Master of Elements

After reading the three books that the author can read, I found that the author is not suitable for writing Western fantasy books. The appearance of Eastern names in Western books is a big mistake. At the same time, the dark protagonist is too funny. He is deaf throughout the whole process. Can't you hear the muttering? The newly opened one is too poisonous. As a wizard, you should have self-awareness. Is it too stupid to challenge someone who is not your opponent if you know you can't beat him? Isn't it too stupid to provoke him? In this way, you are either a fool or you think your book friend is a fool.

The protagonist just arrived at someone else's castle and then killed their spell caster, but they didn't offend you and still wanted to hire you. It's meaningless to come up with these things just because the other party's apprentice plotted against you and told you some secrets about life extension. This is not the only way to solve the problem, and you are not a holy lady. To be honest, I personally don't like it and think it's difficult for you to become popular. There's nothing you can do about it, it's too poisonous.

Just killed a dozen people~ The protagonist fell asleep directly in the carriage? Protected by a powerful magic pet! That's okay! Then the scene changed and the protagonist was taken a bath? A mouthful of old blood spurted out! What the hell?

Chapter 4: Poison Bi took over the girl's carriage without any precautions and slept with her poisoned arrow? ? ? The knight didn't understand, but the girl understood a little. . . .

The protagonist did not use the signature three-ring fireball spell in the battle at the beginning of the novel, which means that he is not level 5, but at most level 4, and the cavalry can charge at full speed less than 200 meters away in less than a minute. It is simply a fantasy that a level 4 mage can kill more than a dozen fully armed cavalry in such a short time. What idiot player would choose a warrior with such a fierce force? Does anyone really play this kind of game?

The protagonist travels with characters from the game world. After rescuing people at the beginning, he unsuspectingly fell asleep in a woman's carriage. He was also given a bath, which was a little poisonous. He tolerated it first, and then the witch gave her a potion of proficiency in languages. Inexplicably, because the witch apprentice said that the witch wanted to drain the child's life, he went to kill the witch. There was no benefit or anything~ This witch was written as a mere tool, and she was afraid that the count would find out. What's the point? ? If the protagonist has an excessive sense of justice, he just wants to eliminate evil, but I really can't feel it between the lines. How much sense of justice can he have after using people to do pharmaceutical experiments? From the author's writing style, it seems like he is writing a rational and real alien story. But it was really poisonous in the early stage, and I couldn't see much wisdom and meaning~ Later, the lord function appeared~ It was so confusing~ I ran away when I saw this In summary, the author's writing style is good, but the witch is really inexplicable and purposeless~ In my image, the caster should be rational, knowing what is needed~how to do it~do it in an orderly, purposeful and planned manner, rather than doing irrelevant things here and there~

After reading Chapter 41, I feel that one of the biggest shortcomings of this book compared to similar popular books is that the strong people in the book do not have the mentality of being strong, and the weak do not have the consciousness of being weak. The weak ones inside don't see any respect or fear for the strong ones. The apprentice and the woman who can curse fire both know that the protagonist is very strong, but they just can't see any fear of the strong ones. They either yell or take the demands of the protagonist as a matter of course. It's embarrassing to watch!

Chapter 4 is too poisonous. Don't tell me what the protagonist is too tired. Why are ordinary people like this? I started talking about the protagonist spending three days in the forest. It's so dangerous. How can the protagonist still have a sense of prevention after spending three days? The witch later is even more poisonous. I really can't stand it anymore. Some comments say that the reader has a God's perspective. The protagonist Experience, this is a novel for readers to see, and it should be based on ideas that readers can understand (I don't mean to ask the author to write according to the readers, at least it must conform to the readers' general ideas, which can be different). After all, novels are for comfort. I wish your novels will get better and better, slip away

What a ridiculous start, I was immediately persuaded to quit in the first chapter! I thought that judging from more than ten years of experience, this book would definitely be a eunuch or a mess!

I was looking for a book and found this one, and it was a bit strange. The book has poisonous points, which is not surprising, but some of them are extremely poisonous. The poisonous points that affect the performance cannot be changed, but if they are changed more rationally without affecting the plot, it will be frustrating. Next Door Holy Light has also completely overturned and rewritten it.

Where has your new book gone? Why has the book "Martial Arts World Playing and Training" been removed from the shelves?

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by the author of Winning Big World

…Does the protagonist have a mental illness? A witch can kill people who have not harmed her in order to take revenge. Filin is intolerable when he performs a sacrificial ritual for strength? There is no doubt that both of them are assholes, but they are treated differently. This level of double standards is comparable to that of the Holy Virgin Bitch.

The protagonist has Mary's disease. NCF should stop using camp shifts to clear the ground. Do you still need someone from the good camp to summon the elements? Not to mention that this incident has never been mentioned in the book.

For the sake of the old author, I couldn't hold on until chapter 50. Did you hire a ghostwriter from Heipao? But the writing style and terms are pretty much the same as before.

At the beginning, the protagonist shouted, but the knights couldn't understand it. Then the protagonist introduced his name to the woman, and the woman could understand it. There must be a bug.

It feels like Bode World was not written by the same person, there are a lot of differences.

Good subject matter, bad writing, the worst book I have ever seen in my life. Retarded protagonist, retarded behavior. A highly toxic article without a doubt.

It was so poisonous that I was afraid that the count would find out if I killed the witch. . Ouch, damn, it's extremely poisonous. By the way, why did you want to kill the witch? It's not a threat to you, so why? Moreover, it's not possible to kill the witch and warn the count and send these babies back? Even the witch killed the fearful count? Very poisonous

It's been almost a month, it's incense

Once the three cards are passed, the cattle will be poisoned directly.

I'm speechless. Why am I missing? Can you come back?

Where is my book? What the hell, the book I ordered disappeared? Get your money back!

It is said that the new martial arts book can be put on the shelves after being revised. Removal and modification

I lost contact directly, but fortunately I remember the author's name

My hair, Wuxia is still being updated? You unblock it!

Absolutely, you haven't been banned from chapters, right? Why do you suddenly do this?

Good guy, this author is a eunuch, but he still subscribes to Qidian every day, and all of them are up to the first v, 86% of the light novels

What happened? Why is the martial arts gone?