't feel like a protagonist in the book. Simply put, the supporting characters are over-described. The author wanted to make each character distinctive and detailed, leaving a deep impression on the reader, but this over-detailing caused them to overshadow the main character, making the protagonist seem almost…

The biggest flaw is that the influence of almost every character occasionally deviates from their initial portrayal. Take An Qinghe, for example; the sympathy he showed while interrogating Chen Wu felt very incongruous with his previous image of a ruthless and audacious individual. It's plausible, but forcibly adding a touch of white to a villainous character is really uncomfortable.

I don't see where I acted recklessly.

It's disgusting. I felt a bit aggrieved when my brother died, then my girlfriend died, and her body was stolen. The first three chapters, with him ignoring her, gave me a lot of anticipation, but then... He shoved a mouthful of shit into my mouth.

Your imitation of New World is really bad.

I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist, who's been involved in organized crime for years, just comes across as pretentious and lacking in guts. The supporting characters, initially portrayed as incredibly powerful, then awkwardly disappear from the story.

Cultivation doesn't even have realms! This kind of thing is destined to be hard to become popular these days.

It feels like this author hasn't written anything new or engaging since "Jianghu Jinyi," it's become increasingly lifeless and disappointing. 😞😞😞😞

Sigh, it's such a shame, author. Your writing style and story are quite good, but you have this fatal flaw. If nothing unexpected happens, you probably never wrote an outline. The characters' appearances kept changing, the plot development was too weak, and the characters' appearances were too abrupt. I read your last book and at least it kept me going until it was published; this one, I can't even make it to the shelves.

To be honest, with this kind of writing style, it's a shame the author doesn't write palace intrigue or ancient farming novels. It's completely unsuitable for this kind of martial arts struggle novel; it's too pretentious.