Menma's Hokage Record

I read this book a few days ago and saw the latest one today. Let me chat casually. There are some points in the book that I like very much. For example, the protagonist's combat power is sufficient but cannot be crushed. The plot arrangement can make people feel pressured. The pressure makes people more involved. The protagonist is not particularly enterprising but I personally like it. Some transitions and dialogues. The words and the like have a comic feel... There are also some points that I personally don't like, and the plot progress is a bit slow; I watched the theater version and felt that the bosses were quite good. So far in the book, the boss positioning is a bit subtle. I look forward to some twists in the follow-up In the end, I hope it can be completed smoothly.

It's completely baffling, I don't know what it's about, the writing is okay, and it's not too witty, but after reading more than half of it, when I look back, I don't realize anything.

Finally there is a book about noodles, come on💪

The pit is a bit big, you can tell it's a bit messy, and the author didn't write out the characteristics of the time traveler.

I have read almost 200 chapters (70+129) and still don't know what the protagonist wants to do or what the author wants to say I thought it was a collection of villains from the introduction, but I didn't expect it to be a hodgepodge of theatrical versions. His character is not as good as the original version, indecisive + nonsense literature, and his hope of returning home is pinned on others. The big spiral wheel Yu appears two or three times. Is it because you are afraid that no one will bother you if your opponent dies, or is it because you are afraid of running out of chakra?

Menma, where is your Rasengan? The Rasengan that defeated Konoha with one move in the theater.

Collect it, the author will update more

Brother, more than 400 chapters have not been published yet, I really admire your perseverance to continue writing, pure love to generate electricity yyds! ! ! !

As Menma, her relationship with Konoha is too good, right? What to do with Menma instead of letting people resist rice? It is better to let the 7th generation old Naruto travel back 🤔

If there is a large gathering of villains, how long will it take for Toneri to come out? This classmate is the strongest person in the world where Kaguya's six paths are hidden, and all the big guys stand aside when they appear.

This is a hell of a start. It doesn't matter if there is a large gathering of villains. Not yet downgraded. Forget it if you don't improve your intelligence, they're all fucking idiots.

To be honest, the author's book title has no traffic. Wouldn't it be nice to bring Konoha or Naruto to bring his own traffic?

It feels like the author is starting to show off his strength

After watching 20%, just skip to 90%. The middle is full of water.

One thing I said is really a bit too watery. I can write it in a matter of seconds but I have to write it for a long time.

Menma

I understand. All the bosses from the theatrical version have arrived in the main plot. The author's writing is good, but it's just too watery.

What else can I find fault with if it's free?

Old Man Six Paths: Based on the principle of fairness, justice and openness, we have divided the ten-tailed chakra equally. Come: One share from one tail, one share from nine tails, we are optimistic about the same amount, it is fair One share from two tails, one share from nine tails, we are optimistic about the same amount, please be fair One share from three tails, one share from nine tails, we are optimistic about the same amount, let's make it public ………… One share from eight tails, one share from nine tails, we are optimistic about the same amount, let's be fair, just and open 😎. Hey 🤓, why is there still 90% chakra left? Jiu, the name of Jiu Lama is destined. This Chattanla should be given to Jiu Lama. Does any of you have any opinions? 😄 One tail... Hatsuo: 😰😰😰😰 No opinion, no opinion

There is a lack of staged goals, and after watching it for a while, you don't know what the protagonist is doing. The author is probably writing along with the flow. After all, love generates electricity.

I have read more than half of it, and I admire the author for Generating Love, but I still have to complain about the lack of presence of the main character in this book. . . Since taking the chakra of four tailed beasts at the beginning, the protagonist's strength has never improved (and the protagonist himself said that even if he took the chakra of nine tailed beasts, he may not be able to defeat Pain...), The protagonist's strength is definitely in the upper reaches of the Akatsuki organization (beating too much) Shemaru Kakuzu can't beat Nagato Obito), if that's all, that's it. The problem is that the protagonist's world is also mixed with a bunch of people from other worlds. Both Wuwei and Boruto Sasuke can beat the protagonist, but the protagonist has been left there to work for Wuwei Hagoromo, with little hope of going back. . . To be honest, I would rather see the author write Menma back to fall in love with the eldest sister Hinata instead of working part-time in another world. . . After all, the author's writing style is okay. . .

I want to watch something, but it feels like I haven't watched anything for so long

Not finished yet? What are you planning to write next?

The writing is very good, no worse than some books on the shelves

Brother, are you serious? Shukaku is afraid of the Nine Lamas, you're kidding me, although it really can't be beaten, it's very tough, okay? I have always wanted to prove that more tails don't make me stronger.

After watching Kurommenma, I can't help but think about what it would be like if Menma Namikaze traveled through time, and how sinister the flying thunder god Kyuubi Menma is.