Elegy of the Storm

Novice Book Review (01) Ah, let me just say this in one sentence: It's beautiful!! It's amazing! Your book has been pinned to the top of my list. Keep updating it! Let me share my feelings: ①First impression: Just like the expert on the top floor said, I was confused when I first started reading it—suddenly, the remains of a certain family were stolen, which led to an interpretation of the…

Personally, I think the author's opening was fine; it's still a pretty exciting story. I like stories that don't have too many overpowered abilities at the beginning, so I can really feel the protagonist's growth.

To be honest, the initial part of the story was a bit lacking, and the plot felt somewhat abrupt to the reader. I think we should gradually introduce the plot, leaving some suspense to keep readers engaged and wanting them to keep reading. The writing is good, but I think more space could be spent on describing and portraying the characters.

I've finally mustered up the courage to publish a book in the male-oriented genre!

I've read the first three chapters. The writing is good and the flow is smooth. The story setting is rather average, but overall it's enjoyable and worth reading. The plot is a little lacking; keep it up!

Well written, keep up the good work!

Thank you. I will read it carefully; I have already received and reviewed it.

Keep it up!!! Go for it!!! Update soon!!!

Received, keep it up! 😊😊😊

That feels great, keep updating!