The Immortal in the White Cloud Hall

Here's a suggestion: if you want the protagonist to act cool, don't keep emphasizing that you need to be low-key. If you want to be low-key, don't force the protagonist to act cool all the time.

To tell a joke, the eunuchs of the Millennium Dynasty were in power🤭🤭

I have written 14,000 words since this morning. Wearing a pig's trotter and a big b. There are currently 150,000 manuscripts in stock.

The part where I saw Takeo dying violently was really unbearable. Everything I wrote before was good, but I had to add a prodigal son and a wretched man. Does he deserve the word prodigal? I suggest changing it. If the protagonist is really born, he should treat the people of the world like ordinary civilians. In my opinion, the protagonist is actually the same as Xiaoyao Hou, both are accomplices of rapists. This part is really disgusting to me.

He talks about being low-key and low-key, but he constantly looks for opportunities to show off and meddle in other people's business.

The names of gods and goddesses in the book are all there. I vomited. A woman is named Wang Tiejian, a man is named Wu, etc.??? Am I asking this question because I have doubts?

I am confused and confused, what exactly do you want to talk about, what do you want to write about the main line? Are you going to write a transcendent protagonist? After reading a few chapters, I was really confused... The names of people are not as good as those of Zhang San and Li Si. What about Li Qiaoqi, Wang Xiaojiang, Zhang Baishi 😅 and Li Keke and Liu Kekou?

Wuxia is not martial arts, Xianxia is not Xianxia, ​​Xianwu is even more incompatible, Liaozhai lacks a bit of flavor, and the whole thing is nondescript and a bit different.

Queen Li, Liu Qiuqiu, Li Qiaoqi, Wang Tiejian, this author is really a genius at naming names. The subject matter is novel and the plot is very poisonous. He is either pretending to be cool or pretending to be cool and punching in the face.

He is obviously invincible but no one can save him