The Last Reckless Man

One point to point out is that the protagonist the author wanted to write about does not look like the protagonist in the book. Simply put, the supporting characters are over-described. The author wants to describe each character in a distinctive and detailed way to impress the readers. However, over-writing leads to the main character taking over the main role, giving the reader the feeling that the protagonist is absent. In fact, this is exactly the case. In terms of the development of the novel's story, it really has nothing to do with the protagonist. He is just superfluous, which makes people impatient.

The biggest problem is that the influence of almost every character will sometimes not match the initial positioning of him. Just like An Qinghe, the sympathy shown when interrogating Chen Wu is too inconsistent with the previous image of a cruel and bold person. Reasonable is reasonable, but if you forcefully add a bit of white to a black person, it is really uncomfortable.

I don't see how reckless it is.

It was so disgusting. I felt a little aggrieved when my brother died. Later, the female protagonist also died and her body was snatched away. The first three chapters ignored the female protagonist, which gave me great expectations. The result. . . Fill my mouth with shit

Your imitation of the New World is really bad.

I can't stand it anymore. The pig's trotters that have been around for several years seem to me to be pretentious and lack courage. And those supporting characters were written very well at the beginning, but in fact, their exit was hasty and embarrassing. The pig's feet were soy sauce throughout the whole process. Others wanted to kill him, but he was merciful and almost killed by others. He didn't get the antidote back. Is this what you call reckless? To be honest, the author has a lot of ideas, but his writing style is really bad, and he has written several novels. There are too many original points to write. Oh, goodbye.

There is no realm for spiritual practice! ! ! This year is destined to be difficult to catch fire.

I feel that since Jianghu Jinyi, this author has never written anything new that can attract attention. He is becoming more and more lifeless and disappointing😞😞😞😞

Alas, it's really a pity for you, the author. The writing and the story are pretty good, but it has such a fatal flaw. If nothing else, it happens. You probably haven't written an outline. The characters change again and again, the plot is too weak, and the characters appear too abruptly. I read your last book and you managed to keep me going until it was put on the shelves. But I couldn't even hold on to this one.

To be honest, the author's writing style would be a pity not to write about palace battles or ancient farming stories. It is not suitable for writing about such rivers and lakes battles. It is too literary and young.