The Immortal in the White Cloud Hall
白云殿内长生人
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 903k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 6y ago
- English
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Here's a suggestion: if you want the protagonist to be cool, don't keep emphasizing that they should be low-key; if you want them to be low-key, don't keep forcing them to be cool.
Here's a joke: In a thousand-year-old dynasty, eunuchs held power. 🤭🤭
Why.
I've been writing since this morning, and I've written 14,000 words. I even posed as a big shot with the main character in tow. There are currently 150,000 manuscripts in reserve.
I couldn't bear to watch Wu Xionglie die. The earlier parts were all good, but then they had to add the "wandering wanderer" label—a complete sleazy guy. Does he even deserve the title? I suggest revising it. If the protagonist is truly born into the world, he should treat the people of the martial arts world the same as ordinary civilians. In my opinion, the protagonist is no different from that carefree Marquis; both are accomplices to rapists. This part really disgusted me.
He keeps saying he'll keep a low profile, but he's always looking for opportunities to show off and meddle in other people's business.
The names in the book are so bizarre, I'm disgusted. A woman is named Wang Tiejian, and a man is named Wu something??? I'm asking this not because I have any doubts.
I'm completely baffled. What's the point of this story? What's the main plot? Is it going to feature a protagonist who's detached from worldly affairs? I've read a few chapters and I'm still totally confused... The character names are even worse than Zhang San and Li Si. What's with all this "Li Biaoqi," "Wang Xiaojiang," "Zhang Baishi," and "Li Kele" and "Liu Keke"?
It's not martial arts, it's not fantasy, it doesn't fit the genre at all, and it lacks the essence of Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio. It's just a hodgepodge, a complete mishmash.
Queen Li, Liu Qiuqiu, Li Biaoqi, Wang Tiejian—this author is truly a genius at choosing names! The subject matter is novel, the plot is incredibly addictive, it's either about showing off and slapping others in the face, or on its way to showing off and slapping others in the face.
He was invincible, yet no one could save him.